Reviewer: turch (Signed) · Date: 26/10/08 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 5 Open Wounds
Don't hide!! Just get that next part up!! LOL! Excellent job!!! :)
Reviewer: deanilove (Signed) · Date: 01/10/08 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 5 Open Wounds
uh...I dont want to push you but can you upload the next chapter, PLEASE? Im sitting dangerously close to the edge of my chair since the last chapter. my fingers are numb. I can barely hold on! I need you to save me, Masi!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 21/09/08 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 5 Open Wounds
Fantastic chapter. Lots of emotion, looking forward to the next part.
Author's Response: THANK YOU! It's good to see that you're still sticking with this story and enjoying it! Yuppie! I hope I won't disappoint! Hugs masi x
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 18/09/08 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 5 Open Wounds
awesome update..Don't leave us hanging to long..lol..Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: hey! thank you sooo much for reading and the kind words! I'm working on the next chapter. It will be up soon. hugs masi
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 18/09/08 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 5 Open Wounds
EXCELLENT chapter!!! the pain Dean felt for Damien you described great. Dean blameing himself about Sam leaving and now Damien and his families death. can't wait to read what you have in store for Dean by Damien. Renee
Author's Response: Hi Renee! I'm so so glad you liked it ;) Yeah, it's so Dean isn't it? Blaming himself for everything that went wrong. Oh, Damien has a lot in store for our favorite older brother *evil laugh* poor, Dean. I feel sorry for what I'm doing to him! Thanks a lot for reviewing, Renee!
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 18/09/08 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 5 Open Wounds
Ah ha, so that's who Damien is, I knew you'd tell us! Liked the back story. Can't wait to find out what's gonna happen to poor Dean and what about Bobby. Sam where the heck are you boy?? Cheers Mary x Ah-hem! Some of us won't get to see the premiere. Why'd I have to be Scottish??!! I want to see it too! *pouts*
Author's Response: Mary, you gotta be kidding me! You live in one of the most beautiful countries on the world! But it's a shame you didn't get to see the premiere in Scotland. Did you try youtube for instance? Mary, I have one more question: the profs, they let me fail the oral exam! I so wanna kick their asses! Fortunately I got a yes from a college in another city. But now I have to leave my family. because of them! And man I won't lie when I say hate them for that! So I want to kick their asses with the help of the Winchester brothers! How about we write this story together and post it on UnGen? I don't know when I will be able to start it with you because of moving away and with college starting and all. But I wanted to write a story with you and wanted to know if you are interested. It could also be another story, with a completely different plot and characters, not staring the two monsters that ruined my life. So what do you say? You in? Thanks for the wonderful review by the way! Hugs Masi x
Reviewer: riquitv (Signed) · Date: 18/09/08 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 5 Open Wounds
thanks for the chapter, i love it, and YES, I'M SO EXCITED about the season premiere. Until the next chapter, i hope you can update soon :)
Author's Response: hola, Rut! ¿Qué tal? It's a pleasure to welcome a new reader! Yeah, the season premiere. It was awesome, wasn't it? I won't tell more because of the ones who hadn't the opportunity to watch it yet. I'm glad that you are enjoying the ride so far! Thanks again for reading and reviewing! Masi x
Reviewer: deanilove (Signed) · Date: 18/09/08 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 5 Open Wounds
holy shit! that was awesome! you did a great job by giving us this kind of insight! I could feel everything the characters felt! I feel sorry for Damien. he seemed to be such a nice guy, before this all happened. And then showing how Dean blamed himself for his friend's death, and for Sammy leaving him. So you picked the title of the chapter pretty well. Not only did you show us Damien's open wounds but also the ones the other two Winchesters are trying so desperately to hide. Epic! With every new chapter you manage to top the previous one. You have the rare talent to make the tension rise bit for bit with every new chapter you add. A stone or his father. Sometimes he wondered which one could be more emotional. God, I love your sense of humour! So tomorrow is your B-day? You're right I couldn't imagine a better Birthday present than a new episode of Supernatural. Enjoy you B-day Party! Lisa x
Author's Response: heyya Lisa! I'm flattered! And I don't know what to say! Kudos to you for your interpretation! You hit the mark! It's so good to see that message behind this chapter came over they way I wanted it. Yeah, it was a lot of fun to watch the Premiere directly after the party although I couldn't remember most of the next morning, lol. Lisa, your reviews make my day! Now that my batteries are charged with so much positive energy I think I should go and continue the work on the next chapter! Hugs and kisses Masi x
Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 18/09/08 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 5 Open Wounds
Oh Wow!!! This was so gooooood.... Actually, I would say that it was good that u gave a flashback of dean's encounter with Damien. I was just wondering who Damien was. I also tried searching all the hunter's names that I may have missed in season 1 or season 2. But came up Blank. For an instant I thought it could have been caleb.....foolish me....hehehehe. Well, keep posting. An AWESOME job btw!!!
Pranami :)
Author's Response: omg, pranami. I don't know what to say! This is so cool that you tried to find something about Damien ^_^ kudos to you! That's right, Damien isn't Caleb. I'm working on the next chapter. I'm so glad you're still enjoying the ride! Hope I don't disappoint! Thanks again! hugs Masi x
Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 18/09/08 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 5 Open Wounds
Good chapter -- thank so much. Work is going toooooo slow!!!
Author's Response: thanks a lot, mtee! Yeah, I hear you and I'm really sorry for that. Life's been a real bitch these weeks. But I hope you will stick with me and and the story despite everything. Your reviews keep me going on this story!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 14/09/08 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 4 Master of Puppets
Great chapter. Very creepy. Good luck with your exam results.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, for the review and for wishing me good luck! I am so glad that you're still enjoying the ride!
