Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 22/09/08 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 5
awh totally cool. loved the hugs bev xx
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You know me, torture the stuffing out of them, but give them a hug too! Hugs (from me) Muffy
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 22/09/08 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 4
I like the flash back, Sam and John always at each other. Anyone would think you don't like John!! bev xx
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I like John well enough, I just don't always see eye to eye with him. Let me put it this way... We have issues :D Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 22/09/08 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 3
Muffy. Oh lovely oozing septicaemia! very nice and Dean is so brave. Love the carrying him to the car! bev xx
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I can't resist a little ooze, you know? It adds a touch of icky realism to the story :D I love it when either brother carries the other *sighs* Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 22/09/08 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 2
Muffy. That's sweet and sad and softly sentimental like it oh and the festering shoulder adds a nice reality bev xxx
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Somehow I think Sam's fester wounds are worse than Dean's in many ways! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 22/09/08 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
muffy. owh crap that's gotta hurt! I wanna go make him feel better! is that ok? can i go? heehee bev xx
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm sure he wouldn't object to a nurse :D Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 22/09/08 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 5
A lovely ending to a wonderful story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked the end, I worry about them so much, because that's what people remember. Thank you again! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 22/09/08 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 5
Wonderful! I loved every chapter of it. Glad the boys finally got to talk! You served them well. Thanks for sharing this with us :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Once or twice I wanted to grab them, shake them and say "talk now!!!!" but I let them get it out of their systems in their own time. LOL Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: cheri (Signed) · Date: 21/09/08 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 5
Great job!!!OMG!!!Love when the boys are worried,scared,hurting; going through all those emotions for each other.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love those moments too. It's just awesome! I think that's what I like best, absolutely best, from the show and fic! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 21/09/08 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 5
Wonderful ending. I'm glad that they finally talked. I enjoyed this story very much. Well done Muffy.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That's one thing I wish there was more of in the show. Talking. I know we'll never see it, but it would be lovely if they could squeak one or two in now and then! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: PyroChilde (Signed) · Date: 21/09/08 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 5
Love it, every single word! "“Sam, trusting you is so much a part of me that it never occurred to me you would think otherwise. I’m sorry. I just never thought about it.” It’s one of those absolute truths. Simple." This may very well be my fav lines from any fic in any fandom that I've ever read. Perfect. Oh, and I love the "nonchick-flick" hug too. Awesome ending, even if Dean is still a bit feverish, lol. -Brandi-
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! *blushing* I'm a litle speechless with your too kind words! Thank you thank you thank you. I loved the non chick flick moment too, it kind of just popped up, Dean does that sometimes! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 21/09/08 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 5
Terrific final chapter all very emotional. Glad you wrote it and shared it, Keep your muse happy and working hard.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed this one! I'm keepingmy muse well fed these days, I'm finishing up my second novel with hopes to get it published soon! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 21/09/08 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 4
Two brilliant chapters. Poor sick Dean and poor guilty Sam. I loved the flashbacks.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love a flashback if it moves the story forward. I think it gives depth to the chapter.! More in a few! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: PyroChilde (Signed) · Date: 21/09/08 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 4
Damn, I hate cliffies! Awesome story. I'm just gonna review all four chapters here, hope you don't mind. I love the flashbacks, excellently written. I also really like that this whole situation has sprung from a misunderstanding. Sam thinks Dean doesn't trust him and Dean thinks Sam is mad and him and that he's protecting his little brother. Those crazy kids will eventually learn that communication is key, lol. "Dean, damn it. That’s it—my heart just gave out." Damn, you're gonna make MY heart give out here. UPDATE SOON!! -Brandi-
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Sorry about the cliffie. I'm possessed by a cliffie demon and he makes me do terrible things! I get frustrated with those two at times, the way that they let something simmer and one word could change everything. Makes me want to smack them! More in just a few! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 20/09/08 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 4
Awesome story so far. Please update again soon..Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like this one! More today! Hugs, MUffy
Reviewer: f250 (Signed) · Date: 20/09/08 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 4
Oh , how could you leave us ,with Dean fighting so hard to live, poor Sam , crying here........lol.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! *sends tissues* I'll make it up to you! I'll post the new chapter in just a sec! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 20/09/08 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 4
Brilliant chapter, it was so sad,emo big time. Please update soon, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love a ittle emotion, if it fits! I'll update very very soon! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 20/09/08 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 4
You're a big meany....cliffies are mean. Hurry with the update.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Sorry about the cliffies! My cliffie demon, is acting up again! More very soon! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 20/09/08 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 3
Absolutely brilliant story so far, I love hurt Dean, Please, please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love hurt Dean too, and I will update soon! Very soon! Is today soon enough? HUgs, Muffy
Reviewer: f250 (Signed) · Date: 20/09/08 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 3
Poor Jared, to know what he has done to his brother Dean, you have to feel sorry for him, Dean will forgive him. A wonderful story, looking forward to your nexts up date.........
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I know Dean will forgive him--I'm not sure he could ever do anything else! I'll update very soon! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 20/09/08 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 3
Oh, Dean finding the note was a killer! I had completely forgotten that the note was stll lying around. I don't usually forget those details either...it's like "ok, NOW he's gonna find the note..." but you distracted me with all that angst, damnit! When Dean was yelling for Sam, I still knew he thought Sam was gone but when Sam saw the piece of paper....tear worthy:0
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so happy I distracted you enough to forget that note! Your review has left the biggest smile on my face! More soon! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 20/09/08 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 3
Oh dear, oh dear, oh dear, this is so not good for the boys. Dean giving in, Sam blaming himself, so not good. Dean hovering on the edge of life and death, I do hope you not planning on leaving him lingering too long. Definitely looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's not good! But I won't let it go one too long! Promise! More very soon! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: pendays (Signed) · Date: 19/09/08 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 3
great will wait for more!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much I'm so glad you're enjoying this one! I won't keep you waiting for long! Promise! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 18/09/08 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 2
Poor Sam, he knew about Dean's wound and he thought that Dean doesn't trust him anymore with his life. I thought for one moment that Sam would leave to protect Dean, I'm glad he didn't, Dean need him. I loved Sam's memory from his childhood, so sweet. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I think Dean's need (or Sam's if the positions are reversed) always comes first. I'll have more tomorrow! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 18/09/08 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 2
hmm, sounds icky. and fun! (for us, anyway...) love the memory, the fear so strong until he finds Sam, the resolution they found then making Sam come back to save the day. if maybe not just yet...
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And yeah a little icky--and oh so much fun! Sam's back to mostly save the day, but as you say, not yet. More tomorrow, hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 18/09/08 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 2
Well thank goodness Sam came back in. Looking forward to the next part.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was a little breathless waiting for Sam, too. Sometimes I think I need to keep a tighter rein on those boys! More tomorrow, hugs, Muffy.
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