Reviewer: L4LoveLosser (Signed) · Date: 15/09/08 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 9
Ahhh! I've fallen behind and I finally catch up and THIS is what you leave me with!!!!! AHHHHH!!! Not cool! I can't wait until tomorrow.... I truly love this story ALTHOUGH I don't approve of the evil cliffie *scoffs*. I hope the boys get better and John DOESN'T have to choose...I say we choose Jake, Abby, Luke, and Matthew to die...sounds good to me. Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Hi L4 That was a bit of bad timing there, but the next chapter is up now. Sorry but the evil cliffie would still have been evil even if I'd taken it down a few lines extra. I couldn't resist! Hope you like the next chappie. Thanks for the review and the kind words, cheers Mary x
Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 15/09/08 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 9
Evil Cliffie--hate'em!!!! Can't wait to see what kind of trick John has up his sleeve to get them out of this.
Author's Response: Hi there! I was just doing my replies as you put this on!! I know but cliffies and just soo much fun to write, they really are. John, trick?? Maybe and maybe a little luck too?? Nervous now about the next chapter hope you all like how this resolves or I'll cry!! Thanks Mary x
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 15/09/08 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 9
must we wait until tomorrow???!!!
Author's Response: HI GTS Sorry but it's not long to go now! Although you might not like it when it gets here...but hopefully you will!! lol Thanks and cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 15/09/08 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 9
Great chapter, but why did you have to stop there can't wait for the next one. Update soon.
Author's Response: Hi Maureen SORRY! I couldn't resist it, but it might have been worse if I'd have finished the sentence...you never know. Update on tomorrow soon as...promise x Thanks Mary x
Reviewer: shattershockred (Signed) · Date: 15/09/08 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 9
Guh-huh!!!! What a cliff hanger! Truly evil!
Author's Response: Hi there Well thank you, I just couldn't resist I had my little evil muse was chittering in my ear the whole time I was posting this, but if I'd have finished the sentence it might have been worse!! *evil laugh* Cheers Mary xx
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 15/09/08 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 9
Still rivetted and loving the rapid updates. I don't expect Matthew, Luke, Jake or Abby to survive much beyond the next chapter but am no closer to guessing how you're gonna get the bracelets off Sam and Dean without killing one or the other. Looking forward to tomorrows update.
Author's Response: Hi there Hmmm...you maybe suprised there!! Part of the explaination is in the next chapter but I haven't decided whether to play nice yet or add another little teeny twist!! *hehe* Thanks for the review, cheers Mary x
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 15/09/08 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 9
No no no how could you leave it there,you are evil lol. I can't wait for tomorrow.
Author's Response: Hi dh Sorry the last word/few words were there but my little evil muse kidnapped them and dragged them off to CH10 just as I hit 'Add Story'. I gave it a row! lol. Hope you like what happens next, I'm back in cliff hanger heaven! Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 15/09/08 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 9
NOOOOOOOO! CRUEL, EVIL CLIFFE! Well Done, PLEASE, PLEASE don't take too long to update.
Author's Response: Hi there I don't think sorry is quite good enough is it and CH10 is worse, believe me!! I'll update asap in the morning. (UK) Until then sleep tight! Thanks for the review, cheers Mary x
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 15/09/08 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 9
Is it tomorrow yet?..lol..Awesome update..Damn will John actually choose one of them..Can't wait to read more. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Hi there Not quite yet it's 23.09 here in the UK as I update my replies but only a few more hours and CH10 will be here!! Does John choose?? Well this is one of my stories so....*hehe* Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 14/09/08 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 8
damn, not Sam with a bracelet on, too!! this does not look good for either Winchester at the moment. Looking forward to seeing how you get the boys out of this. Bambers;)
Author's Response: Hi Bambers Kinda had to happen, tried not to telegraph it too much but it was always heading that way, wasn't it? One more chapter and then the reveal!! Thanks for the reviews, cheers Mary x
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 14/09/08 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 8
Can't wait to see how you get Sam and Dean out of this..I liked the back story..You explained everything very well..So glad I didn't have to wait to long to read this update (borrowed a monitor..lol..) Looking forward to more. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Hi there Neither can I!!! Just joking! Thanks, back stories I never like 'cos I'm always worried that I don't put in something that really needs to be there but I think I covered everything in this own. Glad you got a monitor, beg, steal or borrow always works for me! Thanks for the review, cheers Mary x
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 13/09/08 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 8
Just becaue the cliffe was expected doesn't mean I have to like it.!*pouting profusely*
Author's Response: Er, If you didn't like Ch8's I will apologise now for CH9s!! Think it may raise more than a pout, remember I've got delicate ears!! lol It's all finally starting to tie in, enjoy. Cheers and thank again Mary x
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 13/09/08 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 8
You are such a talented writer. Every time I read a chapter, I get more and more obsessed with this story. Please don't leave Sammy and Dean in all this pain! Hurry with the next update please! ~Kayla
Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you ever so much, I try. I'm glad that you like this, obsession is always good. Sam and Dean just have a little bit longer to wait until their fate is revealed. Hope you like were it goes. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 13/09/08 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 7
I can't believe it...stupid demon and its stupid bracelets hurting Dean. Great job! ~Kayla
Author's Response: HI I could almost hear you saying this in my head, made me laugh. Don't worry the end is in sight, just a few chapters left to go. Hope you like were it heads. Cheers and thanks Mary x
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 13/09/08 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 8
Great update. Really looking forward to the next part.