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 10/09/08 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 4 Master of Puppets
Fantastic chapter I don't know why Dean would be so scared of Damien, can't wait for the next chapter to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks, Maureen! I hope you like the next chapter! *hugs* masi x
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 10/09/08 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 4 Master of Puppets
Who is Damien??????
Author's Response: lol, the next chapter will answer this question. I hope ;)
Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 10/09/08 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 4 Master of Puppets
Ok this was worth the wait!!! An awesome chapter....keep it going? And about the exams.... I fully agree with you. I too had to suffer like hell for my french oral exams. Oral exams do really suck......hehehe. Well, anyways all the best for ur results and waiting eagerly for the next chapter. Keep it going. An awesome chapter once again!!!
Pranami :)
Author's Response: Hey Pranami! It was? shuu...that makes me really happy! French oral exam? I had to endure one myself, so I totally hear you! This one, however was terrible. I swear at least, one of them was possessed, lol. I had to answer questions concerning anatomy, I had to explain in full detail how a doc hasd to diagnoise certain diseases. And I haven't even started with studying medicine. I am so glad I had learned all that stuff for a just in case situation like that. I really appreciate that you are still stucking with me and this story! You ROCK, lol Masi x
Reviewer: deanilove (Signed) · Date: 10/09/08 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 4 Master of Puppets
by the way I hope you pass all your exams! Semms to be pretty tough, from what you described! I wish you good luck, honey!
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 10/09/08 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 4 Master of Puppets
Wow, you call that exaggeration? then exaggerate some more! (quickly...!) Its a freaky, scary angst-fest - mixed with a Dean!lollipop... tasty! I loved the way you let Dean hate looking after Sam, just for a moment, before he snapped right back into protective big brother mode - it made him vulnerable and gave a painful sense of his lonliness, not just being tied up with evil!Bobby, but with his life in general. Can't wait to find out who the hell damien is, what Dean did to him (or vice versa), and what he's now doing to Bobby, who's gotta be screaming somewhere inside!
Author's Response: wow, I'm flattered! That was exactly what I wanted to show, and I am so glad it worked! Yay! Thanks a lot for the feedback! Masi x
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 10/09/08 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 3 Promises
Ah, and here comes the blame game - they do it so well, and you wrote it beautifully! Come on, Sam to the rescue!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot, cal! I am so happy you liked it!
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 10/09/08 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 2 The Bird and the Worm
Kill you? for a cliffie like that?! where would you get that idea? ;) looks like the three of 'em are in for a whole world of hurt...
Author's Response: lol! Thanks! yep, it's just the beginning for the Winchester Trio (Yes, Bobby is a Winchester! ^_^)
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 10/09/08 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 1 Distraction
ooh, ominous! poor bobby - possessed?! that's just nasty... and some prank wars to lighten the mood, great!
Author's Response: Hey Cal! It's always a pleasure to greet new reader! Thnaks a lot. I really appreciate it! Masi x
Reviewer: deanilove (Signed) · Date: 10/09/08 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 4 Master of Puppets
Wuahh! This is getting better and better with every chapter! Bobby is really creepy. I wonder what the hell is wrong with him. And then Dean. Poor baby! I feel so sorry for him! This whole thing with Bobby will break him even more. Can't wait to see who Damien is. Please, let the next chapter be about Dean!
Great writing! Keep up the good work!
Lisa x
Author's Response: Lisa! Thanks for the support. You truely are awesome! The next chapter is about Dean, I promise!
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 10/09/08 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 4 Master of Puppets
Firstly, good luck with the college thing, I hope you get the result you want BUT you've got the professor's names right, so if they mess with you, you can let Sam & Dean kick their ass in another story! Glad you had a little delay 'cos it gave me a fine excuse to go back and reread the rest!! Yah! I have questions but I'm sure that you'll answer them soon. This was a great chapter, torture by silence, Dean's least favourite, he does hate the mind games. Can't wait to find out what happens next, cheers Mary x
Author's Response: Oh, Mary. Did I mention how much I love you *hugs* Thanks for the awesome idea, I would love to let the boys kick their butts. They weren't really friendly, to be honest. But I guess, it had something to do with the fact that I don't have rich parents and that I'm not a snob. Your reviews lighten my day! Masi x
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 10/09/08 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 4 Master of Puppets
Who the heck is Damien, what has he done to Bobby..Great chapter..Can't wait to read more. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: hey mustang! next chapter will hopefully answer you first question. and as far as Bobby is concerned, his weird behaviour will be explained, soon, lol Thanks for the nice feedback!
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 09/09/08 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 4 Master of Puppets
Great chapter; spooky. you tormented Dean with silence and we all know he hates that. i enjoyed how you described how he feels about Bobby. and to have Bobby be one of his tormentors; Excellent. Good luck on getting into college and hang in there. i am really liking this story so keep up the good work Renee
Author's Response: heyya, Renee! Thank you so much! It's so good to see that people actually enjoy what I write! I really appreciate it! I so hope I pass the oral exam, it's the mother of it all. If I pass nothing will stopp me anymore, lol!
Reviewer: supernatural21 (Signed) · Date: 09/09/08 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 4 Master of Puppets
Wow...amazing stuff so far, I'm always on the edge of my seat with your cliffies:p Just one question, who is Damien?
Author's Response: hihi! thanks a bunch! you will get the answer to your question in the next chapter!
Reviewer: deanilove (Signed) · Date: 05/09/08 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 3 Promises
Come one, sweetie! I`m dying to know what happens next! This story is awesome! Hurry, please!
Author's Response: lol, sorry for the wait, Lisa. Chapter 4 is up now. I so hope you like it. Thanks for the mail by the way! You're awesome!
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