Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 01/09/08 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 13
Oh boy - you're scary! (In a great way!) This story just grabs hold of you, sucks you in even as it terrifies you, it's so vividly written you can feel the silence coming with 'it' (whatever it is... creepiest thing of all, the way you still haven't really given any details!) I almost don't want the next update, 'cause then it'll be one more chapter closer to being finished! Scratch that - bring it on!
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! I thought for a long time about being more specific about my beastie in this one, but I decided that the things we don't know for sure are the things that are the scariest. Or, at least for me! Once I know what's scratching in the dark, I'm usually ok (except for once, when the scratching turned out to be a spider the size of my hand!) Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 01/09/08 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 8
Eeek - evil squirrels! But a squirrel army with mini flamethrowers? That's pretty cool! And on again...boy I'm glad i haven't got to wait for these updates!)
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! I loved the squirrels. They were one of those organic things that just sort of happened over the course of the story. I love those little sidelines that just appear! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 01/09/08 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 7
OMG!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You're lovely shocked response warmed the cockels of my heart! :D Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 01/09/08 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 6
Okay - i go on holiday for a fortnight and i come back to a fantastic, terrifying mammoth story! (I'm never going camping again!) And did you really tear Sammy's hand off? ick - that's just nasty - gotta read on, can't stop now!
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! I did wonder where you were! I'm so glad I could have this ready for you when you came back though! I'm never camping again. I've scared myself to thoroughly in this one and Welcome for that. LOL Poor Sammy's hand. It was actually that hand that started this story. It was flaoting around for awhile and I tried it in other places, then I realized it was Sam's hand and POW the story started forming. Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 31/08/08 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 13
Yes!It's dead and Sam saved Dean's life. Dean and Sam're not in their best shape but they're alive. What a gripping, intense chapter, he left me out of breath. Can't wait for your next chapter Muffy.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Those poor boys are in back shape, but I'll make them better! I promise! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 31/08/08 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 13
Ok, what did Sam just do?? Love how Dean is just prepared to let go if it'll save his brother and how Sam isn't prepared to let that happen. Wonderful story, can't wait for the rest. Mary x
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love those boys. I love how they are willing to sacrifice themselves for the other. ALthough it makes me want to strangle them sometimes too! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 30/08/08 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 13
Not sure what Sam did at the end of the chapter but I really enjoyed reading it. and I'm sure all will be revealed in the next chapter.
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! Yeah, you'll find out what happened in the next chapter. It should be up late tomorrow or Monday! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 30/08/08 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 13
Brilliant update. Is Dean getting better now ? can't wait for the next part.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Dean will be getting better, in just a bit! More very soon! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 30/08/08 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 13
Muffy. Hoowee, his got a huge, big old ouchy leg going on there! And what the heck is the big purring nasty? bev xx
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! Poor Dean and his poor leg. I was a little awful to him wasn't I? What's the baddie? Hmmm More very soon! Huge hug, Muffy
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 30/08/08 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 12
Muffy. I like the rhythm of the repeated 'And it was coming for him', it's like a fearful heartbeat! It purrs...Bird! what are you doing there, bad cat! Bev xx
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! I'm so glad that worked! And yeah it purrs. Funny thing I was writing something and put "the rumbling purr of the Impala's engine" and had to stop myself. No purring around the boys for awhile. Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 29/08/08 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 12
Fantastic update, what a cliffhanger. I'm so sorry to hear about your cat, sending hugs x.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And thank you for the kind words about Wolfman. I miss the brat so much! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 28/08/08 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 12
that was so cruel! I thought the boys had won...and Dean giving up...OMG please please please PLEASE send the next part?!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Dean giving up made me a little mad. I wanted to smack him. The next bit is up though, hope that helps a little. Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 28/08/08 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 12
OMG!Dean!!!What an intense, poignant chapter. What a cliffhanger, please, update soon. Muffy, I'm so sorry for your cat, my thoughts're with you, hugs.
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! I've just updated. I hope you don't hate me too much... Thank you for the hug. My poor old man, I miss him so much, funny how they worm their little furry ways into our hearts! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 28/08/08 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 12
Great chapter but I hope you haven't killed Dean off, Update soon!!.
