Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 02/09/08 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 3 Promises
Good recounting of Sam piecing things together and getting past his pain and fear to do something productive. Bobby took away Dean's weapons, so Sam can't use them, but what about Bobby's own weapons? He's got an arsenal stockpiled somewhere in his house, and I bet the demon didn't think to remove them. And I'm guessing Sam knows where they are, too. At first, I was puzzled by Sam's choice of help, but then I realized that Ellen is the fastest way to reach out to other hunters, and Ash, and to spread the word that Dean's gone missing and Bobby's been possessed. Waiting for more! Sue
Author's Response: Well observed, Sue! Sam knows where the weapons are, but panic can do funny things to you. However, that wasn't the real reason why he called Ellen. He feels lost without Dean who is usually the one to come up with a plan when a situation like that appears. But now with Dean gone, taken. Sam is on his own. I hope that answers your question a little bit, lol Thanks a lot for the feedback ;)
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 02/09/08 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 2 The Bird and the Worm
Whoa, way to turn the mood from brotherly pranks to demon's got them by the tail. Sam's gotten off lightly so far, he just got drugged. I cringed through your description of Bobby waling on Dean, poor baby really got stomped on. Off to see what happens next! Sue
Author's Response: Yup, Sam was really lucky while Dean got the brunt of the attack. But you'll get to know why! Thanks a lot for the review, Swellison!
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 02/09/08 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 3 Promises
Now you have me wondering what happened to Dean and Bobby! can't wait for the next installment!
Author's Response: Chapter 4 will be about the two. I hope you like it! Thanks a lot for the review!
Reviewer: deanilove (Signed) · Date: 24/08/08 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 3 Promises
This is a real good chapter. With Sam findingout what has happened to his brother and how he began to panic. It was well written. It could have turned into a boring chapter since not much happened but you did an awesome job! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: hehe, I'm so so glad that it didn't turn out to be that boring ;) Thank you so much for the support. I really appreciate it!
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 24/08/08 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 3 Promises
Thanks for the pie!! lol. Tastes as good as this story. Poor Sam, hope Ellen can help. Love how you show how well sam knows his brother in this and that he'd never leave him if he had the choice. Loved Sam noticing the lack of boot marks between stains. I could feel how he felt. Great work, looking forward to more. Mary x :)
Author's Response: Yay, Mary! I'm so happy you liked the pie, lol Ah, that's good to know! I tried my best to depict his struggle but I was't really sure if it had worked. So that makes me really happy! Thanks for the feedback ;) hugs Masi X
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 23/08/08 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 3 Promises
great update..I was wondering if you were going to get anyone else to help Sam..Can't wait to read more. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: hey mustang! thanks a lot! I'm so glad that you're still sticking around! hugs masi
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 23/08/08 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 3 Promises
A great update. Looking forward to finding out what this demon want's with Dean.
Author's Response: THANKS! Come on! Isn't it obvious why Dean is targeted? hurt!dean :D ist insatiably sexy! just kidding...the lack of sleep now mixed with endless relief of having everything behind me make me...too happy! Soon you will get the answers, I promise. Thanks for the review, darkhunter!
Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 23/08/08 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 3 Promises
That exactly what i would do if I was in sam's place - call ellen. Anyways guessing more to come, probably something about Dean in the next chapter...please? Ok please update soon. Cant help worrying about poor dean..... Great Job!!!!
Pranami :)
Author's Response: Heyya Pranami! Thank you so much for reviewing. I'm really glad you are enjoying the ride. YES, the next chapter is about Dean. Hope you like it ;)
Reviewer: deanilove (Signed) · Date: 22/08/08 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 1 Distraction
Bitie, I´m losing my mind here! update, PLEASE!
Reviewer: jensenluva28 (Signed) · Date: 18/08/08 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 2 The Bird and the Worm
OMG Dean! Wow this is really good! Update soon! PLEASE! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I am so glad you liked it!
