That was sweet at the end. Sure a bit on the wild side with the perving, but still...so cute. Great job. I am so glad I stopped by to read this before I went to bed.

 

Tori :)

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review and the 5 star rating.  its always great to hear what people think.

Jacq

Ok, that was both humorous and angsty. I love how she's describing the boys to her friend and how the comments they each made in the supposed privacy of their bathroom, got her to think about her estranged sister. Loved how she just up and hugged and kissed Sam like that. Trying to give him that little bit of comfort. Would love to see another chapter from the boys' point of view.

Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you liked it. I'll think about a follow up.

Jacq

Hey hun

Very clever and quirky...

One thing that's a bit stand off: Dean realizing that J had been watching, I don't think he would grinning. Just because that would mean she over heard all the personal things he said.

I liked it though ;) good read!

I liked the fresh perspective from fresh eyes, though she's such a perv. lol

It was really sweet how she felt dirty for witnessing such a private moment Sam was having!

You damn tease woman! Lol I expected steamy...but no, no naked bodies, no warm water caressing bruised and tawny skin? I'll get over it...

Nice job!

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review, you're right, he would'nt like his feelings overheard. I should have thought about that bit more carefully.

Its good to have this kind of feedback

Jacq