Supernaturalville
Reviewer: copycat666 (Signed) · Date: 18/11/08 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 2

great , and so catching its like watching TV and not missing the pictures at all !

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like this one!

Huge hug, Muffy

Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) · Date: 16/11/08 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 2

Ah. Wow. I really like this. You depicted the situation very well in this situation, I thought. I like your writing style, too. Very nice.

 



Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much! I love this story, it's fast moving up the list of my favorites! Thank you again for reading and reviewing!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 16/11/08 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 2

You've captured the relationship between the brothers perfectly!  While I read the story I could envision it in my head.  Beautiful job!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Once or twice while writing this I "heard" them in my head, they are so helpful sometimes! Thank you again for reading and reviewing!

hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 16/11/08 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wonderful!  I love how you cut to the chase with Dean's symptoms and his patented 'I'm fine' response even when he's far from it!  And the part with Dean laughing everytime Velma said jinkies was too funny!

This is the first story written by you that I've read and now I'm hooked.  don't be surprised to see me popping up everywhere now.  ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you are liking this one! I love it when a story just flows out of me, and this was one of those. Dean's "I'm fine" drives us all nuts, doesn't it. I fully excpet someday for Sam to find him missing a leg and Dean will hop up and say "I'm fine, I have another."

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: copycat666 (Signed) · Date: 29/10/08 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 1

 This is so great ! I love you're story's and you are the one that got me interested in logging in to this site.

You're mind is that off a true writer , i cant wait to read more ....

Lots off love from copycat 666



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! *blushing* I hope you like the rest!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 24/10/08 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 2

This was an intreging outfit of war and I loved it thank you.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I' so glad you liked this one! It's one of my favorites, and I'm still toying with teh idea of a sequel.

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 24/10/08 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 1

I do hope SAM could call Bobby first before doing anything. That would be safe. This is getting more anbd more of an intense story. Thank You !!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Calling Bobby would have been a good idea... I'm not sure Sam is going to be that smart!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: moni9576 (Signed) · Date: 08/10/08 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 2

How does Sam know he is going to die? Is that in another story that you wrote? 

I just loved your story!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Actually it is in an upcoming story. I hope to get to very soon!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: Ebbtide (Signed) · Date: 08/10/08 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 2

You rock!:D. Great story. ;). Lovely writing style...I love the brother dynamic in your story. :). Unique, while holding true to the characters attitudes and life-outooks. :).



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Hearing I stayed true to the chracters is about the higest compliment I can think of! Thank you again, so very much!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: Ebbtide (Signed) · Date: 08/10/08 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 1

You are one very, VERY TALENTED writer. Loved reading this story!! Great two shot. :D.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much *blushing* I'm so glad you enjoyed this one! I love the way it turned out!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: Nana56 (Signed) · Date: 04/10/08 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 2

This little fic was a very pleasant surprise. Everything a girl could ask for. :D  And they ended up in a nice room, too!

Well done, sis! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I think sometimes they deserve a nice room. And really, off season, nice rooms can be had fairly cheap! I'd just like to know how Sam got the money... Hmmm.... There might be a story there somewhere!

Huge hug, Sis
muffy

Reviewer: Silverot (Signed) · Date: 28/09/08 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 2

“You aren’t going to turn evil. No darkside for Sammy, got it?” That was the best line of this wonderful story! Thanks for writing it!! I love the descriptions of the landscape, absolutly beautiful!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I wanted a real feeling of "place" in this one! I love that line. It was one of those Dean just said as I was writing, and I stand by it! No darkside for our Sam!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: RoweenaC (Signed) · Date: 25/09/08 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 2

Muffy, I love this one! Such a good thing. Short but very colourful. Deep thoughts and a brilliant Sam perspective. Of course a little Hurt!Dean is always welcome, hehe.

 Cheers, Ilka



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Ilka! This is one of my favorites, one of those that wrote itself! I do plan a sequel, Sam explaining to Dean why he knows...

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: maria noel (Signed) · Date: 17/09/08 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 2

You caught me from the very first word. excellent job hunni. I really love this chapter..i even cried a bit.

So gonna start reading all your stuff right now.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked this one. It's one of my favorites. I hope you enjoy some of my others as well. There is a mixed bag of stuff to choose from!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: maria noel (Signed) · Date: 17/09/08 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, love it so far. Great plot, great botherhood moments, nicely writen.

Black spots? that´s new for me....will keep reading now



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so glad the boys come throug, it's always a challenge! I love the idea of black spots. I came across them while chasing another line of research. I thought it would be perfect for a Supernatural story!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 17/09/08 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 2

wow - was waiting for this to finish before i read it (and then missed it! Dammit!) but it's a hell of a 2-shot! Demented as ever...

but what did Sammy do when Dean got hurt back then? that ain't a hint you dropped, its a freaking sledgehammer!

great read - again! - thanks!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked this one! I am a little demented and I think it's getting worse. Sometimes I shake my head at myself!

What did Sam do back then? Well... I plan on writing that as soon as I wind up De Miraculis. A scene came to me... I wrote it and will flesh it from there. Sam... Oh dear...

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 2

Excellent story. I love Sam kicking ass, and there just never seems to be enough of it to read!! loved it. Bambers;)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Sam kicking ass is my favorite Sam. I'm not sure why, but I love it when he is the one out there fighting for his brother.

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 1

very cool beginning to this story!! I just loved the idea of the dark spots. Very well done, and very well deserving of a feature spot!! Bambers;)

Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much! I love to collect little bits of lore and this one has been with me for awhile. I was so surprised and humbled to discover this was a featured story! It's such a wonderufl honor!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 2

nice one Muffy, enjoyed it and once again have to thank Kwater for sending me over...

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked this one! It popped into my head pretty much all there, thse are always the best, I think!

HUgs, Muffy

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 1

Sam, time to be the warrior Dean needs. Like it, roll on to chapter two...

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Yep, time to be the warrior we all know you are, Sam! I love Warrior Sammy. He'll be back ion the sequel to this one!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: Lenny (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 2

Excellent story. I really liked the way you had Sam taking such care of Dean. Loved the line about Sam knowing if Dean died he'd be alone, even around othe people.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I love Sam taking care of Dean. And it just felt right, Sam being alone without Dean, even with Bobby or anyone else.

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: Lenny (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 1

Good story. You write the characters very well. I can imagine Dean and Sam saying some of the lines on the show. Looking forward to reading the next part. 

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Having someone say I have the characters down is the absolute highest compliment I can think of! THANK YOU!!!

hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: Fenrees (Signed) · Date: 08/09/08 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 2

I just wanted to say, that I've read this story twice now:P lol, I 've read several of your other stories as well, and I love the way you write, and hope you keep doing for a long time.

Fenrees:)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so happy it stands up to a repeated reading! I do worry... I hope to keep writing for a very long time! I'm madly trying to get a major work published, and once that happens I intend to happily divide my time between my original stories and fanfic!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 08/09/08 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 2

excellent job!!!  I really enjoyed that!  You told a great story in just 2 Chapters.  Loved hurt!Dean and protective!Sam.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed this one! It's one of those that popped in pretty much fully formed. I like the challenge of writing a story in one or two chpaters, it's a good way to stretch the old muscles!

HUgs, Muffy

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 07/09/08 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 2

That was a beautiful story. I loved all of the brother moments in it. Thanks so much for writing. 

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I love the moments between the boys, and this one flowed so beautifully, it was almost like they were just sitting here tellimg me the story!

Hugs, Muffy

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