Oh would you stop with the sucking already? If there was any black hole sucking going on, it was this story and me {shhmmmoosshh} right into it.
You know what it is with your writing? It's not just the angst factor or the whumpage, which, by itself totally gets my gut in that clenched feeling that I refuse to figure out why I like.
It's the little details that you put in there -- like Dean rolling the napkins into tiny balls because he's distracted, how he had a hard time breating in the rain {shout-out to Chipping Away} and had to use the inhaler, the way he, God, just moves! The pacing, the finger on his face, the tattoo comment {cracked me up}... all that.
So, if it sucked for you, then bring on more black holes Carle Sagan, because I loved it. And I. Want. More.
Author's Response: I don't know why I'm having such a problem with this. It just seems so lame in some respects. Theres's no action and I have to lay so much ground work. I posted the last chapter last night just cause I couldn't come up with anything I liked better. I know it's just me. I read these great reviews and can't figure out what everyone else is seeing that I'm not.
But ta. I appreciate your opinion which is probably worth a lot more than mine.
