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Reviewer: Amberdreams (Signed) · Date: 23/01/10 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 4

This was very bleak but very good. It is interesting coming to this so long after it was written and after Season 5 is half way through. The series kind of skated over what might have happened to Dean in Hell apart from talking a little bit about Alastair's skill with the knife, but I've always thought there would be worse torments for Dean than just the physical, and I've read a couple of other stories that have explored the kind of mental torture they could have subjected him to for all that time. Letting him think he had escaped and bringing him back could be one - and I liked the way you made this in the end an effort by Sam and Bobby to reach him and let him know he wasn't forgotten. Though, if he were to remember it once he was fully back in Hell again, maybe that would just add to the pain. Very subtle to have his thinking every now and again about how hot he was feeling... a hint that all was not as it seemed....

Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I was expecting the show to go the route of psychological torture and was surprised when we had some physical mentions, but not much else. Still, I really enjoy the way the show has been unfolding. :)

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 04/04/09 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 4

Awwww, that's so sad. :'(

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 04/04/09 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 1

Ooooooh, this is gooooood...this is reeeeeally good. Freakin awesome idea for this story! ;D

Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 03/09/08 04:39 AM · On: Chapter 4

This was awesome, But a small request.....can u get a sequel too wherein sam really does save dean......please!!! oh this chapter is so very cool. I'm going to read this once more. Keeps me on the edge of my seat. An awesome job!!!

Pranami :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading it! I don't know if I could write a sequel, but hopefully S4 will take care of that part :)

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 30/08/08 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 4

Great ending. i didn't see that coming.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 29/08/08 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 4

that was awesome. You wrote this story beautifully. Great twist I didn't see you doing it that way. Thanks for writing.

Author's Response: I'm glad that you stuck with it through the end. Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 29/08/08 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 4

What an amazing twist. This was a thoroughly enjoyable read and awesomely twisted. Good for you for trying not to break canon, it's hard sometimes not to go too crazy. But you handled it well. :)

Author's Response: Thank you. I wasn't sure how the ending would go and I'm sure some people won't like it. That's understandable. But I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I can't help but love canon. This show is awesome for it :)

Reviewer: StrigoiVii (Signed) · Date: 29/08/08 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 3

Poor Dean... always getting the shaft. Can't wait to hear that conversation between the two of them!

Author's Response: Dean does angst so well. Or I should say JA acts it so well.

Thanks!

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 28/08/08 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 3

great chapter..Can't wait to read more. please update soon. Thanks for writing.

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 28/08/08 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 3

A very interesting story.
Three brilliant chapters, i'm looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Miss Sparrow (Signed) · Date: 28/08/08 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 3

Ooh more, please.

Reviewer: Silvertayl (Signed) · Date: 28/08/08 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 2

Poor gorgeous Dean, but I love it, update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 28/08/08 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 2

Wow what a great start to this story..What the heck is going on? Can't wait to read more, please update soon. Thanks for writing.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: StrigoiVii (Signed) · Date: 27/08/08 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 2

So, Sam rules the world and Dean's his mindless puppet? Very interesting theory. I hope we find out how Sam got Dean out of hell and what's been happening the last three years. I'll be waiting for more, thanks.

Author's Response: Thanks. I hope you end up liking it. I know this kind of story isn't everyone's cup of tea.

Reviewer: StrigoiVii (Signed) · Date: 26/08/08 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow! This sounds like it's going to become very interesting. I am so looking forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Thanks. i hope you enjoy it :)

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 26/08/08 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 1

OMG... talk about out of the frying pan , and into the fire....
Poor Dean gets out of hell, to live in a new kind of torment.
Bobby not trusting Dean????
there are a lot of questions that need answers...????????
EXCELLENT start.
MORE PLEASE!!!!!!
BRAVO!!!!

Author's Response: Oh thank you!

Reviewer: Miss Sparrow (Signed) · Date: 26/08/08 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 1

OMG! that was brilliant. poor Dean everyone is against him after being dead for 5 years.
Please... more

Author's Response: Thanks!

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