Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 30/04/09 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 2
BAD!!!! no, bad that there is no true ending. there is a creative curve ball that was thrown and that is great, but I can't wait for the true finally. It is better then any other story.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 29/04/09 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 1
I can agree with most writers that useing feelings in stories are the greatest. Thou, this one is one that hits to the heart it was better then the ones that I have read before.
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 29/12/08 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 2
Holy evil cliffie!! You planning on ending our misery any time soon?? I love stories with Meg in them. She's sucha good baddie.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! Meg was an excellent foe, I hope I can do her justice and get her 'voice' right if you know what I mean. Sorry to leave you hanging with the cliffie... OK, not really. I love cliffies! (Yes, I am evil that way sometimes.) And don't worry, I'm almost done writing the next chapter so there should be an update coming up real soon!
Reviewer: jensengal3 (Signed) · Date: 24/08/08 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 2
can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: CatzEye (Signed) · Date: 18/08/08 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 2
This is a great follow-up to my two favorite episodes of Season 3 -- Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! "Jus in Bello" and "Mystery Spot" were such brilliant episodes, certainly two of my favorites as well. Glad you're enjoying my story so far!
Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 17/08/08 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 2
Wow!!!! Who are u?!!! This was so very awesome. U do know how to keep the readers hooked onto ur story. Really nice. Keep it going.... Once again a really nice cliffhanger. And yeah nice to see Meg back. really loved her character.
Pranami :)
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much for the wicked awesome compliments. I'm thrilled that you like that Meg is in this one. I think she's a great villain, and I had hoped that after BUABS she'd come back since they said she was still out there. That's why i had to bring her back myself. :P I hope I do her justice. I'm so glad you're enjoying this! Thanks again!
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 16/08/08 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 2
Hunny Well what a lovely shoulder wounding chapter. And you demons? nicely nasty! more please. bev xx
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I'm glad you like Dean's injured shoulder. What does it say about us that we like to see the poor guy get hurt anyway? One of those mysteries of life I suppose. Speaking of which...you ever notice how once a season Dean's left shoulder gets badly hurt? Anyway, thanks again for the comments. They're very much appreciated.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 16/08/08 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 2
Wow, two brilliant chapters. I'm looking forward to reading this story, it's going to be a good one.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind compliments!
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 16/08/08 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 2
ARGH!! Noooo! I wanna know what happens next, dammit! hehe In all seriousness, you are weaving one mighty fine tale here--even if it is fraught with cliffhangers. lol Great work.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! I'm sorry for the cliffies...OK, not really. :P
Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 11/08/08 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 1
really great....... this is just the beginning of the end!!!! heheheh......bring it on.....awesome work!!!!!
Reviewer: hellioness (Signed) · Date: 11/08/08 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 1
Nice job! I like how you got deep into Dean's head. Him blaming himself for not saving Nancy is so very Dean-like. The cliffie peaked my interest. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! It makes me happy to know that I got Dean's character right. I always tend to worry that I got them OOC. Glad you like this so far!
Reviewer: bunnykins (Signed) · Date: 09/08/08 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh yeah, what a great start to the story. Looks like this is going to be a great read. Just thought i'd let you know I really enjoyed reading it, can't wait to read another chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the comments. It makes me so happy to know you like it so far. I'll be updating soon! Promise. I hope you'll like what I have in store for the boys in future chapters. :P
Reviewer: Nilah (Signed) · Date: 09/08/08 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow! I am always on the lookout for Jus In Bello tags. I loved that episode and feel that the hurt Dean moment could be prolonged. Nice to see I have a like minded author out there. Can hardly wait. Nilah.
Author's Response: Ooh I love a good "Jus In Bello" tag! (Which is of course why I had to write a tag of my own) It was such a fantastic episode and I too would've loved to see more to the gunshot wound in that episode (obviously LOL). Thank you so much for the review, it means a lot!
Reviewer: ophium (Signed) · Date: 09/08/08 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 1
Oh! This looks really, really promessing! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the comment! I'll be getting the next chapter up soon, I promise. Thanks again!
Reviewer: supernatural21 (Signed) · Date: 08/08/08 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 1
Awesome start!!! OOO Dean is in some serious trouble...lmao
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you like it so far!
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 08/08/08 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 1
I was just thinking last night that I'd love to see some more tags for "Jus in Bello" that deal with Dean's gunshot. He was okay far too quickly for me. This was a great beginning. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I agree completely about Dean being OK too quickly in the episode. He was shot close to the beginning of the episode, spends the first half of the episode bleeding in the cell before it's even tended to and then fights an army of demons and the only sign that he was hurt was the occasional wince and the way he sometimes held his arm! I love that episode a lot, it's one of the best of the season, but I wish they had raised the stakes just a little in regards to that, not necessarily put him out of commission or go into emergency territory, but I think it would've been interesting to see Dean fight with the handicap of having to fight one handed. Yeah, Dean's tough and has a high tolerance for pain, but he's not a superhero, he has his limits. I guess that's one of the reasons I had to write a story that deals with it. Sorry i'm rambling. I do that sometimes. Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you like this so far!
Reviewer: jensengal3 (Signed) · Date: 08/08/08 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 1
OOhh exciting!! i loved it, can't wait for the next chapter!! Sarah
Author's Response: Thank you for the response! I'm glad you find it exciting so far!
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 08/08/08 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hey Deana W. Cute name hun...has a familiar ring?...go figure! I like your story, the characterisation is good and I'm enjoying Dean's poorly shoulder. thanks for sharing bev xx
Author's Response: Twas merely the name i was given. LOL. Thank you so much for the review! I'm so glad you like my story so far!
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