Supernaturalville
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 13/09/08 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Signs

Hahahahaha...never piss off the writer is right! i wonder what diabolical plans you have in store for them???

Author's Response:

I have a few things up my sleeve.

Dean:  I've seen what's up your sleeve.

Sam *mumbles*:  You've seen a lot more than that.

Dean:  Damn right I have.

Um...now that I am completely uncomfortable, I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter.  Thanks so much for the review.

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 11:50 PM · On: Prologue

Yup, i'm one of those that don't want Dean to be evil! but as long as you promised that all packaging, inside and outside, will be restored at the end of the story!

Author's Response:

Dean:  Doesn't want me to be evil?!  Dude, that is so messed up.

Sam:  You were born to be the good guy.

Dean:  Can't I just be the bad boy and be loved?

As for being restored...I can't guarantee anything at this point.  But I will say there are plenty of twists still up ahead.  I hope that you continue to check back for updates.  Thanks so much for the review.

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Turning of the Tide

OMG!

this chapter was wicked to say the least.  Abraham is one scary demon and Dean being Lucifer's heir; holy crap i am in shock!

and Eve a demon who turned and is now helping God.  Explains why Gabriel does not like her.

i am so hoping that there will be another twist and Dean will fight the urge and do the right thing and save SAM!!!!!

Come on Dean protect Sammy; remember.

on another note i need to take the time and apologize to Dean for saying that he should be on the short bus.  While he may not be as book smart as Sam he has intelligence that some of us over look.

Sam, being a younger sibling i know how annoying older ones can be.  Hang in there i am sure the writer has something up her sleeve.

hope the next chapter will be soon.

Renee

 



Author's Response:

Dean:  Told you I shouldn't be on the short bus.

Sam:  She was only sparing your feelings, Dean.

Dean:  That's it.  I'm going to let you rot in Hell.

Sam:  You don't mean that.

Dean:  Humph!

Um...while the boys sort out their affairs, I just wanted to say that I'm glad you liked the chapter.  As for what's going to happen with Dean and Sam...only time will tell.  There are definitely a few more twists on the way.  As for the writer...she definitely has something up her sleeve.

Sam:  Told you.

Dean:  Man, you will never let up.

Sam:  I just know the writer better than you do.

*Dean glares at Celtie and she slowly walks away...*

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 04:47 PM · On: Prologue

I loved the first one and this one does not disappoint. Well done. 

Oh and Dean? The girls already love ya man. 



Author's Response:

Dean:  Didn't have to tell me that.  I already knew.

Sam:  God, you are so self-centered.

Dean:  What?!  I did!

I'm glad that you enjoyed the first one and now this one.  It's good to hear.  Thank you so much for the review.  I appreciate it.

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Turning of the Tide

Well I have to say I didn't see that coming. 

Guys...go easy on the girl, huh?



Author's Response:

Dean:  Go easy on what girl?  Sam deserves everything that comes to him.

Sam:  What?!  They meant Celtie, Dean, not me.

Dean:  Oh...my mistake.  *grins*

*Sam rolls his eyes*

I'm glad that I shocked you with that chapter and I'm glad that you enjoyed it.  Thanks so much for the review.

Reviewer: julz314 (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Turning of the Tide

Wow!!! I feel so honored! :D Thanks girl for everything! You totally deserved that promo! :D
As for the story... never saw that one coming!!!  I seriously cannot wait for what's coming next!! You have one wicked way of telling a story girl! (and I guess it helps when you have the best guys to talk about! ;) ) 



Author's Response:

Dean:  Hear that, Sam?  Julz thinks we're wicked.

Sam:  No, she thinks Celtie is wicked.

Dean:  You are such a party crasher.

Sam:  Oh lighten up.

Dean:  I was until you just killed the mood.

I think I'm going to break it up here and say thank you for your kind comments.  I'm really glad that you're enjoying the story.  I appreciate every review you give me.  You're awesome!

Reviewer: naturalbornwinchester (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Turning of the Tide

really good



Author's Response:

Dean:  Those two words could have several different meanings.

Sam:  Dean, would you get your mind out of the gutter.

Dean:  I can't help it.

Sam:  Yeah...I know.

I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter.  Thank you so much for the review

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 09/09/08 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Clipped Wings

hit submit before i was finished because yes i am that flaky.

Eve losing her wings totally sucks out loud!

and why is Gabriel there if he is not going to protect Dean i mean come on!

um hello Dean alone in bed and no one there to watch his back.  of course him in bed is always good............God he is so yummy.

i also wanted to comment on

"You need to tell him what's going on with these then, so that he doesn't hurt himself.  I don't want His soldier to be injured or killed because of something stupid."

Dean an Angel?????

well he does have the look and determination to be an Angel; all though sometimes i think he should be on the short bus.  i am liking that possibility.

again great story

Renee 

 

 



Author's Response:

Dean:  I know...I was ALL ALONE IN BED and no one to protect me.

Sam:  Could you be any more desperate?

Dean:  Yeah, I probably could.  *pauses*  And what the hell?  Me on the short bus?  That is...is...

Sam:  Come on you can do it.

Dean:  I should not be on the short bus.  *crosses arms over chest*

Um...while Dean continues his little tantrum, I want to thank you for your kind review.  As for your questions *winks* you will just have to keep tuning in to see what happens.  Thanks again for your review.

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 09/09/08 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Clipped Wings

Awesome chapter.

i like how you keep going from story to Dean and Sam reading what you are writing.

