Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 25/09/08 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 34
Thanks for this, I really enjoyed this story, unusual villian, which makes a nice change. I like your writing style, its different and utterly enjoyable. Thank you for the mention, I love reading other people's stuff as much as I like writing my own. Hope to see more from you soon, take care. Mary xx
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind comment and the stars. *bg* In regards to the villian, I needed something that Dean could fight, despite his deafness. Plus, I liked the fact that I really didn't need to give the villian a name, since all I had to do was spell what she was backwards. You deserve the mention. As you said earlier, RL can really keep a person busy. So, I greatly appreciated the fact that you routinely gave me feedback on the chapters I posted. The feedback did encourage me to keep writing and to regularly update the story. So again, thanks for taking the time to leave stars and reviews.
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 25/09/08 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 33
Yeah Dean's fixed, I know you wouldn't leave him deaf! Like me your evil streak only extends so far..lol! Sorry all these reviews are at once but RL and work has seriously limited my reading time. Cheers Mary xx
Author's Response: Me... have an evil streak? Never! *shakes head* I blame everything on my muse. LOL. Plus, if or when I write another story, Ill need Dean to be 100%. Don't worry about a thing. *hug* I know all about how RL likes to makes things more difficult, at times. I do appreciate you finding the time, to read my story and to leave feedback and stars. *bg*
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 25/09/08 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 32
Nice to have someone other than Dean guilt tripping! Poor Bobby thought, I feel sorry for him. I like how Bobby always feels the need to look out for Dean, he needs it sometimes! Still really enjoying this story. MAry xx
Author's Response: Thank you for your comment and the stars. *bg* I figured the Winchesters can't be the only ones who know about guilt trips. ;) Plus, since the show has portrayed Bobby as being a bit of a father-figure to the boys, I thought that it would be appropriate for him to feel bad for what took place. I'm glad that you're enjoying the story. :)
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 25/09/08 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 31
Poor Dean still thinking he was in the water! Glad he's safe with Sam and Bobby again. Mary x
Author's Response: Since he was unconscious when Sam pulled him out of the water, I figured it wouldn't make sense for Dean to immediately know that he was in Bobby's house and was safe. Plus, it added a little more angst to the story. ;) Thanks you for the stars and your remark. *bg*
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 25/09/08 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 30
Glad it was a dead Nerisa in the water and not a shark! All we need now is for Dean to get better! Mary xx
Author's Response: You want Dean to get better as well? Wasn't it enough that I didn't have a shark on his tail? ;) LOL. Guess you'll have to wait and see if whether or not Dean really does get better. Thanks for the comment and the stars. *bg*
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 25/09/08 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 34
WOW... this was really a great story!!!! I love how you built up the tension and suspense with each chapter. You got the interaction between the brothers down to a tee-OUTSTANDING writing. Visually vibrant verbage and an interesting storyline may this a must read.AWESOME job!!!!! this chapter was really funny-especially with the boys playing with Bobby - everything just fit well. excellent delivery all the way thru- you gave your readers just enough to keep them coming back for more.!!! BRAVO!!!!!!
Author's Response: Oh my gosh, thank you! :) I'm glad that you felt that I accurately portrayed the brotherly interaction among themselves and with Bobby. I wanted to make the story interesting and wanted readers to keep coming back for more. I'm pleased that you felt that I succeeded with that. Thank you for your generous review and the stars. *huge grin*
Reviewer: Fenrees (Signed) · Date: 25/09/08 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 34
Hey, just wanted to say I've enjoyed the story. Thanks for writing it:)
Author's Response: You're welcome. I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks for leaving a comment.
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 25/09/08 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 34
Great ending, why did Sam and Bobby both think Dean was about to pull some sort of prank on them,? so glad the story ended on the right note. Thanks for writing it. And for the mention. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Since Sam and Bobby didn't immediately know that Dean's hearing had returned and since he is known for pulling pranks, I figured that they might be a little suspicous if he suddenly had a smile on his face. Since you regularly took the time to leave me feedback on my story, I wanted to let you know how much I appreciated you taking the time to do that. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and once again, thank you for your remarks and the stars. *bg*
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 25/09/08 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 33
Great chapter, It made me smile to imagine the brothers conversation. Loved it that you got Dean's hearing back. looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind comment and the stars. *bg* I did have fun writing that scene between the brothers. :) And, I couldn't leave Dean injured. I'm going to probably need him to be 100%, in a future story. LOL.
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 25/09/08 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
Good story! You included plenty of detail of what deafness would be like. I really liked that.
Author's Response: Thank you. I really wanted to show how deafness would affect Dean, both as a person and as a hunter. I'm glad you that you felt that I achieved that. Thank you for taking the time to leave a comment.
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 24/09/08 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 32
Brilliant chapter, Can't wait for the next update to read more. Keep them coming.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind comment and the stars. *bg*. Only two chapters left and I'll be submitting them real soon.
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 23/09/08 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 31
Another great chapter, So they've all been saved from the siren, great news. Now we have to work on Dean's hearing. Can't wait for the next one. Thanks.
