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Reviewer: Winchestergal (Signed) · Date: 17/09/09 12:01 PM · On: Groundwork

oooo

Reviewer: Winchestergal (Signed) · Date: 17/09/09 12:00 PM · On: Approaching Hunt

haha bens singin!

Reviewer: Winchestergal (Signed) · Date: 17/09/09 12:00 PM · On: Altalissa Cougers

oh no! bens hurt!

Reviewer: Winchestergal (Signed) · Date: 17/09/09 12:00 PM · On: A sad farewell

aw this was soo sad!!!!! the ending! poor ben!

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 15/06/09 07:23 PM · On: Right answers to unknown questions

Yeay! Great chapter but you need an epilogue. Dean never said he had a son out loud....nor did Ben even call him dad.
What about a scene with Dean and Sam just talking about what happened before they hit the road?

Author's Response: hmm I'll take that in mind, sequel is already up under lilleloius:)

Reviewer: copycat666 (Signed) · Date: 15/06/09 06:27 PM · On: Right answers to unknown questions

greaaaaaaaaatttttttttt!!!!!!!!!! The inter action between all these characters are so fine and realistic!!!! Fantastic job aunti hahahaha, no realy this is lovely work and it was an honner to read it.

Author's Response: haha aunti

Reviewer: blackcatswhiskers (Signed) · Date: 18/04/09 04:25 PM · On: Groundwork

Really enjoying this story. Looking forward to the next chapter
Rachel

Author's Response: already updated! hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 12/02/09 12:55 AM · On: Altalissa Cougers

Again, i trully loved it and I like to now if there will be a sequal to this one 'cause I can't get enough to completely finish this story.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/02/09 11:52 PM · On: A sad farewell

Its all about imagery. This is becomeing one of my favorites.
Although, I still think that the character of BEN is trully DEANS son and SAM could well be his uncle.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/02/09 05:30 PM · On: Reunions suck.......

This was the image that has ade me more then upset and cry, but the imagery of how it played out was well developed.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/02/09 05:09 PM · On: Bury your fears and kiss your friends prt 2

For placeing the unknown knowledge to these three they could become later known as the youngest hunters.
I do like the imagery, symbol, and balance. Of the four entities . . . . three kids and a pissed off ghost.
Unity, family/ friend, and faith ineach other.
“Dean…?”
I do like that phrase. It seems ever so clear that he is his son.
has to be. the imagination that you have is very creative.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/02/09 04:36 PM · On: Bury your freinds and kiss your fears part 1

“Jerk.” Keo fired off.

“Bitch.” Ben said in a flat voice.
I hat to say this kid, but I do think BEN is Dean son's for the two quotes I pulled out.
2ndly, he acts like him, but Keo is so not llike SAM. That would be so the character of Kate.
3rdly, Keo is more like their father or Bobby.
I do like the thought process you load up to Kate, and haveing a vivid imagery of that cemetary. Very weired.
I like that in this story it has me useing all the sense even the silent ones . . . . like belife.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/02/09 09:08 AM · On: friends oppisit family

It is looking good with the imagery you have placed to have a reader vividly imagen what is occuring between the brothers.
The last sentance of how vivid I can view in my mind of how it would real relive and have him re-live his life as a normal person., For Sam had that and he wants his brother to have a taste of that.
The is a colorful idea.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/02/09 01:34 AM · On: Seven years gone..

Well your bewildered mind that you used early on has no come to a jolt of sensativity.
I do think that BEN is DEAN son and SAM is uncle. I like the vivid attitude you placed between Dean and Mother to Ben as well as SAM.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/02/09 01:20 AM · On: chapter1...the news

A sincer chick-flick. I do like the visual text of this composition and I love it.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 10/02/09 11:24 PM · On: prologue

no, I love it although your visual mantality can be pertty scary, but very vivid illiusion of that wicked mind.

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 14/01/09 08:11 PM · On: Altalissa Cougers

This is starting to become one of my favorite stories.
The repeated "you don't have to...." were perfect!
I didn't like the part when Sam saved Ben from the cougar because I felt like it would have been better had it been Dean. But, after I read Sam's comment about "you take care of me and I'll take care of him." I changed my mind. It was an *Awe..* moment:)

Author's Response:
aaaawwwww thank you so much for you kind reveiw, it really means alot to us, and were glad that its becoming one of your favorite stories, will update soon!!
take care,
Jess and Andi

Reviewer: Supernaturalfan15 (Signed) · Date: 10/01/09 03:13 PM · On: prologue

sister stealers *points finger* but love it

Reviewer: Winchestergal (Signed) · Date: 26/12/08 12:26 AM · On: Bittersweet Symphony

AAWWWWWWWWWWW POOR BEN!!!

Reviewer: Winchestergal (Signed) · Date: 26/12/08 12:25 AM · On: Bury your freinds and kiss your fears part 1

Keo seems excited!

Reviewer: Winchestergal (Signed) · Date: 26/12/08 12:25 AM · On: friends oppisit family

LOVE the song in the beginning!

Reviewer: Winchestergal (Signed) · Date: 26/12/08 12:25 AM · On: Seven years gone..

And despite Sam’s endless bitching Dean managed not to slap him and dump him on the road

Reviewer: Winchestergal (Signed) · Date: 26/12/08 12:24 AM · On: chapter1...the news

hahaha loved the ending!

Reviewer: Winchestergal (Signed) · Date: 26/12/08 12:24 AM · On: prologue

poor janitor!

Reviewer: Keola (Signed) · Date: 26/12/08 12:19 AM · On: Bury your fears and kiss your friends prt 2

oooo Dean and benn reunite!

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