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Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 05/12/08 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 1

Poor Dean. That has to hurt like hell, your Dad not calling. What a *******!

Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 07/08/08 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 1

i loved it.  i always wondered if they called John, too, and how that would have played out

Reviewer: CatzEye (Signed) · Date: 29/07/08 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

A very well told story -- The final three lines are perfect - Well done!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 29/07/08 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 1

A very good story.

John needs a good shake sometimes, glad that Bobby called, just gotta love Bobby.

 

Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 29/07/08 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

You just want to smack John and Dean -- I wish he had left the first message - the angry one!!  Just let Dad have it for once.

 

Good story 

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