Author's Response: HI dh It's on as we speak, hope you like! Thanks for the reviews and the support, cheers Mary x
Reviewer: pendays (Signed) · Date: 13/09/08 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 8
will be waiting for the rest!! cant wait till john finds them.
Author's Response: Hi there Next chapter is up and John has his boys, all he has to do now is work out how to save both. Thanks for the review and the stars! Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 13/09/08 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 8
you've got nothing to be worried about, that chapter was excellent. Goodness John is hardcore though isn't he?If Dean knew what he had done to save him, he would be eaten up with guilt. have a great weekend, looking forward to your next update.
Author's Response: Thank you Amethyst, I did like what John did, I knew me had to but I didn't like it, but John is hardcore really, as an ex-marine he'd really have to be I think. Dean wouldn't have be crushed if he's known what had happened so I thought better not to tell and Dean unlike Sam wouldn't have been so likely to ask. Glad your still enjoying this, cheers Mary x
Author's Response: Sorry not sure if this is even in english!! Blame tiredness, I did off course mean that I didn't like what John had to do, and Dean would have been crushed.!! Lack of sleep, never good!! Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 7
Thanks for the next chapter. I really enjoyed more of the background story to this demon/bracelets..
Author's Response: HI there Glad you enjoying the back story, I was a little bit aprehensive about it, so glad you think it's ok. Thank you for the review. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 7
guh...this so doesn't sound good for Sam and Dean if there is no way to get those dang bracelets off of them. Looking forward to seeing what you have up your sleeve as to how you are gonna rescue them from this. awesome storytelling, you have me hooked!! bambers;)
Author's Response: Hi Things aren't looking good for the boys are they? I have an out for the Winchesters, it's hiding in the story somewhere! Thanks for all the reviews, I'm glad your hooked! Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 6
oh so not good that they put this bracelet on Dean. Damn, poor John, you are really putting him through the emotional ringer on this one!! awesoe job!! bambers;)
Author's Response: Hi Bambers I've been horrid to John in this one, but its kinda fun! Thank you for the review and the awesome! Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 7
Your updates are wonderful. I get to read a new chapter each morning before work. Yeah!
Author's Response: HI GTS Glad I could make your morning! I usually try to read any reviews at work, cheer up my miserable day! Thanks for the review and take care. Cheers Mary xx
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 7
Those bracelets are just evil, what does Abbey want them for?Poor John has already had to save Dean from them once and now he's got to save Sam as well.
Author's Response: Hi The bracelets are nasty aren't they? Abby has a few secrets yet to be revealed. John is gonna have a decision to make, just need to read on to find out what!! Thanks for the review. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 7
This chapter was beautifully writen..Man those bracelets are horrible. Hopefully I will be able to read this tomorrow, but if not i'll read it Sunday when I go to work...crazy monitor at home is dead..urg..lol..anyways I like how you wrote John in this chapter..Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Hi there Mustang Thank you ever so much, I liked John in this one to, mad and angry and then a little tender moment with his boy. He's not gonna be the same person in the next chapter though! Hope your monitor gets sorted! Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 7
Thanks for the warning, but I'm not sure the cushion made much different. Your description of how the braclets work sent shivers up and down my spine especially when you add in the way they burrow into the skin. Yuck. How on earth is John going to fix this? especially as I'm sure you're going to put the other braclet on Sam despite Bobby being their with him. Your rapid posting of updates is much appreciated and I hope they continue, but do enjoy your weekend away.
Author's Response: HI there Sorry this next chappie is a bit yucky too! You guessed my cliffie for ch8! But that's ok, it really had to happen didn't it. John is very resourceful you know! I will try to keep up the pace of the updates, I'm very inpatient so I know what its like to sit eating my nails waiting for the update to post to a story. Thanks for the review. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: tomash (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 7
Wow, loving this story, another great chapter. K.
Author's Response: Hi there Thank you so much, hope you enjoy the rest! Cheers and thanks again Mary x
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