Reviewer: Micaiah (Signed) · Date: 17/11/09 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 1- Save Him
Interesting story Schelz. I love how Sam needed to be with someone else who loved his brother. So sad.
Reviewer: soncnica (Signed) · Date: 18/07/09 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 1- Save Him
YOU MADE ME CRY!!!! I HATE YOU!!! :'( I loved this...I liked how you made Sam go back to Cassie and I totally understand why and her reaction was what brought out the first tear and then and then....Dean dying and this: "I won't give up, I won't rest until he's back." Sam touched Dean's chain gently. *cries* I love your style of writing and what do you mean you aren't good in details, Missy!? you got in everything that needed to be in this story! this was awesome and *cries* sad! gosh I can't watch NRFTW...I just can't watch that ep! :( DEAN!!!! this was lovely! S.
Author's Response: AWWW *BIG HUG* I'M SORRY!!! I'm so happy that you understood Sam's reasons for going to Cassie, I'm know I should feel bad that her reaction made you cry, but I'm chuffed that I was able to bring emotion out of you. *Squee* It's nice to know you love my style of writing, seriously I think I suck at details but thank you for telling me otherwise, means a lot. Thanks for reviewing, hun. <333
Reviewer: Samcentric Chick (Signed) · Date: 11/01/09 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 1- Save Him
i liked this. i thought the best part was when sam went to see cassie. i loved the idea of him needing her to be broken too. it was heart breaking.
Author's Response: Oh thanks a lot J! I'm really glad you liked the addition of Cassie, I know most didn't like her but this just felt right. Chuffed you understood Sam's need to see her broken too.
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 13/11/08 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 1- Save Him
Oh my gosh Schelz how the frick did I miss this....ok so at the moment I am completely speechless...everything was so amazing and unique about this story. The way you intergrated the song (I love that song btw) and the dialogue from past epi's ahhh, I think that's what made this fic so heart breaking because you were not only reading about Dean's death but also looking back on a time when Dean was alive. I like how it was kinda disorientated with no exact timeline I think that only added to Sam's hysteria and bringing in Cassie (although I never liked her) was a great idea. I enjoyed the logic behind Sam wanting to tell her, it was very emotional to finally understand that Sam was so lost without Dean he desperately needed some one to miss him too gah! So emotional. lol I think I've rambled enough. Truly amazing Schelz Much love - Bex
Author's Response: Ahh Bex, how do I respond? You blow me away, I love how you always give me your understanding of my stories. You really read it and then give me your interpretation...I'm very grateful that you gave this story your time. Chuffed and relieved that you understood Sam's disorientation through my attempt to make it read confusingly. I'm also pleased you were able to look passed not liking Cassie and enjoy the reason she was part of Sam's shattered mind. And thank god! Someone knows and loves the song!!! Awesome song! You could never ramble on, your reviews give me such a boost. Thank you for stopping by. Schelz x
Author's Response: Stars like that hun, give me a big head! lol thnx
Reviewer: RoweenaC (Signed) · Date: 11/10/08 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 1- Save Him
Awh, baby-girl. You did a great job here. Impressive. Glad you told me about it! And I am glad to hear it helped ya to write it. SO glad. Nothing better than an angsty or painful fanfic to turn your life around, is there? I like the jumping between scenes. Portrays the whirlwind of events and emotions very well. Very tough to read and I guess very tough for Sam to live through. Great job, Schelz. GREAT. Thanks for the shout out. Nearly missed this fine piece! ...Sam wanted to know that someone other than himself and Bobby, really loved Dean, and couldn't live with him dead.... I like this idea a lot. That Sam needs someone who loved Dean so he can open up and doesn't have to carry the burden on his shoulders alone. Sharing the pain is diminishing the pain. I am glad he found a person who loved Dean. Tho actually, he could've come to me! I'd have shared the load gladly: Man, I would have. And how I love that dysfunctional SOB Dean Winchester.... hmmm. Hugs ya, Ilka
Author's Response: Wow, lovely stars from my baby-girl! I'm really chuffed that you liked this, I was a tad worried jumping between scenes would hurt the story so I'm glad you got it! So glad you liked the addition of someone else loving Dean, besides Sam. Rats! Why didn't I think of you, I coulda sent him over. ROFL!!! Hugs ya, Schelz x
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 22/09/08 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 1- Save Him
