Reviewer: Spook (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 7
Poor Sam and Dean. And poor John it seems everyone is out to get revenge on him. Nice story can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work :)
Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks for th review. John doesn't make friends with a lot of people does he? He will get his chance to fight back soon. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 6
What a bitch that Abby is! I hope she gets everything she deserves, and if Jake is in on it too, I hope he gets it too times two!
Author's Response: Hi Midge Abby is a bitch but she may prove a useful one. As for getting what she deserves? She might. Thank you for the review Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 7
Great chapter, i really enjoyed getting to know more about the bracelets.
Author's Response: Hi dh Thanks! Only one more back chapter and then we can get on with rescuing the boys. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 4
very good job keeping me on the edge of my seat wondering what is going t happen next...poor sam and dean, how much more can they take?? bambers;)
Author's Response: Hi there Thank you, I'm glad that you are liking this, I've been very bad to Sam and Dean in this and I'm afraid it ain't over yet. Cheers and thank you for the review. Mary x
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 3
phew, nice little respite in the beatings...awesome tension and intrigue!! I am wondering about these bracelets now and what they are used for...excellent job!! bambers;)
Author's Response: HI Both the boys and me needed a break in this. I hope you like the idea behind the bracelets when you get to it. Thanks so far for the great reviews. Cheers mary x
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 02:28 AM · On: Chapter 2
very intense and brutal, you made me cringe with the beatings with the whip...damn, i hope you leave enough of them left to be healed...right now i am worried that you are treading too close to the point of no return with the viciousness of all these beatings and torture...moving on to the next chappy!! bambers;)
Author's Response: Hi there It is a bit, my thinking thought is it is the other brother that is hearing it so perhaps in their head it seems worse? Glad you like the start hope the rest can live up to it. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wow, brilliant start. real edge of my seat reading, an' I don't usually say that. Keep up the awesome writing!! Bambers;)
Author's Response: Hello there That was strange. I'd just finished reading your update on darkness and here you are reading my story. I've very nervous now 'cos I really like your story, hope mine can live up to it's start! Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 6
Great Chapter! Can't wait for more. Have a good weekend.
Author's Response: Hi Thanks, glad you like! More up as soon as. Cheers for the review and hope you have a good weekend too! Mary x
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 6
It's just impossible for you to disappoint me! Every chapter only makes this story better! ~Kayla p.s. I like your name too! :D
Author's Response: Hi Kayla No pressure there then eh?? lol Hope I can keep it going! A little back story for the next few chaps before we go forward again. Thanks for sticking with it and the review. Mary x
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 6
Great update' Abby's a real bitch lol. Enjoy your weekend.
Author's Response: Hi dh Glad you enjoyed it! She is kinda isn't she? But she will be useful later on. Thanks for the review and I aim to! Mary x
Reviewer: pendays (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 6
love it ! will be waiting for more!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, more is on its way! Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: audbod4u (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 1
Okay you've got me hooked, roll on Chapter 2! See ya Sunday
Author's Response: Hello Miss Craig, I hope you enjoy the rest! It's really off putting you know having your best friend read your work, better be nice to me, you know that I cry easily!! Need to teach you the star system though!! See ya Mary x
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 6
Great chapter, what has been done to Dean? can't wait for the next one up
Author's Response: Hi Maureen Thanks! Dean is in major trouble but then when isn't he in my stories!! Next one will be up tomorrow! Thanks again, Mary x
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 04:59 AM · On: Chapter 6
I am loving this story more with each chapter. Poor Dean being made to pay for his fathers sins again. waiting eagerly for your next update
Author's Response: Hi Amethyst! Thank you so much! What a nice review! I'm glad that you are enjoying this, bits of it are fun to write! Hope you keep enjoying the rest. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 6
That was a great chapter..I didn't realize I was to the end..Poor Dean..I don't like Abby..Looking forward til tomorrow..Thanks for writing..Have a good weekend out :)
Author's Response: Hi there Gosh that was quick, I hadn't even finished replying to the reviews from the last chapter! I think you are a lurker M!! lol. Abby is a nasty piece of work but she is messing with John Winchester! Thanks I will, day out with girls, can't wait!! Cheers Mary xx
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 5
interesting update can't wait for more
Author's Response: HI Thanks, I always think back stories are funny things, so glad you enjoyed this one.
Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 10/09/08 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 5
I just read the first 5 chapters of your story. It is a great read so far! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hi there Thanks for dropping by and I'm glad you like this. Next chapter is up, hope you enjoy it. Thanks again Mary x
Reviewer: gew (Signed) · Date: 10/09/08 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 5
Good chapter. I can't wait to find out more about the bracelets. I hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Hi there There is a little bit of back story still to come, glad you are enjoying this. Thank you again for reviewing. Take care. Mary xx
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 10/09/08 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 5
Another great update! As always, can't wait for the next one! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Hey Kayla (I love your name by the way!) Glad you are liking this, I hope it continues to please. Cheers and thanks again, Mary x
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 10/09/08 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 5
Thanks for the cushion Smudge.Didn't need it for this chapter, but will hang on to it for the future. I found the back story as interesting as the current day story. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: HI there. You might need it for a few bits of 6 & 7! Glad you liked the back story, there is more of it to come in CH7. Thanks, Mary xx
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 10/09/08 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 5
The bracelets sound really awful. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Hi dh! Glad you are still enjoying, the bracelets aren't very nice at all and they are about to come into play big time. Thanks for the review, cheers Mary x
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 10/09/08 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 5
I've been looking for this update..and it didn't disappoint..The bracelets sound terrible. Can't wait until your next update..Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Hi Mustang Glad you liked the bracelets, the story is slow coming together, there are few twists and turns still to work out. Sorry there was delay getting this on but I wanted to make sure the next few chapters all ran together smoothly. Thanks again, take care, Mary x
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 10/09/08 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 5
this story has me hooked. The whole bracelet gig is really creepy! You did a good job with Daniel's boys. Matthew is very likeable and Luke is still a mystery...you couldlike or hate him but we don't have enough information about him yet. The one scene where John tells Dean about the Shrtiga attack was excellent. Poor Dean! and John almost felt guilty:D More torture now????
Author's Response: Well hello there. Thank you, I hope you didn't like Matthew too much. *evil laugh* 'cos you might not by the end of ch6!! I needed Luke to be ill (I will explain later) and I was watching SW and it seemed like a good idea, glad you liked. Glad you like the bracelets! Thanks again. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 08/09/08 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 4
Another great chapter! Thanks for updating this so fast! But I need another! I am obsessed with this story! ~Kayla
Author's Response: HI Kayla Thanks for the review, glad you are obsessed, hope I can keep you that way 'til the end. CHeers again, Mary x
Reviewer: gew (Signed) · Date: 08/09/08 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 4
Good chapter. Poor Sam and Dean. I looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: HI there Thank you so much, I now I'm very evil but I will get better I promise! Glad your enjoying it, Mary x
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