Supernaturalville
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 23/08/08 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 10

Great update, and Sam got to rescue Dean.

Is it time for this nasty creature to get it's ass kicked lol.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! It's getting close to time for the creature to have it's purring ass kicked. Yep. More soon!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 23/08/08 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 9

Oh no Dean what have you done.

This story is still full of tension and as scary as hell.



Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much! I'm glad the tension is still there, I always worry as a story gets longer!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 22/08/08 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 10

Intense. Loved Sam, his love for his brother gives him the strength to do even the impossible. Every chapter just a little more intense than the last. Can't wait how you are going to top this one. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Vonnie! I loved Sam in this chapter too, when I was writing it the scene was playing before my eyes. Anything for the other, that's the Winchester motto, isn't it? Even the impossible.

More very soon! Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 22/08/08 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 9

Great chapter. Felt Sam's fear for Dean. The sadness in Dean. The terror in the air. It was really gripping. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so glad this story is still going strong! I'll have more very soon!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: tomash (Signed) · Date: 22/08/08 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 9

God this is so tense, I am hanging for every update - love it!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'll be updating later today!

Hugs. Muffy

Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 22/08/08 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 9

Ok, we know how Dean feels, your playing with us evil Muffy and we really want to know how the game ends......need you to put us out of our misery or we may have to come hunt you down. lol

Seriously, seriously good. How does this thing know Dean so well and knows what he'll do??

Hell hath no fury like big bro 'Winchester in full protect Sammy mode. Can't wait for more!!  Mary x



Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much! I'm afraid I better brace myself for a hunt, then. There's a bit more before it all ends. We find out more about Dean and the creature in the next little bit.

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 21/08/08 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 9

Muffy, you know how to keep us at the edge of our seat. So intense, so suspenseful, I want more already.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I won't keep you waiting long on this story, promise!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 21/08/08 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 9

Ahhh, man, you got me with this chapter.  The goodbye sent me right over the edge.  I truly cannot wait till the next update.

Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much! I won't keep you waiting long for the next update! Promise!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 21/08/08 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 8

OK... this is just getting more and more scary!!!!

This creature is thinking- tormenting- torturing the boys-AWESOME writing!!!

your visual verbage and suspenseful timing are creating a horror show in those woods-OUTSTANDING!!!!!

Yep... the lights are on at night in my house.!!!!

Sammy's really at the end of his strength- how is Dean going to get them out of there?????

I'm sitting at the edge of my seat...MORE PLEASE!!!!!!

BRAVO!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much *huge hug* I'm so glad your enjoying this one, although--you aren't going to start charging me for lightbulbs are you? LOL I'll have more very soon! Promise

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 21/08/08 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 8

Very exciting chapter.

Glad that Sam's ok, well not really ok but you know what i mean lol.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I hope I can keep it up for a bit :D Sam's on the mend, maybe, but Dean is looking a little worse for wear.

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 21/08/08 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 8

Another whoa, so no nightmare, also it is a nightmare nevertheless. I can't wait for the next chapter. You sure have a way with words. You keep me on the edge and keep it really creepy. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so happy this story is giving you the creeps. Wow, that doesn't sound right, but you know what I mean! LOL

Huge hug, Muffy

Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 21/08/08 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 7

Whoa, so this is not a death fic? So what's going on? Are they caught in some drug induced nightmare? Something is going on. Really love this chapter. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! No, not a nightmare and NEVER death fic from me. It makes me cry and weep and wail. I read one once (unlabeled) and cried abou tit for days. Still tear up when I think about it.

More soon! Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 21/08/08 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 8

Muffy

ok so i'm scared now.  This thing is a son of a bitch and its just playing with em isn't it?

I love that whole 'And listen to me bitch' section. He's so snarky but underneath you can hear his fear.  Its good, atmospheric and creepy.

next chapter please.

bev xx



Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much! *huge hug* I'm so glad you are liking this story hon! You know what that means! And the promised Dean hurt is coming up fast!

Huge hug, Muffy

Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 20/08/08 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 8

Aargh! Got to stop reading updates at 1 in the morning, really do!

My heart almost stopped when it dragged Dean over the rock.

I love Sam's thought about the crackle of the fire. lol

Great story, no nails left but a great story!    Mary xx



Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much! I loved Sam's thoughts about the fire too, made me smile! 

