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Reviewer: copycat666 (Signed) · Date: 12/11/08 09:48 AM · On: Today my brother died

Pretty good ! Keep it up !

Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 11/08/08 06:06 PM · On: Today my brother died

How sad and yet in a way beautiful. The thoughts of one brother holding the body of the other. Mourning the loss, giving voice to this grief and in the end confessing, that he died with him. Very touching and beautifully written. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response: Thanks, it is sad, but I'm a sucker for the brotherly love!

Reviewer: sophie1992 (Signed) · Date: 11/08/08 03:51 PM · On: Today my brother died

That brillint I love it. Very sad your a great writer

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 11/08/08 03:11 PM · On: Today my brother died

Very good, lots of emotion in your poem.

Reviewer: Winchester_Warriors (Signed) · Date: 11/08/08 01:53 PM · On: Today my brother died

Excellent! Can't wait for more stuff! Oh, and welcome!
~A

Author's Response: Oh, don't worry, mores a comin! lol

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