Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 19/09/08 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 13
Great chapter. I thought John and Sam were going to have a huge arguement lol. Is it time to get rid of nasty Abby ?
Author's Response: Thanks I didn't want the to get too into it, I mean John had just got Sam back from the brink of death so I lat him back down off that one. Abby. I hate Abby in more ways than one, I had an idea of what I was gonna do with her but I really just want to kill you. Will have decided by CH15 promise!! Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 19/09/08 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 13
Another great chapter.I love the way you handled John and Sam rehashing the shtriga incident from so many years ago. This story is gettng better and better. Hope working the weekend isn't too tedious and will be waiting for baited breath for chapter 14.
Author's Response: Hi there Thanks, I always want someone to have a go at John about that, Sam was the perfect person. I hate working weekends, thankfully it's only ever second one. Hope you like CH14, cheers Mary x
Reviewer: pendays (Signed) · Date: 18/09/08 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 12
will be waiting for the rest!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks I promise not to keep you too long! Cheers Mary xx
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 18/09/08 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 12
Nice update without any evil twists for a change.Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: HI there Thank you. Evil muse is sitting in a huff in the corner 'cos it can't see S4 for ages! Will slap the huff out of it and get it back to work. update on as soon as. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 18/09/08 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 12
Great update. Looking forward to catching up with Dean. I'm also in a bit of a sulk today, 4 months seems ages away lol.
Author's Response: Hi Dh Thanks, will update on Dean next. There's all this chat on the site about the premiere and I want to scream. I'm still sitting here reading stories to get my Supernatural fix at 1am and keep my mind off the fact that it'll be on soon and I won't see it for another 4 months. Ah well just need to torture the boys some more til then! Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 18/09/08 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 12
another awesome chapter.....Daniel being able to finally take his boys home is a nice touch.
Author's Response: Hi there Thanks, a little gentle chapter in a sea of angst! I really wanted Daniel to get his boys back after all he did kinda ok John saving Dean. cheers Mary xx
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 18/09/08 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 12
I liked this chapter..Glad Daniel can bury/burn his sons now and have some closure..I am so excited that tonight is the premiere..All I have to do now is to fall asleep and not think to much about it..lol..I hope you get to see it as soon as possible..Loving the story..Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: HI there, Glad you liked it, I wanted Daniel to stay a good guy and get his boys back. Just a few more pieces to the story to go, can't concentrate though at the moment.....I want to see the premiere too. *major huff* A morning of internet trawling ahead I think, after I finish and post the next chapter of course...if I can last that long!! lol Hope it was good. *sobs* Cheers Mary xx
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 17/09/08 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 11
Uh, this is so not good...not good at all! Poor Dean, all possessed by the red eyed demon! Another stupendous chapter. Thanks for sharing this awesome treasure! ~Kayla
Author's Response: HI Kayla Wow, thanks for the remarks here, awesome treasure is a lot to live up to, hope the rest does! It means a lot that so many people are reading and liking this and it has had a ton of reviews which is so cool! Thank you so much again. Cheers Mary xx
Reviewer: pendays (Signed) · Date: 17/09/08 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 11
love the story first one i read when i get home everyday!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: HI pendays Thanks! Glad that this is first on your list of reads, I love when you see a story that you like waiting there for you after a long day, cheers me up too. Hope you enjoy the rest, cheers Mary xx
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 17/09/08 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 11
Great chapter, you've saved Dean I think but you've done something worse to him, Who will save him from the demon that's now inside him? Next chapter up soon Please!
Author's Response: Hi Maureen Your review has taken me to the coveted century mark so thank you very much. Hey Dean's alive but possessed, so John and Bobby still have a little work to do. Ch13 will have more Dean in it! Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 17/09/08 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 11
Awesome Chapter! Can't wait to read how Abby got away and what is going to happen to Dean.
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review and the awesome! More about Abby and Dean in the chapter after the next one. (I think!) Glad your still enjoying this. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 17/09/08 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 11
Oh you evil woman, another nasty twist. Just keep the updates coming and all may be forgiven.
Author's Response: Hi Midge Couldn't let it be as easy as just getting the bracelets off you know, that would never have done! Updates will hopefully be fast until the weekend and then I'm working! *sob* Thanks for the review. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 17/09/08 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 11
No need to worry about this chapter,it was outstanding. I'm looking forward to the next part, lot's of trouble to come.
Author's Response: Hi there Thank you, outstanding is praise indeed. *big smile* Next part is a little lull before the storm! Hope you like. Cheers Mary xx
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 17/09/08 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 11
I just love the way you write, thanks for an awesome chapter.
Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so much! I always worry as a story goes on that it may get too hard to follow or I'll loose the plot somewhere so I'm glad you are still enjoying this. Thanks for the kind words they're appreciated, cheers Mary xx
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 17/09/08 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 11
Don't worry about this chapter it was awesome...Dean's in a whole new kind of trouble now..Can't wait to read more of it..Thanks for writing..
