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Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 14/12/08 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 10

I feel that your imagery is like polgergise the movie. Sorry if I missed speeled, bt after haveing to read a beautifull pieace I cant put attention to spelling sorry.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/12/08 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 9

I do like that last statement. This is a real killer imagery that you have placed and I like it.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/12/08 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 8

Wait I take it back . . . . I do appreciate a charcter of a girl kicking Deans SWEET & SOUR ASS @ POKER.
This is one spoky to hell of a story. Though I do appologize for not liking so much your character of Nina.
I car a lot about the character of SAM.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/12/08 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 7

I don't know how you as a write can put these sick visions in my head (HA,HA,HA,HA) . . . having Dean there a beaaaaaautiful girl and have Dean do a statement like that its funny, but then again Dean doesn't play with the upper and inner part of his scalp sort of saying.
For Sam this maybe a big step she isn't Jessica, but I still don't trust this Nina. She keeps reminding me of the character of Bello sneaky.
You are very good though.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/12/08 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 6

Very deceptive and I like your form of illusions and funny obsticals. This is a real killer of a story. Keep going your doing a hell of a job.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/12/08 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 5

Is this another secen from GHOST three?

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/12/08 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 4

Something must have happened that both of them reacted to a minor head ache.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/12/08 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 3

No ofense, I do like this story. I do think that Nina is holding back on the truth and that she is seting the boys up for yello eye. This is not good.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 12/12/08 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 2

Sweet I think this will become a main interest to the sweet and loveable Sam. Sorry DEan love ya, but no hard feelings. Its your imagrey you've allowed me to see that I like your writing.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 12/12/08 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

Shit it only remindes me of the character of SWEET BELLA. Very good with the opening. You had me fool, but are you sure the character of NINA is not BELLA? Just asking? I like the visual effects though.

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 17/09/08 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 8

Nice job Sarah! you are really moving this story forward now! and I'm glad to help out!

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 04/09/08 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 5

Nice job Sarah! Glad to help! thanks for the thanks lol! Intriguing that the duo haven't made it back into their bodies yet...Looking forward to finding out why!
Dean's on the case though so that should be helpful right...?
Poor Nina...the first time she hasn't been able to save the person from her vision...that's gotta be rough...
great job hon!

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 01/09/08 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 4

Still intrigued...can't wait to see what comes next! Will get to Beta-ing ASAP on the next chapter.

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 30/08/08 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 3

Oh now I am intrigued! You MUST MUST MUST continue this!
Great job so far! I saw a few grammatical errors here and there but the story is truly good! If you'd like I can look over the next chapter before you post...Beta for grammar as the rest is very well done.
Just contact me if you want me to!

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 30/08/08 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 2

lol "You one quick chick" nice. I liked the reverse psychology bit too! Moving on to the next chappy.

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 30/08/08 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

intriguing start...moving on to the next chapter

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 27/08/08 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

Well ... you nhave my interest .
Who is this Nina, what does she want from the boys?Is she another one of the chosen children? Can Sam help her?
Questions ...questions..questions
OUTSTANDING beginning!!!
Who was the killer and who sent him? more questions........
can't wait for the answers....
MORE PLEASE!!!
BRAVO!!!!

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