Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 29/09/08 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 4
Sammy, the most this thing's ever done is bounce around between random sets of tits." Dean reached across the table and pulled Sam's hand down. - Okay so I have to say hifrickinlarious line...hehehe. Great story and the reoccuring numbers and the people dissapearing are seriously starting to freak me out. - ;) Kel
Author's Response: Hehehhee...thank ya!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 25/09/08 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 3
huh, lots of mysteries... The numbers, the blackout, the town cut off the world, the voices, Sam... I need more!!
Author's Response: Keep your eye on those numbers! Thanks so much for your comments, much appreciated. Laura
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 25/09/08 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 3
Okay, Loving the fact that the town's cut off. And I have to say i'm dying to know just how Sam brought Dean back. Great story - Kel ;)
Author's Response: Ohh.... the great mystery. Thanks for reading and your great comments.
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 25/09/08 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 2
hm.....very cool...Loved the reacurring numbers. Dean nodded, he meant to say no way, grab Sam, drag him to the car and speed out of there doing about ninety. Instead he mutely nodded his agreement. - Great line...moving on ;) Kel
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 25/09/08 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 1
Not good Sam...How much do I wish I'd score the boys offering to change a tire for me....lol. Great opening - Kel ;)
Author's Response: Ya, I keep hoping they'll come change my tires too, but so far, no luck. Oh well. Hehehehe...Thanks Kelly. Laura
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 25/09/08 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 1
what??!! next chapter, now!
Author's Response: Hehhehee...thanks Fredo...glad you are liking it. Laura
Reviewer: Tangled up in blue (Signed) · Date: 24/09/08 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 3
Wow! This is really good. Lots of mystery and you can't wait to see how it will all come together. Keep going and let me know if I can help.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 24/09/08 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 3
OK... 3 chapters an I'm already leaving the lights on......WOW....AWESOME beginning!!!!!!! Grey fog-missing people , no power- Burt Gummer- that's one hell of a combination!!!!!!OUTSTANDING!!!! Sammy's beginning to worry me- there's too much spinning around in his head-who's wispering to him....????????? Mystery-suspense-action-Winchester luck-what more could you ask for in a story. You have painted a true mystery feast with all the trimmings-MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!! BRAVO!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much...hope you enjoy the rest. Laura
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 21/09/08 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 1
Ok Bayre is writing - what do I need? Heart medication!!!!!! OMG Woman - how I love the way you launch the reader right in there in classic horror/thriller style by twisting the familiar events - pretzel style!!!! Sam taking a swan dive ?!!!! Do I need to go back and read your previous story in this series? Love the brotherly banter and Dean's natural ease with kids - spot on as always.
Author's Response: HEhehee...thanks...sorry about the heart. You don't have to read the previous one, it's short and a bit of set up, but not necessary...however, don't let me stop you...lol Thanks so much for the great comments!
Reviewer: cheri (Signed) · Date: 20/09/08 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 2
Wow---that's pretty intense!!! I have no idea where this is going and I love it!!!! Great job!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 20/09/08 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 2
Wow, I just came across this one, it is absolutely creepy. I love it. Wonder what's going on here?What is it with the numbers? Can't wait for more. Hugs, Vonnie
Author's Response: I hope to get to answer all those questions...thanks so much for reading. As for the numbers, we'll see eventually. Laura
Reviewer: sandy (Signed) · Date: 20/09/08 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 2
oh my gosh, this is awesome....keep writing and please don't make us wait too long.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for commenting. I promise to update soon. Laura
Reviewer: cheri (Signed) · Date: 14/09/08 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 1
Well I certainly didn't see that coming---good job!! More please!
Author's Response: Thank you! More coming soon.
Reviewer: Noelani618 (Signed) · Date: 13/09/08 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 1
Ahh, such a cute scene between Dean and Sam at the beginning! And driving on a slippery road in the middle of nowhere only to find a family whose car broke down. Helpful as always and look what happens! Dean, ya can't turn your back on that kid. He just gets into trouble! Going over the cliff...Dean's gonna have another heart attack at this rate! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks Tamara!
Reviewer: supernaturaldh (Signed) · Date: 13/09/08 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was great. I am totally hooked. What is wrong with Sam? Awesome...can't wait for the next chatper. Denise
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading...what is wrong with Sam...the big question..hehehe Laura
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