Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 21/10/09 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 10

Thanks for reading this. It was very touching, especially the ending, when Sam let Dean go. Great story. Hugs, Vonnie


Author's Response:

You made it, that you have reviewed every chapter is amazing, and I really do appreciate that greatly, and now there are stars on all of them *does happy dance* glad you enjoyed the story.

I re-read the whole thing my-self tuesday just gone (I know that I should have done this sooner) and I did find some inconsistencies, sorry about that but I ammended those that made the story less...erm consistant - lol

Jacq xx

Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 21/10/09 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 8

Amazing, Sam starts the ritual and the guardians eyes turn black. Intriguing. Hugs, Vonnie


Author's Response:

Sam's just wants to bring Dean back, he'll try every way he can.

Thank you for your comment and stars.

Jacq x

Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 21/10/09 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 6

Thanks for saving Jonathan. So they are back on the right track, but now they are under attack again. This is really good. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Hello and thank you again, yes its a bit dire and I promise not to hurt them too much...lol

Jacq x

Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 20/10/09 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 4

This is so sad. Sam figures out the truth and now Jonathan comes in and in his desperation feels betrayed. I can even understand why he felt this way, with white dog being there. Too bad the gun went off. Now I'm just glad to hear you are not doing death fics. It's after my bed time. Can't wait to read more tomorrow. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying this.

No not a death-fic, after this chapter I had a very very long gap before I wrote the next.

So late night reading hey, sometimes you just have to sleep...lol

Thank you for the review and the stars.

Jacq x

Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 20/10/09 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 2

So black dog is trying to trick Sam, the white hair in his room were from the patch in his fur. And white dog is trying to protect him. Gotta read on and find out if black dog gets Sam. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Hello and thank you again

This is my very first chapter story, so I was/am just learing how to put the threads of a story together with this one.

Jacq x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 17/10/09 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 10

What a beautifully written chapter, very emotional, i loved everything about this chapter, Jonathan thinking of Sam as a brother,little Dean calling him uncle Sam and the Guardians becoming one, i liked your ending, all in all a wonderful story thanks for sharing.

Author's Response:

Than you so very much, its taken a while to finish this, almost 12months!  But i have learnt so much doing it. I will miss the characters i have created as it is like losing freinds when the tale is done.

But I got there in the end and that is what counts. 

I had a shorter paragraph where Sam switches off Dean's life support,  I am hoping you only saw/read the better longer version...had to ammend it, it just needed that little bit more.

Thank you again

Jacq xx

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 23/09/09 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 8

An exciting chapter, Sam's getting close to his goal now, looking forward to more.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 03/06/09 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 7

Just added my comment to the fathers day drabble challenge, noticed you asked when fathers day was, it's the 21st of june.

I didn't think the croc was far fetched at all it was a good addition to the story.

Author's Response:

Oh right, thank you, plenty of time then.  Thanks about the croc too

Jacq

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 10/03/09 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 6

Another great chapter, looking forward to the next part.

Author's Response:

Thank you, am quite eager now to start the next one, may have one or two to go...Jacq

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 4

Wow, that was a brilliant chapter.

Glad you said not a death fic lol.

Author's Response:

Thank you, didnt want anyone to get worried.

Jacq

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 08/09/08 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 2

Brilliant chapter.

Love the way that Dean talks to Sam in his head.

Author's Response:

Thank you  Cant have Sam with out Dean there....Somehow

Jacq

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 04/09/08 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very nice. Can always tell when an author is from overseas....takes a bit of deciphering but its good. 

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I admit to not checking it thoroughly before posting.  Im not really sure which bits need deciphering. Any suggestions would be gratefully appreciated.

Jacq