Supernaturalville
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 6

hm...a racoon...you're sneaky...lol.  Okay so now John off on the hunt, and Sam's getting the care he needs... ;)

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 5

Hm...I'm thinking that bearwalkers still in the area... ;)

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 4

Well, Dean's on the scene so hopefully Sam'll take comfort in that. Moving on ;) Kel

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 3

Oh, no, Sam's been shot and it's John's fault...Not good.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 2

Oh...so not good.  Man, Sammy left in the forest with an injured John and this creature... ;) Kel

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very nice opening.  I'm moving on :) - Kel

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 11

Thank you for a brilliant story.

It was a lovely ending very sweet.

Reviewer: black_werewolf_101 (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 11

Aw... Nice job. :)

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 11

Awww. Very nicely done!

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 10/09/08 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 11

Great story, lovely end! Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful John and as always, when it comes to Sam and Dean, really unsurpassable how you describe these two! Again, thank you!!!

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 03/09/08 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 10

And I was so sure you were going to make us wait to see if Sam moved, or alternatively there wasn't going to be any movement yet.

Still looking forward to what comes next.

Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 03/09/08 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 10

Wow, so cute!!!! Poor sammy. Finally I think he is out of Danger. Once again sam is so cuuuuuuute!!!! A good job done here...

Pranami :0

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 02/09/08 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 10

Loved these two chapters, Dean's breakdown and later Sam's first need his brother, this so clearly shows these two in fact are like one, together suffer, together exist, fantastic job!! And what great news Sam isn't paralyzed, things finally seem to ease a bit, also a good talk Caleb (like this character a lot) had with John!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 02/09/08 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 10

Two great updates.

Thank goodness Sam's on the mend.

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 01/09/08 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 8

ok that was just evil.

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 01/09/08 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 4

WOW!  John admitting to Dean : "I shot him"...... that was so sad. *leaving to get tissues now*

Reviewer: PyroChilde (Signed) · Date: 01/09/08 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 8

Wow, awesome story! I love these angsty stories and you've got the emotional responses dead on I think. I love big brother Dean and I really like your depiction of Caleb too. I can't wait for your next update. That cliffy is evil, by the way.

Update soon!

Brandi

Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 01/09/08 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 8

Awesome Chapters. But first of, i would like to confom - is this a death fiction? Well, please dont kill sammy. Let him be alright....please please please. And another think I love the way you have portrayed John Winchester. I like his fierce determination to finish his Job. OMG, I really wish i was like him. I dont know where i would have been had I been like him.....hehehe. Good work, keep it going!!!! Iam going to give it a 10!!!! (or maybe more probably if the rating was available.)

Pranami :)

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 01/09/08 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 8

How could you leave it like that, shame on you, lol.

Please update soon.

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 01/09/08 04:39 AM · On: Chapter 8

Nerve-splitting end scene, the doctor's words felt like a punch, neither Dean nor John (more and more like this John, great description) could live if Sam wouldn't survive. Brilliant chapter!!!

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 01/09/08 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 3

very nice but you spelled Murphysboro wrong.

Reviewer: TuckerCat (Signed) · Date: 31/08/08 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 8

oh man!  I really like the story! 

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 31/08/08 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 7

Just caught up on the last few chapters and have to say I like how you write John. You show him as outwardly a mixed up man with priorities in all the wrong places, but inside you're right he has his heart in the right place. 

Looking forward to the rest.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 31/08/08 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 7

Fantastic update.

Poor Sam.

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 31/08/08 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 7

Impressive image of John, he always can be judged by his actions and Caleb is correct here that his heart is "in the right place"! As always love the way Dean worries about Sam and cares such a great deal for his little brother, very special; scary ending, hope Sam will be okay!

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