Supernaturalville
Reviews For Duplicity
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 14/09/08 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 5

Well, you're right, much to short...lol.  But I say that only because I seriously enjoyed it.      Great job and I'll be keeping an eye out for more of your work - Kel ;)



Author's Response: It was indeed too short. I love to write long plotty fics and I had a deadline for this one. But I'm glad that you enjoyed it anyway and opefully anything else in the future you may read will be as satisfying. Thanks again :)

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 14/09/08 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 4

Hungry?" He forced another gleaming smile. "I'm starving. Nothing like a good conk to the head to give you the munchies." He rubbed his hands together, ignoring the little voice in his head that insisted on not feeding them after midnight. "Any takers?" - Ha....absolutely LOVE the nod to gremlins, talk about movie classics...hehehe.  Okay so sixteen Sam's and not a Sammy in the bunch...so not good. Still enjoying this one - Kel ;)

Author's Response: I'm glad people caught the Grelims remark. I loved that movie as a kid :)

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 14/09/08 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 5

thanks for the nice read.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading it :)

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 13/09/08 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 4

ha, excellent the Gremlins reference. Sixteen now, this is really creepy...

Author's Response: Thank you! And yay for Gremlins. Awesome flick :)

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 13/09/08 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 4

And here comes the creepy! multiple evil Sam (just how many changes of clothes does the guy have, anyway? and is his duffle turning into the tardis?)

thinking Dean needs to figure it out quick...



Author's Response: Thanks! I imagine it would be quite stuffy in that hotel room by now LOL

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 3

He couldn't have gotten the Double Mint Twins. Instead, he got two rejects from the Village of the Damned. - HA...lol.  Four Sams, well heck that can't be good.... - Kel ;)

 



Author's Response: *grins* Thanks. Too bad we couldn't get four Sams on the show.

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 1

Is this turning into a game of 'how many Sams can you fit in one motel room'? he he - lovin' it!

Your freaky is excellent, well-written dialogue, just a touch of hurt amid the humour for contrast (and hey, who among us sadists doesn't go weak at the knees at the thought of a mildly concussed Dean?) and a hint of something darker twitching underneath it all...

Great!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I was really going for a blend of humor and hurt with some underlying darkness, so I'm glad it's coming through :)

Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 3

If they keep dividing does that mean we can have one each! lol

Jacq



Author's Response: LOL I wish huh? ;)

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 3

no way! Excellent, lol, more!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 2

lol, interesting, but two Sams may be too much, even for Dean!  Looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you continue to enjoy.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 2

Okay, hands down best dialog I've read in a bit...Loved this : Sure, he could barely stand on his own and the room kept going swish, but there was no way in hell he was getting any closer to Twiddle Dee and Twiddle Dum until he figured out what was going on.

Hehehe, only complaint? Chapters are too short...lol.  Thanks for the read - kel



Author's Response:

Oh thanks! Yeah, the chapters are on the shorter side. That displeases me even as the writer, but the story overall isn't as long as my usual plotty fics are.

I'm glad you are enjoying it so far :)

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 1

HA!...well, wasn't expecting that.  Very cool first chapter.  I look forward to more. - Kel ;)

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 2

Two against one, how will Dean cope!

look forward to next chapter

Jacq



Author's Response: Thanks! I'll get it posted soon.

Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 1

Double Sam, Double trouble. good start

Jacq

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 1

oops - double Sammy = double trouble? heh heh, could be all kindsa fun... but poor Dean's gonna be in for a rough time!

And yes - CREEPY demon, and CREPPY doublemint!Sammy!



Author's Response: *grins* Thanks. I hope you end up liking it.

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 10/09/08 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

HA! I like it.

Can't wait for more. 



Author's Response: Thanks!

You must login (register) to review.