Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 16/06/09 03:51 PM · On: So now I'll bleed forever
What a beautiful contrast to Dean's point of view! and yet so much of it is the same. sam gets angry because Dean wants to protect him---their desires and drives are the same. I love the format of this chapter. There were so many observations of Sam's thoughts and feelings that made me ponder. Brilliant job!
Author's Response: I apologize for not responding to this sooner. Thank you so very much for reviewing this story. I'm glad you liked it, and I'm glad you liked the format. That makes it all worth it. <3
Reviewer: supernatgrl13 (Signed) · Date: 28/12/08 01:09 PM · On: So now I'll bleed forever
Very cute! I like the differences in how they view it! very nice!
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 24/11/08 04:06 PM · On: So now I'll bleed forever
GAH JENN!!! YOU STEAL MY HEART! You and Petra paint such vivid pictures with powerful words, and this chapter is making my head hurt. I feel so defeated, made me ache but I had to stop myself from exploding with the last four words. I feel so... lost. Why do you this to me? I'm starting to think it's on purpose. Now I have to pick up the pieces to my heart:( I <3 U Schelz x
Author's Response: Awww my honey! *tapes heart back together* Is it wrong to enjoy breaking your heart? ;-P You're too sweet to me. Really. Thank you SO MUCH for this review, it's made my not-so-awesome day a ton better! *hug*
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 23/11/08 08:08 AM · On: So now I'll bleed forever
Wow, two brilliant chapters,i really enjoyed reading these,well done.
Author's Response: Thank you, darkhunter! I'm glad you enjoyed this story :D <3 Jenn
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 21/11/08 01:50 PM · On: So now I'll bleed forever
Get your dancing shoes on girl. That was good, great even, and finally we know why Sam had to leave Dean for a little while. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you Midge! I appreciate the kind review, and I'm glad to hear you enjoyed this! <3 Jenn
Reviewer: CatzEye (Signed) · Date: 20/11/08 07:09 PM · On: So now I'll bleed forever
Wow! -- This is pretty brilliant, Jenn My Friend! You definitely have a gift -- and I so look forward to reading any further Supernatural stories you deign to bless us all with!!
Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm blushing here... You are awesome, thank you so much for reviewing this.
Reviewer: Shade (Signed) · Date: 20/11/08 06:12 PM · On: So now I'll bleed forever
I love this fanfic and just about jumped in excitement when I saw it updated! Love Sam's pov (it certainly cleared a few things up from Dean's, lol) and I can't get enough of this clever "I feel" format. I can definitely feel everything with how well this is written! Reading this made my already good day even better! Thanks so much and can't wait for the next chapter!
~Shade
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing hun! I appreciate it! I'm glad it made your day :D I'm sorry I forgot to mark it complete! Two chapters from two points of view. Sorry!
Reviewer: copycat666 (Signed) · Date: 16/11/08 12:02 PM · On: Sometimes I can't make it alone
this is just so wonderful , you're a great writer.....I mean that !
Author's Response: you're so sweet! thank you!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 05/11/08 01:06 AM · On: Sometimes I can't make it alone
WOW Jenn! seriously this was great! I was there feeling it all with Dean! The urgency, the pain, the panic...all of it...mission accomplished you have definitely evoked emotion here...I am all teary! you have totally tapped into Dean here! There is nothing I would change... Great job hon! Enjoy the pretty stars I don't give them to everyone!
Author's Response: Gen, you have MADE MY DAY! Thank you so much, seriously, your words mean more than I can express! You felt something! This is the most amazing thing you could have said! *huts pretty stars* <3
Author's Response: I shouldn't be allowed to type sometimes. huts? duh, hugs!
Reviewer: Stacy L (Signed) · Date: 03/11/08 07:27 PM · On: Sometimes I can't make it alone
Wow! Great story! I loved it. Those last three paragraphs, especially the moment he thinks he's all alone and has failed Sam and his dad...poor Dean I just want to hug him. Great work! I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories. Take care! : )
Author's Response: Such a beautiful review! Thank you, very much, and I'm flattered you want to read more of my writing! <3 Jenn
Reviewer: copycat666 (Signed) · Date: 29/10/08 10:35 AM · On: Sometimes I can't make it alone
this was just so beautiful , i nearly cried ..... maybe one day ....in the far future i could write like you ! ( Well at least i hope so ... lots off love from copycat666 and PLEASE keep going ! )
Author's Response: what a beautiful review! I think *I* nearly cried! thank you so much, I'm very happy you've enjoyed this that much! I'm still working on the second half (it's slow going)
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 17/10/08 01:08 PM · On: Sometimes I can't make it alone
Wow. Just... wow. You've got Dean's pathological drive to protect and save Sammy summed up artfully, beautifully. Very, very well done.
