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Reviewer: rahne (Signed) · Date: 25/01/09 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

Well done. This is just how Sam would undestand and support Dean, even as he blames himself for putting Dean in that position. Even as he hates what Dean did and is angry with him. At this point I don't think either brother has really come yet to understand how truly interdependent they are. I didn't even need to pick nits about spelling or grammar! Wow.

Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 24/09/08 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

i love it when something you think will be small explodes into something else.
i enjoyed this little insight, the small things that were skipped over, the little brotherly assurances that only Sam could understand that Dean needed and only Sam could give. well done.

Author's Response: Thanx

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 21/09/08 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 1

Really nice job, Brandi. I really liked how you had Sam understanding what Dean needed and doing whatever it took to assure his older brother that he was alive and there for him. great oneshot. Bambers;)

Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 17/09/08 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

Well done.
You captured both Sam and Dean's emotions perfectly.

Author's Response: Thanks darkhunter, I'm glad you enjoyed my ramblings.

Reviewer: Nilah (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 1

Well done, Brandi! I think it successfully explored Sam's thoughts at the time. Hoping to read more from you soon.

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 15/09/08 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

Well done!!!!
You have captured Sam's mindset to a tee.
Dean's need to see Sam constantly -his paranoia about losing Sammy-you have it covered. OUTSTANDING writing!!!!
Excellent job!!!!!
BRAVO!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for that shining review :)

Reviewer: justannanow (Signed) · Date: 14/09/08 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

Nice one! You know Dean had to have suffered from seeing Sam die like that and it stands to reason he'd be having nightmares of it all. But he also wouldn't allow Sam to be openly comforting him so Sam would have to do things like this. Really good insight.

Author's Response:
Thanks :) I always figured Sam's a pretty insightful guy and IMO there's no way Dean wouldn't be having nightmares about his baby brother dying in his arms. I could just imagine Sam doing little things like this because he knows that Dean isn't the chick-flick moment type of guy and he'd never admit to needing that comfort. I'm glad you found it plausible.
thanks again,
Brandi

Reviewer: IHeartSam (Signed) · Date: 14/09/08 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

lovely little drabble-i like the use of 1st person narration from sam. you did justice to what i would expect his character's emotions/feelings post ahbl to be. nice job!
-Aliyssa x

Author's Response:
Thanks :) I almost never write 1st person because I find it difficult to do the characters justice. I'm really glad to hear that I got it right. :)
-Brandi-

Reviewer: StrigoiVii (Signed) · Date: 14/09/08 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

Short but sweet, Very to the point. It truly made me feel Sam's pain for Dean's pain, I enjoyed that very much, thank-you.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: rholou (Signed) · Date: 14/09/08 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 1

i think for a little story it's very insightful, great job.

Author's Response: Thanks, I try ;)

Reviewer: janebear (Signed) · Date: 14/09/08 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very nice job. I think you did a great job capturing Sam and Dean's angst and their bond.
Thanks for sharing with us and for sharing your great talent.
Hugs to you, Jane

Author's Response:
Thanks Jane, I'm really glad you enjoyed my little drabble. I very much enjoyed writing it and it's a pleasure to be able to post here among so many talented authors.
-Brandi-

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