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 17/08/08 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 2 The Bird and the Worm
Evil, evil cliffie but I'll forgive you because this story is great! Poor Dean the only person he trusts apart from Sam and you made him a baddie....I love it!! Can't wait for more. Mary xx
Author's Response: Mary, I want to get you a pie ^_^ you were the first one who reviewed on this story! thanks a lot for the encouragement! *hugs*
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 16/08/08 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 2 The Bird and the Worm
awesome chapter. Please update soon. Can't wait to read more. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Thanks, mustang! The next chapter will be up next friday. hope you check it out ;)
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 15/08/08 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 2 The Bird and the Worm
Ouch!! That's for both the boys and the very evil cliffie. Well, chapter two certainly delivered Big Time... Bobby 2 - Sam and Dean 0. Drugged and shot and beaten, they are in some serious trouble this time. It just seems so wrong for Bobby, normally the only one they can depend on, to be the Big Bad this time. Excellent pace and dialogue and the tension is mounting beautifully. A great read, please update soon!! Thanks. Jane
Author's Response: hey Jane! Thank you so much for the kind words! It`s so much fun to write evil!Bobby and to read how you all react seeing him like that I love it :D
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 15/08/08 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 1 Distraction
Okay, you've got me totally captivated! Wonderful first chapter, great banter between the boys, then Evil Bobby thrown in for good measure. It shows just how exhausted they were that they missed Bobby not Holy Water cocktailing them on arrival - though it sounds as though Dean may be starting to feel a few prickles of apprehension. Cant wait to read the next chapter. Thanks. Jane
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 15/08/08 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 2 The Bird and the Worm
OK... you have got my full attention. AWESOME start!!!!! Making Bobby evil... that's just so wrong on so many levels...but you are a genius. OUTSTANDING writing!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! BRAVO!!!!!!! MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Wow, Recca, I`m flattered! I should feel bad for doing that to Bobby but I gotta admit I enjoy it *evil guffaw* Thanks for reading! hope to see you next friday!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 15/08/08 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 2 The Bird and the Worm
Poor Dean, and whats happened to Sam? This story is getting very exciting.
Author's Response: yay! you liked the chappie. that makes me happy ;) thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: deanilove (Signed) · Date: 15/08/08 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 2 The Bird and the Worm
That was one hell of chapter, Bitos! I loved it! Poor Dean, I wonder what is going on. why is this demon (?) after him? I dig cliffies, so no need to worry ;)
Author's Response: So glad you liked the chapter and even the cliffihanger! You`ll get the answers...soon, I pormise! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: shattershockred (Signed) · Date: 15/08/08 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 2 The Bird and the Worm
oh my! oh my!! Must stop hyperventalating.....what happens next???????
Author's Response: OMG, I hope I`m not too late! Just try to calm down...take a deep breath...lol So does that mean that you liked it? thanks a lot for reading!
Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 15/08/08 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 2 The Bird and the Worm
Well this was awesome. An Awesome Cliffhanger. Looking forward for more. Keep it going. Good job by the way!!!!
Pranami :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Pranami! I really appreciate the encouragement! *hugs* Bitos
Reviewer: HauntMe42 (Signed) · Date: 15/08/08 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 2 The Bird and the Worm
I won't kill you....yet. Awesome story, this is the one i've been waiting for. I read the first chapter like...yesterday? i don't remember. But it's awesome and i want more. Poor Bobby...he's possessed....right? I'm pretty sure. Anyways, PLEASE update soon, or i'll have to think twice about...you know..not scraping you. lol.
Author's Response: oh, oh...just don`t HauntMe, please.lol Seriously, thanks a lot for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: deanilove (Signed) · Date: 15/08/08 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 1 Distraction
yep, I can only agree with pranami, there. I liked the banter between Sam and Dean!
Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 11/08/08 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 1 Distraction
Wow...... a good start I should say!!!! I like the pranks between the brothers ...... so cute..... Well the red eyes looks like the crossroads demon (I guess). Once again a good start....... (goin to give it a 10)waiting for the next chapter soooooooon........
Pranami :)
Author's Response: wow! I don`t know what to say! Thanks a lot! Yeah, thanks to my baby brother I didn`t need to invent the pranks. They are all based on experience, lol. Anyways, thanks again for reading!
Reviewer: shattershockred (Signed) · Date: 10/08/08 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 1 Distraction
Holy cow!! Awesome beginning!! Please update soon!!
Author's Response: hehe...thanks, ssr! happy you liked it!
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 09/08/08 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 1 Distraction
great start..Bobby as the bad guy..can't wait to read more. Thanks for writing.
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 09/08/08 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 1 Distraction
Whoa, what a sneaky way to start. Turning Bobby evil is just mean, and inventive as hell. (Wish I'd thought of it.) Waiting for more! Sue
Author's Response: Hehe, what can I say I am cruel person! but sometimes it`s fune to be that cruel, lol Thanks for reviewing, Sue!
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