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Reviewer: pendays (Signed) · Date: 05/09/08 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 2

i will be wating for more love it so far hope you post more soon!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thank you for your review, glad you are liking it so far. Will try to keep the updates coming at a steady pace.

Cheers, Mary x

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 04/09/08 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

wow awesome start..What the heck is happening..who has the boys..why do they have the boys..so many questions. Can't wait to find out..I think its awesome you started another multi chapter story. This one promises to be blood and dark.Thanks for writing. Looking forward to the next update..

Author's Response:

Hi Mustang,

Thanks for the awesome review. It will be a while I think before we get to the who, the why is really all about John. 

I had this sitting waiting to go for a little while but just had to get some of the one shots cluttering up my WIP out first so that I could concentrate on this.

Hope you like this, next update on as we type, enjoy.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: supernatural21 (Signed) · Date: 04/09/08 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow...very detailed and awesome writing!! Please don't make John choose...no matter how much torture the boys go thru(i hope there's more, I'm one for torture)... What about Bobby now? I can already see that it was a dangerous move for him going alone:p...update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Need to wait and see if John does/has to make a choice!

Love torturing Dean and didn't want little Sammy to feel left out so he got in on the act in this one!

Bobby's update coming shortly!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: L4LoveLosser (Signed) · Date: 04/09/08 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 1

Eek!!  Poor John!  Poor Sam and Dean!  I hope John can find them and save them in time!  Don't make him choose! 

I love this story...no matter how dark/demented (and I mean that in the nicest way possible) this story is, I love it!  I can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Hi there

Now would I make John choose between his boys......just have to wait and see! *evil laugh*

It's ok, I know what you mean, I might not be dark but I have a child so I am definately demented!!

Glad you are enjoyin this and thank you for the review. Mary x

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 04/09/08 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 1

WOW! great start, looking forward to your next update.

Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you liked the start, hope you like the next chapter.

Thanks again, Mary xx

Reviewer: gew (Signed) · Date: 04/09/08 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great start. I like the story so far. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Update soon please.


Author's Response:

Hi there,

Thank you so much for the review.

Next chapter is up, hope you like it.

Cheers, Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 04/09/08 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great start.

Poor Sam and Dean.

Can't wait to find out who's doing these awful things to them.



Author's Response:

HI dh,

Thanks for the review, I know I am soo evil, it's usual just poor Dean that gets it so I thought I let sam share the pain in this one!!

All shall be reveal, only not for a while! Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 04/09/08 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very dark beginnings, I can't see the boys lasting too long under that kind of torture. Update soon.

Author's Response:

Hi Maureen

Do intend this to be quite dark and the boys are going to get to put up with quite a lot. Poor souls.

Thanks for the review. Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: denisefowler (Signed) · Date: 04/09/08 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 1

a good start

Author's Response:

Thank you, hope you like the rest!

Mary x

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