Pleeese give this beautiful car its rightful name. Your stories consistantly never capitalize the poor Impala's first initial, leaving her to be merely a little antelope, whose name is not capitalized. You even capitalize M & M's - has not the Metallicar earned her name to be a real, capital letter name, too? For the love of all car gods....

I really love the continuity in your stories, it;s like an entire universe of stuff!

Dix 

Wonderful story!  I loved it!

Wow, I'm speechless!!

Wow!  Incredible!!  I'm so tense I can't stand it!  Bramhurst not only gets eternal youth, but talent as well.  Yahtzee!

Incredible!  So now we know how Bramhurst keeps the girls alive for so long---and the cure to Kerri's condition.

Marvelous chapter!

So glad Dean isn't claustrophobic!

That was a close call for Kerri.  Luckily the effects seem to be temporary.  but I know how evil you are and she's not out of the woods.

Geez, you're really mixing up the pot, adding lots of interesting bits!  This is turning out to be quite an adventure.

I like the line Dean uses, "your dad said I couldn't cut holes in the floor."  I can picture a young Dean and young Kerri devising intricate traps for bad guys.  Too funny!

I also like the line Sam uses on his Dean that his ideas generally suck.

After reading previous stories in this series, I'm so sad about Evelyn and Tom.  In the first story I wasn't emotionally invested, but now I am.  Evelyn was just like Sam, but she changed, her family changed.  It's sad. 

Great beginning chapter!  I really love how you set the mood in all your stories.  I have such a clear picture inside your characters heads.  Thanks!

yup, rays of sunshine ! Nice ending Maggie, loved this story, happy Kerri made it, and hope we'll see her again soon...

I knew you couldn't/wouldn't kill Kerri..... - Well, I had my fingers crossed! Now we can see her again.....! Thanks for the ride!