Supernaturalville
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 29/08/08 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 6

Great update.

I'm loving this story, can't wait for the next part.

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 29/08/08 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 6

Great chapter, very tense atmosphere! Don't think the Bear Walker stands a chance against John's fury, wow!

Reviewer: pendays (Signed) · Date: 28/08/08 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 6

love this story!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: punkin (Signed) · Date: 27/08/08 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 5

Love it!!!!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 27/08/08 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 5

Fantastic update.

Is the Bear walker coming? that's all they need on top of every thing else lol.

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 27/08/08 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 5

To see the genuine and uncovered John was frightening and touching at the same time, great work - and some cliffhanger, loved the chapter!

Reviewer: TuckerCat (Signed) · Date: 26/08/08 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 5

Man it is so good!  Can't wait for more, please!  Can I have more, please, si!  (or m'am as the case may be).

Reviewer: TuckerCat (Signed) · Date: 25/08/08 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 4

I like it!  Looking forward to reading more!

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 25/08/08 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 4

OMG... Sammy 's in dire straits here.

John is reacting finally to something-his own lack of connection with his sons.

The action and the tension are bouncing off the screen.AWESOME writing!!!!

Caleb and Dean -their frantic search for the 2 hunters-visually perfect!!!OUTSTANDING job!!!!!!

timing -tenor-verbage-all wrapped up in a perfect  package of action, suspense, and Winchester luck.EXCELLENT!!!!!!

MORE PLEASE!!!!

BRAVO!!!!!

 

Reviewer: denisefowler (Signed) · Date: 25/08/08 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 4

a very good story i like it

Reviewer: danny (Signed) · Date: 24/08/08 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 4

love it love it love it, it's so...i dnt no how 2 describe it, but i am really enjoying this. I Lloved this chappie. Poor john, he msy be a bit hard but he would never shot him on purpose, or did he shoot him at all?

Love ya

Danny

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 24/08/08 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 4

Two excellent new chapters! A wounded Sam - accidentally shot by his dad - and Dean's frantic search for his little brother, this is leaving me breathless. Once more the brothers' strong connection and need for each other is evident, just love the way you picture this!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 24/08/08 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 4

Two great updates.

Poor Sam and poor John the guilt must be killing him.

Reviewer: tomash (Signed) · Date: 23/08/08 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 4

Great chapter, hanging for the update. K.

Reviewer: d6l2j7 (Signed) · Date: 23/08/08 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 4

This story is really great.  I can't believe you shot Sammy.  I hope he is going to be alright.  Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 23/08/08 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 2

Oh oh oh, what an evil cliff-hanger. Sam shot, John injured and unconcious and Dean with Caleb miles away.

Please update soon. 

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 23/08/08 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 2

Great story, a very exciting update.

Really looking forward to the next part.

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 22/08/08 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 2

Thrilling chapter, I'm anxious to know how badly wounded Sam is and when Dean will discover something is terribly wrong!

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 20/08/08 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

God... can John just for once really listen to Sammy???

Dean and Caleb together is perfect. John and Sam together is oil and water......no mix there.

You have definitely got my attention on this one. Anytime the boys are separated , no good comes from it.OUTSTANDING writing.

You have set the stage for disaster here by splitinng up the Winchester boys . John is as usual as ass....so  I'm ready for a lot of hurt and angst  from Dean.AWESOME writing.

MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!

 BRAVO!!!!!

 



Author's Response: Oh...I am so happy you like. I have alot of this already done, just slow posting it on this site. Sorry.

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 16/08/08 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

Another great start! Sam on a hunt with his dad (both irritated) and Dean not by his little brother's side to watch out for him, this is gonna be bad. As always love the way you write Sam and Dean. Can't wait for the update!

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 16/08/08 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 1

Nice start, looking forward to more.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 16/08/08 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great start.

If only John would take the time to listen to Sam they might get on a bit better.

Poor Dean he is always stuck in the middle.

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