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! Don't worry. I won't kill him off, promise! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 28/08/08 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 12
Evil, Muffy, absolutely and utterly evil!! What an ending! Aaargh. Please update soon, although having said that I don't think this story is good for the old heart you know! So sorry to hear about Wolfman. As the owner of two insane moggies - Mitz and Jules I understand your loss. My last cat was 18 when it passed nearly 10 years ago and I still miss it, but my other two help. My thoughts are will you, Mary xx
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much, Mary! Sorry about your heart *sends chocolate* Will that help a little? I've posted the next chapter, not that it helps all that much... Thank you so much for your kind words about Wolfman. I miss the old boy so much, and sadly he makes the fourth this year :( *hugs* to you, Mitz and Jules
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 25/08/08 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 11
Muffy. "Freak," Dean said, nudging Sam gently with an elbow. "This from the guy who thinks the squirrels are out to get him?" "They are, I'm telling you Sam, they are out to get me." "I think you might be losing your mind, Dean." "Probably, squirrels might have gotten it." Muffy I love that whole section, it's so 'humour based on desperation'. OMG, what have you done to him? Get me out there hun, he needs a good Northern girl to comfort and soothe him! Bev xx
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much Bev *hugs* I'm just thrilled you're enjoying this story. I've done terrible things to the boy and it will get a little worse before it gets better! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 25/08/08 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 10
Muffy. Ok so are ya really gonna tell me what the freaking hell it is? If I read on you're really gonna let me know? Ah and gee you chewed em up real good! heehee bev xxx
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You want to know what the beastie is? Hmmm, would that be fair, if I told you? LOL I told you I'd beat them up good before it was over! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 24/08/08 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 11
Another riveting chapter. The suspense is killing me, I can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! I'm so sorry my review reply is late! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 24/08/08 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 1
Ooh, wonderfully tense, atmospheric start. I guess Dean's love of camping hasn't grown too much. Can't wait to read more. Jane
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much Jane! I hope you enjoy this story. Dean's love of camping will be completely dead and gone by the time I'm done with the poor thing. Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 24/08/08 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 11
Powerful! The war ends now. I don't know what to say, other than, update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! The war ends now, but maybe it goes on a little too. :D I'll have the final chapter up Sunday or Monday! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 24/08/08 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 11
Great update, just when I think you can't freak me out anymore than you already have you manage it. Dean's ankle sounds gross and you have described it so well I have it in my head in glowing technicolour. *shiver* More....Mary xx
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much, Mary. I'm sorry about the little gross out! I guess sometimes, in order to get the pictures out of my head, I share them. That might not be completely fair to everyone here! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 24/08/08 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 11
Great update. After every thing it's done to the guys, i'm really looking forward to this thing getting what's coming to it lol.
Author's Response: Oh thank you so muc! I hope I don't disappoint to much before all is said and done! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 24/08/08 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 5
Oh goodness... Sorry I haven't revoewed until now, but I got a little caught up. First of: I like the story, great writing as always. Great plot, not revealing the culprit :D BUT: dum dum dummmm... It kinda' reminds me of Welcome... which was also just a great story and the title for this story suggests a return of the mighty orc perheaps? Judt a wild shot in the dark. And again, I really like your story and I'm kicking myself for not holding of on reading it till it's done. Because I just know that I'm gonna go insane with the waiting :D :D :D
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! (Sorry my reply took so long :( )I will admit to some similarities in these stories. Is this the return of the orc? No, but I was thinking a little of Tolkien style beasties in this one--it's not orcs, it's bigger and badder and the kind of thing orcs run from... Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 23/08/08 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 10
Dean and Sam're apart once again, I hope Sam is alright. So Dean and the creature know each other. Who's going to win the battle, can't wait to find out.
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! They're apart, but I promise they will be together for the final battle. Sam migh tbe a little annoyed by then, and an annoyed Sam is scary! Hugs, Muffy
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 23/08/08 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 10
Yeah, Sam is on his feet again and Dean is pissed, I feel our little nightstalker may have bitten off more than it can chew?? Go give it as good as it gave boys. Wonderful. Mary x
Author's Response: Thank you so much Mary! Our nightstalker is playing with fire, isn't it? I'll post the final chapter very soon! Hugs, Muffy
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