Shelz i love it, it made me shed a bucket load of tears. I love the end part where Sam is really cut up about Dean dying, and refuses to give up until Dean is back in his life. It’s so sweet that Sam thought he was being a bit selfish because he wanted Dean back but when Cassie wanted Dean back too he wasn't feeling guilty. I also like the part when you described Dean was dying because we saw it but you recreated the images. I love that Dean was still trying to be himself, with the consoling smiles and the comfort, even though he must have been scared. The part that got me crying was when Dean was getting torn up by those 'HELL HOUNDS' because Sam was screaming. I like the bit when Sam was shouting at Bobby (I’m not weird) It shows that no matter how much respect he has for his elders, especially Bobby, he loves his big brother too much to listen to anyone at that point. Love Sharky,
Author's Response: Thanks a lot sis! Glad you liked it enough to mention the parts that worked for you, sweetness ;) I was a bit worried that this would be hard to read, so I am pleasantly surprised that most got the state I was trying demonstrate Sam in. Love Schelzx
Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 17/09/08 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 1- Save Him
I like that you brought in Cassie. I liked that character. Good story -- one more day!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much mtee, I liked Cassie's character too. (Don't shoot obssessive Dean fans) lol Glad you liked it...yes, one more day!!! Why am I so excited when I'm not in the states??? Oh yh cause I'm obssessed... ;)
Reviewer: Bugsbunny2 (Signed) · Date: 17/09/08 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 1- Save Him
Oh my god! That is so touching! You nearly had me crying. Well done, you handled Sam's grief really well.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot Bugs! (love the name) Glad you found it touching and even more so that you think I handled the grief well ;)
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 1- Save Him
Wow, this was great! I loved it! The emotion was bursting from the seams. Great job! ~Kayla
Author's Response: It's always a pleasure to know what you think, Kayla. I'm chuffed that you loved this story, so thank you for taking the time to tell me you did! Schelz x
Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 1- Save Him
Great job!! The part about Cassie loving Dean and caring that he was gone made me all teary.....and I'm not even a big Cassie fan!! Excellent story.
Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm glad the addition of Cassie worked out for you even though you're not big on her. I knew it was risky cause she doesn't have many fans. Glad you could it anyway ;) Thanks again x
Author's Response: I hate seeing mistakes after I've replied. I meant to say, glad you could ENJOY it anyway. lol
Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 1- Save Him
Very sad, very intense, very emotional and very awesome. Do I have to say more? I really liked it, because it was just as confused as Sam's mind would be.Great job. Hugs, Vonnie
Author's Response: It's a good feeling to have captured a new reader! You need say no more, what you have said has me grinning from ear to ear. ;) I'm glad it could be sad, intense and emotional and I'm chuffed Sam's confused state didn't confuse you. lol Hugs x
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 1- Save Him
Hi, This is a great read. I like the way it wandered all over the place time-wise, showing how disoriented Sam's thinking is. And I like that he sought out Cassie, who loved Dean because he was Dean, not because he was a Winchester. Sue
Author's Response: Hiya Sue, I'm glad you enjoyed reading this, and appreciated the confused state of my writing, time wise etc. I didn't set out for Cassie to be in it until I realized I wanted to show a need for Dean, besides him being a brother! I'm really glad Sam going to see Cassie worked for you! ;) Schelz x
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing...
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 1- Save Him
Schelz, I love it! and you painted Cassie in a good light; a plus point! and yeah, he's going to bring them back!!!!!! hooray!!!!! *dances with joy*
Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely stars Lyn and andi ;) I'm really glad you liked it and glad I could paint Cassie in a good light! *joins the dance*
Reviewer: Andromeda171 (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 1- Save Him
WOW! All those episode quotes left me in tears What a teaser till the season opener, hun Great as usual 10 stars
Author's Response: Thanks for the stars hun ;) I'm glad the episode quotes worked out well in this story! It's a nice compliment calling this a teaser for the season premiere.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 1- Save Him
That was great.i loved it.
Author's Response: Cheers DH, glad you liked it. I love to get words from you ;)
Reviewer: Barbara_GER (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 1- Save Him
Great great great!! I loved it! – Barbara
Author's Response: Nice to see I captured a new reader ;) I'm really glad you loved the story, thanks for reviewing! Schelz x
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 1- Save Him
Hey hunny, It's wild and quirky and very Schelz! Nice to have you back and posting hun Bev xx
Author's Response: Hey sweet, Thanks for the review Bev! I'm glad this free written idea worked out! Schelz xx
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