Author's Response: Gosh, I've just had a horrible day and I come home to see this beautiful review. Thank you so much for those kind words, and I'm thrilled you enjoyed this. <3
Reviewer: TuckerCat (Signed) · Date: 14/10/08 11:06 AM · On: Sometimes I can't make it alone
I really like the way you have written the story from Dean's POV. I am looking at reading Sam's POV when you have time to write it. I believe it rings true to the boys. Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review! I have a little of Sam's PoV written. I hope to have it up eventually ;D
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 08/10/08 01:26 PM · On: Sometimes I can't make it alone
I know I've read this before, I may even have reviewd it before, but if I have it deserves another, if I haven't I should have. This is really well done, I like the disjointed nature of the rememberances, somehow it fits with how Dean is feeling, confused, in pain and guilty. I would love to read Sam's point of view sooner rather than later.
Author's Response: haha thanks for another great review, Midge. I'm working on Sammy's PoV (as well as a million other things) and I hope to have it to you soon. His will take a little more concentration.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/09/08 06:07 PM · On: Sometimes I can't make it alone
Truly beautiful! I love that Dean's thoughts are in such contrast to what we know Sam is feeling and thinking.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm working on Sam's PoV. I only had a few ideas for it, so we'll see what happens, he's a little harder to write like this! ;D
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 29/09/08 10:43 AM · On: Sometimes I can't make it alone
Lovely...well I mean in a heartwrenching way. Nice one and congrats on the featured! - Kel ;)
Author's Response: Thank you very much, Kel! I was really astonished to see I'd been featured! I've never grinned so wide before! Thank you for reviewing, you don't know how giddy it makes me ;D!!
Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 29/09/08 09:59 AM · On: Sometimes I can't make it alone
omg I love this!! its awesome! soo please update soon!!1 impala
Author's Response: There will definitely be a second part to this story, I promise! It just might take me a while, since I've committed to writing two virtual season episodes for my other fandom! But thank you for taking the time to review, I'm so excited you love it!
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 19/09/08 04:56 AM · On: Sometimes I can't make it alone
I like your way of writing. Its powerful and moving. And I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: You have no idea what it means to me to hear you say those words. "I like your way of writing." Just WOW! Thank you so very much, I will work on the second chapter soon!
Reviewer: cowgirlfromhell (Signed) · Date: 17/09/08 09:24 PM · On: Sometimes I can't make it alone
Very nicely done!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 17/09/08 04:27 PM · On: Sometimes I can't make it alone
OK... this was AWESOME!!!!!!!! Poignant-powerful-painfull-totally overflowing with the love and protection that only the brothers cane give to one another!!!!!!!!OUTSTANDING writing!!! Dean's total focus on taking care of Sammy-EXCELLENT!!!!! You are a great and talented writier-this has a life of it's own!! I feel honored to have read this piece.....thank you. BRAVO!!!!
Author's Response: The grinning is becoming painful, here and I'm squealing, I can't tell you how awesome it is to hear this! And now I'm blushing, you're honored...good gracious, *I'm* honored you took the time to tell me what you thought! <3
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 17/09/08 01:35 PM · On: Sometimes I can't make it alone
So intense and emotional. I was instantly hooked and couldn't turn my head away, even though I was burning up and needed to open a window. Jenn, I love the build up of tension and love how descriptive and real Dean's torment is. I feel so, had a very poetic feel which made it flow so powerfully. Well done on your feature hun ;) Excellent read! Schelz x
Author's Response: I honestly can't explain to you how awesome it feels to read this fabulous review. Thank you SO much for this, I'm grinning so big right now! I'm really happy to have finally made my way over here, it seems like such a GREAT site! <3
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 17/09/08 01:29 PM · On: Sometimes I can't make it alone
Wow. I really loved this. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much :D
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