:: Supernaturalville

Reviewer: Haylia Jones (Signed) · Date: 19/10/10 11:16 PM · On: One-shot

very nice

Reviewer: ThePasserby (Signed) · Date: 09/08/08 04:47 AM · On: One-shot

oh that was great. really really good. i felt that last line. very well done, my compliments to the author.

Reviewer: punkin (Signed) · Date: 08/08/08 11:27 PM · On: One-shot

I absolutely loved it. It wasn't a story line I've seen a thousand times! Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 07/08/08 07:12 PM · On: One-shot

This was awesome, like everything else you write. You were kinda tough on John, but sometimes he has been too harsh with Sam. I'm glad Sammy is okay and he has big brother Dean. I loved how you sneaked in the poison ivy thing in the end. Hugs, Vonnie

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 07/08/08 07:39 AM · On: One-shot

Brilliant.
Yeah i agree that John would have made mistakes raising them the way he did, we know he was teaching tham all of this so they could protect themselves, i like John, but i could kick his ass sometimes lol.

Reviewer: kiara_ratterjmouse (Signed) · Date: 07/08/08 05:37 AM · On: One-shot

yeah i think he would have slowly gained sams trust back over time as well. maybe not all of it but definitely some.

Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 07/08/08 05:10 AM · On: One-shot

This was really good. Im with you on John Winchester, he tried so hard, probably too hard sometimes.
Liked it.
Jacq

Reviewer: Shade (Signed) · Date: 06/08/08 03:58 PM · On: One-shot

Wow, this was brilliant! All the characters' reactions were dead on true to their personalities and the whole idea of tricking Sam into his first kill just seemed so John. Loved both moments with the coin and how it went from a cute brotherly moment to just a nail in the heart for Sam so quickly. Oh and the ending? Perfectly tied it off. The whole story was just fantastic through and through. Awesome job. ~Shade

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