Author's Response: Work on Dean's hearing? You mean he can't remain deaf? :o I guess you'll just have to wait and see what happens in the next chapter or two. Thank you for taking the time to leave a comment and stars. *bg*
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 23/09/08 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 30
Great chapter, Glad it wasn't anything nasty in the water with Dean.
Author's Response: Thanks for leaving a comment.
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 22/09/08 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 29
I like it Dean always finds a way to blame himself doesn't he?? And what the heck is that with the cliffhanger??? Onwards....... Mary xx
Author's Response: I'm glad that you're enjoying the story. :) Dean does seem to frequently go on guilt trips, doesn't he? Did you like the cliffhanger? Sorry about that. I just couldn't help myself. I felt like I needed to leave Dean in the water, with that thing that's been bumping into him, a little while longer. *eg* Thank you for leaving stars and a comment. *bg*
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 22/09/08 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 28
Poor Bobby, major guilt trip there! And what the heck is behind Dean?? Do I even want to know?? Yes!! Onto the next chapter....... (only time I like playing catch up!!)
Author's Response: Dean and Sam aren't the only ones who know about guilt trips. :) Yes, what is behind Dean, any ideas? Thanks for leaving a comment and stars *bg*
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 22/09/08 03:41 AM · On: Chapter 27
Never mind flipping Nerisa boys...what about Dean!! Nice I like that the concern is all about her at the moment, so know that'll change when the spell wears off...it does wear off right?? Mary x
Author's Response: Thanks for the stars. *bg* Would you hate me, if the spell didn't wear off? ;)
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 21/09/08 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 29
Great chapter, I hope that it's Sam grabbing him from the front and not something grabbing hold of his feet to pull him back out. Update soon Please!!
Author's Response: Sharks have been known to come very close to shore, in order to get its prey. *evil grin and sinister laugh* Thank you for leaving a comment and stars. *bg* And since you asked so nicely, I've recently submitted the next chapter. Once its been validated, it will be available for you to read.
Author's Response: Sharks have been known to come very close to shore, in order to get its prey. *evil grin and sinister laugh* Thank you for leaving a comment and stars. *bg* And since you asked so nicely, I've recently submitted the next chapter. Once its been validated, it will be available for you to read.
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 20/09/08 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 28
Fantastic chapter, you haven't saved dean form the siren only to have him attacked but something else form the deep?? (you mentioned a shark earlier) Update soon, looking forward to it.
Author's Response: Well... since sharks do live in the ocean, I think it makes sense that Dean would worry that his blood loss might attrack some unwanted predators. ;) (I will admit that the theme from Jaws was playing, in my head, as I wrote this chapter.) Thanks for the comment and stars. :)
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 19/09/08 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 27
Great chapter, when is the effect of the siren going to wear off? If she dies I suppose. so is that coming up? I hope she is dead and then they can feel all guilty about trying to kill Dean. Update ASAP.
Author's Response: Guess you'll have to read the next chapter to find out if Nerisa's control stops and to see whether or not she gets killed. ;) Next chapter will be up soon. Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment and stars. *bg*
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 18/09/08 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 26
Ok, that's better, Dean's back in control. Why do I get the horrid feeling that you're gonna change that?? Mary xx
Author's Response: Who me?! What makes you think that I would change who's in control? *eg* *rubs hands fiendishly together* Thanks for the stars! *bg*
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 18/09/08 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 25
Poor Bobby but it really had to be done. One down and a Sam to go. Glad the next chapter is already up. Moving swiftly on..... Mary x
Author's Response: I didn't like hurting Bobby; but as you pointed out, Dean really didn't have a choice. Since the momentum has picked up, I'm trying to update the story daily. Thanks for leaving a comment and stars *bg*
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 24
HI there Gosh you've been busy, lots of chapters for me to catch up on, (sorry I've been fighting with my own story and was away at the weekend!) Poor Dean, it is not looking good is it? How is he going to break Narisa's hold on the others and avoid a nasty fall as well by the looks of things. Looking forward to seeing where you take this. Cheers Mary xx
Author's Response: I hope you had a nice weekend and that things are moving along well for your story. Perhaps, your muse joined mine and that's why I managed to get so much done on my story. ;) Dean just isn't having too much good luck right now. Three against one and the three are out to kill, while poor Dean just wants to save Sam and Bobby. The odds definitely aren't in Dean's favor. Thanks for the comment and stars. *bg*
Reviewer: Fenrees (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 24
NEXT PLEASE:P
Author's Response: Next chapter will be up soon. :)
Reviewer: caty (Signed) · Date: 15/09/08 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 1
wow it was short but i loved it reading more to find out why dean is acing werid xx
Author's Response: Thank you for leaving a comment and stars. *bg* I wanted to start the story with a bit of a teaser; hence, the first chapter is so short. I hope you continue to enjoy the story. :)
Reviewer: Fenrees (Signed) · Date: 15/09/08 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 22
Wow, there was suddenly a whole lot of chapters to cath up on. Nice job on the updating:) Eagerly waiting for the next one as well. Fenrees
Author's Response: My muse really kicked in and I was able to get a lot of work done. :) Next chapter will be up soon. Thanks for leaving a comment.
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