Author's Response: Gosh that was quick! The chapter drove me mad. I wrote it, liked it, almost posted it and then tore it to shreds and started again, hence the delay in it actually going up. I really wanted John to torture the heck out of Matthew but there just wasn't the time. Dean is in a little spot of bother for now but I have a plan! Thanks for the review!! Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 10
The book better save the boys! That vision wasn't cool....not at all! I couldn't even imagine what John would do to Matthew if his boys died! Keep up with the amazing and fantastic work! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Hi Kayla The book will have an effect just maybe not what you are all hoping for. I liked the vision, thought it was kinda sweet the Dean was willing to go with Sam, not that I'd let them go though. No,no, no. Matthew and John get to settle their issues next! Thanks Mary x
Reviewer: L4LoveLosser (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 10
Ya know what, I need to have a talk with your evil muse....just a talk... Yay! A possibly dangerous book that'll probably end with disaster, BUT will hopefully in the end bring something good! That's always something that's needed. Although I hope Abby doesn't get away just so she can pay...muwahahaha...uh I mean... I hate your last little comment...not in the next chapter?! Gosh, you can at least give me some false hope! Well anyway, I love the story and I love your writing. And this chapter was evil, yet good....EVIL, but good. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: My little evil muse is scared of you lot do you know that and its a Dean muse - normally scared of nothing! Hope you like the book explaination and how it works out! Well how most of it works out! Abby is out but not away yet, I have plans for this little lady. Evil is good, glad you think its evil that's were I was heading, more evil to come? perhaps! Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 10
You did that so well, I love that you didn't make John choose, and Sam and Dean walking off together, thats just so sad. Thank goodness you don't do death fics!
Author's Response: HI I just couldn't make John choose 'cos deep down I knew that he wouldn't. But I was tempted, just for a little while! The ending was a little sad wasn't it. But at least if they had have been dying they were doing it together. Thanks for the review, Mary x
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 10
nice job, mary...looking forward to see how this all works out for the boys. truthfully, I am actually looking for the unexpected here, and you have laid the groundwork for it, so I can't wait to see what happens next. bambers;)
Author's Response: Hi again Looking for something unexpected eh? Well now that you mention it.... Hope you like how the next chapter goes. Thanks and cheers Mary x
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 9
Nice job building the tension on this chapter. Looking forward to seeing how this all comes together. Bambers;)
Author's Response: HI Bambers Thanks, glad you liked it. It should all tie itself up in the next few chapters, hope you like how it does. Cheers and thanks for the review, Mary x
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 10
Wow. another brilliant chapter. Please let John get his revenge on all of the bad guy's, or i will have to hunt you down lol. Chapter ending was sad but also very beautiful.
Author's Response: Hi dh You lot are beginning to scare me!! Few mentions of hunting me down in these reviews! Thank you, I'm glad you liked the chapter ending, I'm kinda fond of it myself. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 10
I don't think you need to hide yet. In my books you will only need to hide if you let Abby, Jake or Matthew escape retribution John Winchester style. I actually like John's decision to let both brothers die, his understanding of their closeness is justification enough. Their loss would probably be the death of him in the long run, and I can't imagine the guilt and pain that would be left if he chose one son over the other. Let alone imagine Sam or Dean's reaction to the others death. The final imaginary scene at the end is a beautiful way of telling us that Sam and Dean would much prefer to die together than separately. My goodness this review is starting to sound like an English essay, so I'll stop now and just say "Well done, and still looking forward to more."
Author's Response: HI there Ok , I'll come back out, I have plans for all of them, don't worry. I think John would never choose between the boys, ever. Glad you liked the ending it came to me as I was almost ready to post the chapter so was a little late addition, which I am glad appears to have worked. I love your review, english essay or not! Thanks, hope you enjoy the rest. Cheers Mary xx
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 10
don't let Abby escape..lol..John needs to get his revenge on her..I loved this chapter..The end has me nearly in tears..Can't wait until tomorrow..Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Hi Mustang I have plans for Abby don't worry! If just might not be John. Glad you liked the end, I wanted to use Sam physic ability and since him and Dean are almost coma like I think it would fit. Hope you like the rest, cheers Mary x
Reviewer: shattershockred (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 10
"Mary has now officially gone into hiding" Woman! I am so leading the group with burning torches and pitchforks to find you! Amazing cliffhanger yet again!!
Author's Response: hi SSR *creeps back out of hiding* I wonder what the torchlight procession through my village was for!! hehe Thank you, I aim to please with my cliffies you know (or drive you all crazy!) Thanks for the review, cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 15/09/08 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 9
whoa, hey now! That is so not cool! You can't just leave us here! I don't care for your evil muse.....get the holy one back! :D I need to know what happens! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Hi there Maybe I should bracelet the evil muse?? Need to get them off the boys first though! Holy muse will return in a chapter or two, promise. Thanks again for review, cheers Mary x
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