Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 21/08/08 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Shockwave
poor Sam, these guys are the kings of guilt and self-loathing aren't they. great chapter I love the way you write.
Author's Response: Thank you for that - yes, the boys really know how to do guilt well. I have often wondered how one or both hasn't gone off and had a little psychotic episode before this. Hope you enjoy the next chapter. And then there's just one more to go...Jules
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 21/08/08 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Shockwave
hey, an exploration of Sam's freaky head works for me also... And apparently there's one hell of a turmoil up there! Enjoy your weekend!..
Author's Response: Ooh, yes - there's enough angst up there to light up a small town! Thanks for that my friend - I did have a lovely weekend. And the muse is back! I had a new story idea, and hopefully it will be ready for posting soon. Hope you like Drunk!Sam...Jules
Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 21/08/08 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Shockwave
Wow, Dean is getting better and Sam is exhausted and feeling guilty. And obviously not dealing well with it. Can't wait for the next chapter. Have fun. Hugs, Vonnie
Author's Response: Thanks Vonnie - yes, Sam is pretty guilty - and he could have done without that little guilt trip his father put him through after the run-in with the semi - it's going to get messy....Jules
Reviewer: supernaturalfan (Signed) · Date: 16/08/08 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Explosion
Great start for this story!! Was interesting to see Sam channeling his inner Dean..lol. I look forward to the next chapter. Hoping it's soon.
Author's Response: Thanks Sharon. It was a bit of a turnaround, wasn't it? But Sam's got such a big heart, and I think it makes him a formidable opponent when his loved ones are threatened. Still some Dean-channelling coming up in the second chapter...Jules
Reviewer: Silvertayl (Signed) · Date: 15/08/08 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Explosion
Oh goodie, hurt Dean, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: LOL! Yes, and we Dean girls are all racing to get our nurses' uniforms on! Thanks so much for that...Jules
Reviewer: youthere (Signed) · Date: 15/08/08 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Explosion
Yay! Hard working Mizpah has a new one up... Looking forward to this :)
Author's Response: Yep, another one! LOL. Hope that you enjoy it - will only be a short-ish one this time. Thanks so much for that - great to have you along...Jules
Reviewer: shattershockred (Signed) · Date: 15/08/08 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Explosion
Nice!!! Love seeing Sam as a badass!!
Author's Response: Thank you for that. There's something cute about Sam being all protective, isn't there? And he's got the physique to pull it off. Not that my Deany-babe isn't built, but I always thought if Sam wanted to intimidate someone, he could really achieve a spectacular result. Hope you like the next chapter...Jules
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 15/08/08 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Explosion
hey, nice oneshot Jules! What you mean it's not over yet? Huh... i thought, with no cliffie and all at the end.. Lol!! Yeah I know, you tell yourself, damn, she said she wouldn't be around this week, and though here she is with her smart-ass comments... Well, my hubby had to leave for an unexpected business trip, so my weekend and anniversary celebration just got shot to hell. So here I am. And let's see what you've got for us with this story. Good timeline choice after WIAWSNB, I always thought there was things to explore in Dean's psyche after that experience. Waiting for more!!
Author's Response: Oneshot???? Hey, I know I said it was short, but not that short... LOL. And you make all the smart-arse comments you want, my friend. It wouldn't be the same without you. Oh, damn - you didn't get your dirty weekend away! As for what I've got with the story, well, this time I'm not getting inside Dean's head (although it's not really his head I want to get into....) but Sam's. Should be a freaky experience - LOL....Jules
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 15/08/08 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Explosion
No Evil cliffee - R U coming down with something????? LOL!!! Thank godness everything else is the same - great action sequences, wonderful Sammy insights and what promises to be another enjoyable ride. Nice start!!!!!
Author's Response: *holds hand to forehead*...hmm, no temperature, but I do have the sniffles...yep, must be coming down with something - ROFL! Yes, that was rather out of character for me, wasn't it? I'll try to do better next story - lol. Thanks for that - hope that you enjoy the ride - more Protective!Sam coming up....Jules
Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 15/08/08 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Explosion
Yes, you are very good, first for no cliffie, second for posting a new story. But I do have to say, even without a cliffie, I have a hard time waiting for the next chapter. You set something up in this chapter, and I'm not quite sure where you are going with it. So now I feel the need to know more. And it really starts growing fast. So maybe you could post early again or wave your magic wand and make it next Friday. Hugs, Vonnie
Author's Response: I am...*pats self on head*... Lol - so even without a cliffie, you're still bouncing up and down waiting for the next chapter, eh? Well, that's good. Good for me! As for posting early - wellllll.... now, my wonderful beta and friend has threatened to kill me in a hideously bloody fashion if I break the posting cycle, but I am going to post a day early because I'm going away for the weekend and leaving Friday morning. Perhaps you could kidnap Sam and send him nicely gift-wrapped to Ziggy and she might let me slip an extra chapter in, if it's ready - you never know your luck - lol. Thanks Vonnie - glad you're loving this one...Jules
Author's Response: Oh - forgot to add - yes, I have set something up, but there is a clue in the story banner. Have a look at the pic of Sam, and remember what he was doing in that particular shot....I'll give you a little hint - the pic is from Playthings...*grins*....Jules
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 15/08/08 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Explosion
Another brilliant start. There's something very sexy about a tough Sam don,t you think? lol.
Author's Response: Thanks hon. And yes, there is just something special about Sam taking charge of his big brother and getting all fierce and protective. Glad you like it so far. Tough Sam isn't done, yet. He still has to get them out of town before the doc decides to call the cavalry...Jules
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 15/08/08 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Explosion
I've just spent the last two days reading all your stories, they're excellent. This one is no exception. thankyou.
Author's Response: Wow! ALL of them??? Man, that deserves a reward. Especially reading In Dreams in one sitting... And seriously, thank you so much! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed them so much. And it's great to have you along for the ride on this one.....Jules
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 15/08/08 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Explosion
Great beginning Jules! I really liked tough Sam! But I am worried about Dean though! I don't think he is out of the woods yet. Will the "good doctor" have the cops chase the boys after all? I can't wait to see wat you have planned for them. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks Dagmar. Tough Sam isn't done yet - they still have to get somewhere safe, and Dean's not really in a good way. But I promise I won't torture them much this time around - lol...Jules
Reviewer: IHeartSam (Signed) · Date: 15/08/08 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Explosion
great first chapter-its good to see what sam will do to protect dean for a change...thouh i smell trouble brewing! cant wait to seee where this goes.nice work. Aliyssa x
Author's Response: Thanks for that Aliyssa. And yes, it's a bit of a change to see Sam in the big brother role, but I believe he's just as fiercely protective of Dean as Dean is of him. That was evident in the S3 finale when he was willing to sacrifice himself to Lilith and told her to let Dean go. As for trouble brewing - well, it will be if Dean finds out Sam wagered the Impala - LOL...Jules
Reviewer: lunasgathering (Signed) · Date: 15/08/08 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Explosion
Great start. I can't wait to see what happens next. Loved BadAss!Sam. If it were me, I'd never fight the urge to include a cliffhanger. They are necessary to keep the readers hooked and salivating for the next chapter. Awesome first chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you for that. I recognise your name from SN.tv - you're SupernaturalGeek's auction story bidder, aren't you? Lol - it was rather tempting to throw in a cliffie, but I thought I'd give everyone a break for this story. But don't worry, I have other stories in the works with cliffies. Thanks for reading - glad you loved Sam being all protective little brother....Jules
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