Dean kidnapped by his Grandfather great unexpted twist.

i am not liking an Evil Sam and the fact that he may kill Dean but if does keep me wanting more.

again great job

Renee



Author's Response:

Dean:  Sure, she'll tune in anyway to see if I die or not.

Sam:  Maybe she'll hold you as you draw you last breath.

*Dean just glares at Sam*

I'm glad that you like the way I'm writing this one.  Thank so much for your kind words and review.  I do appreciate it.

Reviewer: Crash and Burn (Signed) · Date: 07/09/08 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Death Race

I love the whole one brother is good and one is evil thing... its classic, but something tells me the ending will be something all its own...

Author's Response:

Dean:  Question remains:  which one of us is the angel?

Sam:  Its definitely not you.

Dean:  Says who?

Sam:  Really...you...an angel?

Dean:  I'd be a damn good looking one.

Sam:  You really have no morals.

Dean:  Nope!

I'm glad that you are enjoying the story, Crash.  The ending...well, it will be all its own.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 06/09/08 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Death Race

That was a fantastic chapter.

What was on the paper to make Dean smile ?

 Still no sign of Sam.

 



Author's Response:

Sam:  I'm around.  I swear it.

Dean:  He's just preoccupied with the writer apparently.

Sam:  Just because I'm not there and your luck has turned for the worst doesn't mean a damn thing.

Dean:  Yeah...right.

*Both Dean and Sam glare at one another*

Thank you for the review, darkhunter.  I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter.  As for the paper...we'll just have to wait and see.

Reviewer: julz314 (Signed) · Date: 05/09/08 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Death Race

:O

What was written on that paper! Gah! Update soon! :D 



Author's Response:

Sam:  She's only curious about what was on the paper, Dean.

Dean:  Does anyone care about Eve?!

Sam:  Only you, lover boy.

Dean:  I never said a damn thing about you when you were with Jess.

Sam:  You hit on her, Dean!

Dean:  Well, she was rockin' that t-shirt.

*shakes head*  I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: julz314 (Signed) · Date: 03/09/08 06:53 PM · On: Prologue

At first I started reading The End especially because of the "after chapter" scenes with Sam and Dean and now Im just so into the story it's unbelievable! Loving my Sammy going all evil on us!! ;) (Id love him in any way but you gotta admit that evil suits him ;) )

Keep on writing! This is amazing!!!! 



Author's Response:

Dean:  Julz tuned in because of our witty banter.

Sam:  The day your banter is witty is the day Hell freezes over.

Dean:  Watch the Hell jokes.  SO not funny.

Sam:  But here's another Samite.

Dean:  Seriously, I really need to get you that ointment.  Can't you come up with something other than 'Samite'?

Sam:  I'll come up with something for all the Sam Lovers out there.

Dean:  God I feel like I'm watching a really bad unrated movie that I should be closing my eyes on.

Um...while I turn the channel, I wanted to say I'm glad that you are enjoying the story.  Thank you so much for your review.

Reviewer: Keola (Signed) · Date: 03/09/08 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Signs

one reason why I started reading this story is because I thought the banner was just amazing!! awesom job anyway!!!

doing an amazing job with this story!! update soon!



Author's Response:

*blushes*  Thanks so much for your comments on my banner.  I appreciate that.  I'm glad that you like the story.

Dean:  What?  No comments about us?

Sam:  Well there's a first for you.

Dean:  Seriously my feelings are hurt.

Sam:  No, just the dent in your ego.

Thanks so much for the review.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 03/09/08 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Signs

I'm really looking forward to the next part of this story.

Can't wait to catch up with Sam and things don't look to good for Dean.



Author's Response:

Sam:  Ha!  Someone is looking forward to catching up with me.

Dean:  Don't get your panties in a twist.  It's just one girl.

Sam:  I've got Samites.

Dean:  That sounds like something you need to treat with ointment.

*Sam just rolls his eyes*

I'm glad that you're enjoying the story.  Thanks so much for the review.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 30/08/08 05:37 PM · On: Prologue

Great start.

I don't mind a little bit of evil Sam lol.



Author's Response:

Sam:  I'm already popular and its only the prologue.

*Dean sits there and sulks*

Sam:  Someone is jealous.

*Dean says nothing else*

Sam:  Please enjoy Evil Sam while we try to knock Sad Dean out of his misery.

I'm glad that you are enjoying the story.  Thank you so much for the review.

Reviewer: jool (Signed) · Date: 30/08/08 01:46 PM · On: Prologue

once again a great chapter... you were right to make it a new story, the vibe is different in this one.

it s great to have our Evil Sam again and the story will be very moving and surprising as both brothers are fighting on different sides.

i m hanging in there with you with pleasure and congratulations for your banners they are always well chosen!



Author's Response:

Dean:  It's a whole different ballgame.

Sam:  What do you know about ballgames?

Dean:  And what do you know about being evil?!

*Sam smirks*

Dean:  I am going to beat you senseless.

Sam:  You can try, big brother.

Dean:  Oh!  Don't you dare pull that 'big brother' crap.  I'm taking you down!

*Sam just smiles*

Thank you for your review!  I'm glad that you are enjoying the story so far.  And thank you for your nice comments about my banners.  I really do appreciate it.

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 29/08/08 11:08 PM · On: Prologue

so far i am liking this; can't wait to see where it goes.

renee



Author's Response:

Sam:  It is always good to see new reviewers.

Dean:  Suck up!

Sam:  What did I do now?  I'm just welcoming new readers.

Dean:  You evil backstabbing jerk.

Sam:  My God you need help.

I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter.  I hope you continue to enjoy the story.  Thanks for the review.

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