Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 28/01/07 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 7

This is awesome Terry. Truly, the whole story is. I love it that  Sam is starting to see that he might not be the only one who has serious unresolved issues with their father. And that during the time he was away from Dean there were events that have contributed to the way Dean is right now. I also love it that you don't stint on the details of injuries or illness, showing the moments when the boys need to care for each other - moments that we will probably never get on the show -at least not to that extent. I am a big fan of  Dean-centric stories, (is that stating the obvious?) but I think you have written Sam very sympathetically in this one. I feel for him.

You can stop worrying about the ending: there is no way it's going to be a bust. And you are forgiven for the short chapter, as long as the next one/s are LONG -and here before I die of suspense!  Many thanks.

Author's Response: Ta so much for the comments! I gotta stop making these up as I go, the endings alwasy keep changing, so we'll see. Although I have to admit, when I think about this one, I smirk a little. 

Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 28/01/07 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 7

I knew it! When you said that you couldn't believe people hadn't figured it out, I took that as a challenge and re-read 1-6... and I just knew that John had done something to Dean. I wasn't sure if it was to save him or accidentally, but I knew that it was more than that werewolf. This is great -- just GREAT!

I laughed out loud when Dean scared Sam bad enough that he actually tossed the cell phone away from him. Still chuckling about that.

And this realization on Sam's part:

>>"The fact that he still managed to function with his psyche constantly at war with the man he had become and the lonely, frightened child, desperate for approval, that lurked just under the surface gave Sam with a hollow ache and filled him with fear on Dean’s behalf."

This is something I wish Sam would realize on the show. Realize how this life has really screwed his brother up.

Also, want to say that I really like your Caleb -- there have been many versions of him throughout the fandom, but yours rings true to me so far. I hope that's him calling back to find out where they are, because someone is going to have to help Sam help Dean...

*Eagerly awaits more*

Author's Response:

Wow! Several people have commented on Caleb's character in this. I don't know why I made him  this way, it just seemed to suit.

Glad this chapter was such a hit, it was hard to write and say what I wanted without saying too much.

After all, story ain't over yet...

(Bounces eyebrows, smiling slightly)

 

 

 

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 28/01/07 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 7

Fabulous as always! Loved Dean's maze of a mind. You totally have these boys down. Please don't make me wait another week for the next chapter - pllleeeeaaase!

Author's Response: Ta, I hit a road bl0ck but i think I got it now. My stupid computer was messed up.  Glad you're liking it!

Reviewer: kittsbud (Signed) · Date: 21/01/07 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 6 Stumbling To The Light

Dude, are you ever going to put me outta my misery here? Get back and finish this thing! ;)

Author's Response: Ta. Not much more, thank God. I'm so far behind on everything I haven't caught up with yours, Trees or the last 2 episodes on the VS. I gott read today.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 20/01/07 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 6 Stumbling To The Light

I have been anxiously checking for this next chapter every day - and it was worth the wait. I love going along for the ride, and so I don't usually waste any time thinking about how an author will develop a story line. But this time I thought "Sam will have to call Caleb, he'll have to call Caleb' - and he did! I was absurdly pleased with myself, but I'm not doing any more thinking. I'm handing control back to you, because you do it so well. This was great Terry, you have the boys true to life. Can't wait for the next instalment. No. I mean I really can't wait. No pressure!

 

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 20/01/07 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 6 Stumbling To The Light

Wow! Thanks for the TTE fix - I've really missed your posts. Keep those chapters coming. I've been checking several times a day.... You do a great job capturing the characters and I find myself using your stuff to fill in the "missing bits" of the episodes each week.

Author's Response: Ta , I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 10/01/07 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 1 Fallen Angels

I have been reading the Supernatural Virtual Seasons for some time, (LOVED "Writhe") but have only discovered the other fictions this week! (pathetic, I know, but I am so glad I did) I have read most of your work now, so a quick summary:

1. "Chipping Away" is awesome but it made me cry. You can shoot, stab, poison, slash and  beat up Dean,  (oozy infected wounds are good too!) but if you leave him alone I get so sad for him!
2. "Moonstar" IS dark, but it's redemptive too - and that's the trick. It's also great to see Sam having fits over Dean. Really, it's about time. Dean has been doing it for him forever.
3. I am hanging out for more of "Cry in the Night"  - and I did laugh in the last chapter
4. Finally, self-deprecation is an attractive quality, but don't go too far with it  - I wouldn't want you to stop writing because of it!

Congratulations all round,

Ciel

 

Author's Response:

Aren't you nice! I'm actually a flaming egocentric who craves the approval of strangers. Except when I'm not. Then I go back into my hole and have to be coaxed back out. Thru Terry's Eyes is a lovely persona to hide behind. She's much tougher than I am.

 I'm glad you like my stuff and welcome to the world thru my eyes.

Reviewer: fairyntoad14 (Signed) · Date: 10/01/07 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 5

Dr. Stephen Mercer, why does that name seem so familiar? I did a search but didn't find anything, Weird. Anyways I am all caught up now, and can’t wait for the next chapter! Hope your doing well, and writing a whole bunch!!

Oh by the way, I like your attitude! LOL 

Author's Response: You know what's funny, that name was familier to me too and I can't figure out from where. I just needed a name and that one popped in my head. Working on chapter 6 as we speak, instead of working like I'm supposed to be. 

Reviewer: fairyntoad14 (Signed) · Date: 10/01/07 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 3 It Didn't Stop Turning

LOL, if the shoe is tied who cares how it got there! I like this chapter, Very nicely done!!

Reviewer: fairyntoad14 (Signed) · Date: 10/01/07 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 1 Fallen Angels

Ok I am very upset with that Fan fiction site!! I'm not getting my alerts, so I’m missing your story!! This makes me a very unhappy person! So I have hunted you down to this site. I don’t know how every thing here works yet, but I’m trying. I started off at the beginning because good things are worth repeating! The baby still creeps me out though!! 

Author's Response: Hey Hi! This site is actually easy to work, you won't ahve any problems!

Reviewer: Novembers_Guest (Signed) · Date: 07/01/07 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 5

Well, actually, I did laugh, thank you very much.  And, I don't mind your self-deprecation as long as you don't mind me trying to make you feel better :).

I stormed through this so fast, that I can't believe its over so soon. 

Time for bed now, I was saving this as my bedtime treat...less caloric than ice cream. 

Author's Response: Ta. There won't be an laughter after this chapter. At least not much.

Reviewer: Novembers_Guest (Signed) · Date: 01/01/07 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 1 Fallen Angels

You are so ultra humble, that's why I don't mind praising you everywhere you go...I can rest assured that it won't go to your head. 

 I think this is a great story, but I can totally see how it would be frustrating to get all the groundwork laid for this one in particular, especially with you being such an action gal and all.

I love it and can't wait for more.