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Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 24/05/09 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 2: Burning Bridges

I hope you post another chapter soon. I look forward to reading what happens next.

Reviewer: rholou (Signed) · Date: 16/03/09 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 2: Burning Bridges

i must have missed this when you posted, i really like where you seem to be going with it, i see you haven't updated it in a while i hope you come back to it soon

Reviewer: rosie59 (Signed) · Date: 21/01/09 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 2: Burning Bridges

Please finish this story.I would love to know how it ends.

Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 01/01/09 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 2: Burning Bridges

AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! HOW CAN YOU DO THAT????!!!! It's weally weally mean... *sticks out tongue* MEANIE!!
Oh yeah, a little warning: I regress to the emotional stage of a five year old when things don't go my way ;) Hurry up with some more chapters 'cause they're only getting better as we go along and it'll only be seconds before I start screaming. *bottom lip trembling*

Reviewer: patster (Signed) · Date: 15/12/08 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 2: Burning Bridges

A cliff hanger? You jerk! :P
Love the description of the motel, and seeing young Ash is cute. I can't wait till John and the Millers meet so John can beat them in a glare off and get Dean and Sam back. :)
And btw, I love the idea of this story, I'm very interested in where it's going. Can't wait for the next chapter eight! :)

Author's Response:
hahaha Maddie! Glad I could annoy you some ;)
oh you and me both. I'm just itching to put John's hands around their throat. --hates those Millers with a firey passion--
Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 15/12/08 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 2: Burning Bridges

Just read your first 3 chapters and thought the story was great, and now I can't wait for the next post, Please update soon. Thanks

Author's Response: Thanks so much Maureen!!! I'm glad you enjoyed. Updates on its way

Reviewer: pendays (Signed) · Date: 15/12/08 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 2: Burning Bridges

love it so far dont wait too long to update please!!!!!!

Author's Response: Don't worry Pen the update is already on its way. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: patster (Signed) · Date: 14/12/08 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 1: In This House

Eight! I LOVE it!!!! My review would be more coherent, but I'm tired, so I'll just say this pwns and leave it at that. :)

Author's Response: MADDIE! -glomps- thank you so much!!!!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 14/11/08 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 1: In This House

Wow!!!! It remindes me of my childhood to which I had to take care of two brothers. Thanks!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Wow...that's cool that you took care of your siblings!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 14/11/08 02:52 PM · On: Prelude

This is a realy interesting story of how an 11 yr old is helping the older one very interesting.

Author's Response: Thank you Sam!

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 02/11/08 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 1: In This House

The very beginning of this chapter, is so sweet, with Dean telling Sam stories for bed.
I really liked this chapter, esp Dean's protective instincts...gotta love hard Dean! ;)

Author's Response: Dean's protectiveness is my favorite thing about him, it's cute. I'm so glad you like my chapter!!

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 02/11/08 03:30 PM · On: Prelude

Aww this pre has pulled at my heart strings! I really like: “Either you’ve said that a few times or my brain’s on repeat,” Dean replied, a weak attempt at jovial.
so Dean!

Author's Response: Wow fantasy, thank you so much! I'm glad to hear that. --happy--

Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 08/09/08 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 1: In This House

I like this story it's original

Author's Response: Thank you Cuddles!

Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 08/09/08 01:30 PM · On: Prelude

I like this prelude.

Reviewer: rholou (Signed) · Date: 07/09/08 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 1: In This House

still loving it, favourite line:
"who's supposed to take care of you?"

Author's Response: :Dthanks rholou. Glad you shared your favorite part. I like that kind of feedback the best! You're awesome!

Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 07/09/08 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 1: In This House

Ok, I'm hooked, nicely written and interesting.
Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Mary x

Author's Response: Thank you Mary. Chapter 2 is coming soon, I'm so sorry it's taken so long!

Reviewer: rholou (Signed) · Date: 03/09/08 02:08 PM · On: Prelude

I'm really looking forward to seeing where you're going to take this. Great start it's got my attention.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try and post chapter 1 tomorrow, your feedback means so much to me!

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 02/09/08 02:46 PM · On: Prelude

I'm kinda hooked, didn't think the first chapter was long enough. waiting to read the next chapter. update soon.

Author's Response:
I'm glad you hear it! This was just the prelude, don't worry the first chapter is actually quite long in my opinion--at least for me haha.
I'm so glad you hear you liked it, thanks for the feedback!

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