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Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 22/03/09 01:44 AM · On: Voices on Your Mind

Oh Pooka, you have me in tears. This is your best writing yet. It is so deep and so well down to get right to the heart of how we all felt when we watched that scene in disbelief. I feel the same level of despair in your words as I did then.
I loved how you had Sam hearing Dean screaming out, I always had in my mind that Dean's screams would reach him at some distant level. So sad, you killed me there.
You had Bobby absolutlely down pat - this voice, his gruffness, his love for the boys, his despair that he would have had to suck up to help get Sam moving. I loved this part of your fic to bits.
This is a very mature writing approach to a very grown up concept and you were exceptional as an author here for one so young.

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 30/11/08 02:56 PM · On: Voices on Your Mind

awww I loved this ash!
awesome job~
:)Jess

Author's Response:
Thanks so much Jess! Glad you liked it.
ash

Reviewer: Bugsbunny2 (Signed) · Date: 22/08/08 08:47 AM · On: Voices on Your Mind

WOW. this is good. its sad at the start then adding deans point of view... its cool

Author's Response:
well thanks! Sad with a twist right? 'Course, where would we be without a little Dean. lol Thanks for reviewing and reading!
Ashton/Pooka Bunny

Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 06/08/08 08:28 AM · On: Voices on Your Mind

Okay, now I feel depressed... Well done Ash! I liked it how you made Sam hear Dean just like in the episode In My Time Of Dying. And what would those boys do without Bobby? Haha, including Bela lightened the mood nicely. I loved Dean's last thought at the end: "Fight on, Sammy. Fight on."
Is it September yet? *sigh*

Author's Response:
Scan,
Thanks so very much! I wanted to include Sam hearing Dean so it would tie in better with the whole series. Bobby has to be the strong one no matter what. Bela well ya that's sure one way to light up a room. lol And Dean's last thought had to have something short but sweet, and have a lot of meaning to it. Glad to got a chance to read. Sept. hurry up!!!
Ashton/Pooka Bunny

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 31/07/08 11:55 AM · On: Voices on Your Mind

Pooka
Very nicely done hunny...liked Bobby's emotion and caring for Sammy. And Dean...so brave even in Hell! Thanks for sharing sweety. bev xx

Author's Response:
Thanks Bev! Ya I wanted his emotions to show a bit more than usual. Yup, well, I know how much it means to ya that Dean is strong. >;)Thanks again!
Ashy/Pooka

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 29/07/08 06:28 AM · On: Voices on Your Mind

That was brillient.
Thank goodness for Bobby,

Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading. I had to get Bobby in here somehow because I wanted his fatherly ways toward Sam to show more than ever. Thanks again for reviewing.
Ashton/Pooka Bunny

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 28/07/08 08:00 PM · On: Voices on Your Mind

I liked this. Excellent job! I could definitely feel Sam's, Dean's and Bobby's emotions.

Author's Response:
Wow. Thanks. I'm really glad you felt those emotions as I work very hard on them. Thank you so much for the stars as well.
Ashton/Pooka Bunny

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