*sends nightlight* I hope that helps, although we are coming up on when the creature starts getting a little closer, less play, more action!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 19/08/08 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 7

NO...The thing returned Sam with both hands untouched but dead. What it wants with Dean. What's going on. Terriifc work so far Muffy, I can't wait for your next update.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I think the creature has plans for the boys, but I think it might not be counting on the Winchesters!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 19/08/08 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 7

Muffy

not a death fic, not a death fic...not a death fic right??

What is this damned creature?

bev xx



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Not a death fic, not a death fic, not a death fic. Promise!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 19/08/08 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 6

Muffy

Jeeze i hate freaking squirrels!  Its not sammy's ahand is it?  Tell me its not? Oh and the ankle?  Ouchy!

bev xxxx



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I think Dean is starting to hate squirrels a bit too! And more by the end! trust me.

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 19/08/08 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 7

That was just fantastic, this story is outstanding.

Although it's got me scared witless lol, i keep reminding myself that it's not a deathfic.



Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much! And no death fic, I promise! No matter how bad things look! I promise!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 18/08/08 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 7

So glad you told us it wasn't a death fic!

Me thinks that the thing that goes sigh in the night is about to get a little butt kicking?? I hope.

Still seriously creepy, even though I knew it was Sam it was dragging I was still holding my breath as it threw him.

Great story, looking forward to the next bit.  Mary x



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! That thing in the night will get alittle butt kicking coming up. I think he might have met his match in our boys!

Huge hug, Muffy

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 18/08/08 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 7

I'm desperately glad you reminded us that this isn't a death fic.  Because you do a dasterdly job of convincing us otherwise.  hehe  Another great update as usual.  I've come to expect a wild ride every time I see one of your updates.

Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much! And I promise promise promise this isn't death fic. Although you need to keep that in mind over the next few chapters :D

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 18/08/08 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 7

OMG... now I'm really twitching!!!!

I have my horses in a pasture near state land-3000acres of WOODS.. do you have any idea what is now going thru my mind when I feed them at night!!!!! AWESOME AWESOME suspense.

I'm so glad it wasn't Sam's hand- but , that venom or poison that the creature is injecting into the boys-Sammy's too cold right now...!!!!!...

I"ll be leaving the lights on for a few nights with this one....OUTSTANDING writing!!!!!!

I can't get enough of this story....you are a master storyteller and suspense writer!!!!!!EXCELLENT   work!!!

MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!

BRAVO!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so happy with this story. I think it's maintaining the suspense right now. *sends light bulbs* I hope those help, although I'm not sure how to help with the horses! *grins*

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: IrishTwilight (Signed) · Date: 18/08/08 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 7

So intense!  I can't wait for more!  The emotion, the suspense, you build it all perfectly!  You manage to make the woods really creep me out ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I think I've made the woods creep me out, too! My mind plays tricks on me now (and I'm lucky enough to live by a forested area. Which makes the nights fun!

Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 18/08/08 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 4

OMG... the barking call... the same as the creastures from that other camping trip.

The boys barly made it out that time. AWESOME writing!!!!

So, I am thinking this creature is after them  because they have escaped them 2 x's already..????..

The suspense is killing me - you have totalyy wovwen a story that just makes your readers want more and more.OUTSTANDING job!!!!!!!

MORE PLEASE!!!!!!

BRAVO!!!! 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! The call is similar isn't it... Hmmm, what have those poor boys stumbled into this time? It is the same or something more sinister, something those things might fear? Hmmm

More very soon! Hugs, Muffy

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 17/08/08 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 6

OMG!That horrible thing got Sam. No!Don't tell me it was Sam's hand. I hope that Dean'll find Sam before it's too late. I'm at the edge of my seat waiting for more. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Don't worry I won't maim poor Sam permanently. Those lovely hands are just too pretty to ruin...

Chapter seven is up! Hugs Muffy

Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 17/08/08 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 6

OMG! This story is seriously freaking me out but I love it!

You are trying to scare the wits out of us with this.

And it's working!!

(Sorry couldn't resist!)  Mary xx



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I have to admit I freaked myself out a bit writing this one. I hear snuffles at night (ok, it's the cat) but it still freaks me! I'll have more up super soon!

Hugs, Muffy

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