Reviewer: deans_mine (Signed) · Date: 26/11/10 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 5
I'm so glad you finished this story with a punishment befitting the crime and not the guy being sexually abused back. I never think committing the same crime is just punishment. Most people say that living and regretting is a better punishment than death. Thanks for this different take on Falson!
Reviewer: cesh10 (Signed) · Date: 09/11/10 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 1
I'm liking it so far...
Reviewer: rahne (Signed) · Date: 25/01/09 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 5
Hi. I haven't read your stuff before, but I wanted to compliment you on writing clear and well constructed prose. It is refreshing in an age of spellcheck and E mail to read something written by a person who can express themselves well and using the correct lexicon. Thank you. I also want to thank you for this story specifically. All through this episode it struck me as unrealistic that a beautiful boy like Sam would not be immediately claimed by one of the dominant males in the prison society, especially when his protector kept getting himself sent to solitary. Dean and Deacon should have known better than to bring him into that in the first place. This is actually much more likely to have been what really happened. A sad commentary on prison culture and the depths of human nature under duress. But a good example of Sam's courage and the strength of his brother. There are good men even in the worst places and situations. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a thorough and ... well....ego boosting review. :D. I'm very glad you liked the story. :). Awesome.
Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 24/01/09 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 5
Oh, I'd say he got what he deserved, it's almost worst than hell where he is, it seems..:D...Justice served!...Although you had me worried there for a second they were going to kill him or have him killed..O.O..glad you didn't..:)
Author's Response: Thank you, very much. :). Yeah. I'm glad I didn't kill him. I think at that point Dean was more worried for Sam than for that dirtbag that....did that to him. Yeppers. *nods*. :D :D
Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 24/01/09 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 3
Yep, I definitely love your writing! This is awesome! When I first seen your name and then seen you had 49 stories already written, I was sure hoping you'd be a good writer, and YOU ARE! That means I have to something to read for the next several days...hehe, I'm probably gonna read alllll of your stories. :P
Author's Response: Awesome. The best thing a ficcer can hear. :D. *happy fangirl sigh*. <3. Thanks!! For the reviews and the praise. Awesome!! Enjoy them. ;).
Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 24/01/09 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 2
Emotional, slightly blurry, dramatic entrance...that was EXACTLY what I thought the beginning was, very nicely done!...aaaaand, although that kind of writing has very deep meaning, and is kind of poetic in a way, I'm glad you don't write like that all the time, cuz I usually cant stand to read more than a couple stories like that, it seems to always get a little annoying or confusing if anything after a while, so...yeah..:P
Author's Response: Thank you. :). Yeah, I have trouble reading long stories written like that too, but I wanted the affect at the beginning. ;). :D. Thank you, for the reviews. :D
Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 24/01/09 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oooooh, cool idea...I um...kinda maybe thought about this too when I seen that episode preview...well, cuz they're both gorgous, come on, what do you think would happen if they got thrown in prison...:P
Author's Response: Thank you. Yeah, I had the same thinking when I saw Folsom Prison Blues. I mean, c'mon, they're two good looking guys beating the crap outta the other guys. Retaliation is not improbable.
Reviewer: jshink (Signed) · Date: 30/10/08 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 1
that was funonamle writing
Author's Response: Thank you, very much! I'm glad that you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it. :D. ;). Thanks for the rating!
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 30/07/08 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 5
That was a good ending..I kind of wished Dean could of kicked the crap out of the dude..but he got what he deserved anyways..Glad Sam is recovering..Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Thank you, for the review. ;). Maybe I'll have a one-shot down the road where Dean gets ... MORE revenge. lol. But for now, it's all about focusing on getting Sam better. :). I'm glad that you enjoyed reading it!
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 30/07/08 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 5
this was a perfect end to the sob who hurt Sammy. Isolated , no one to talk to, and unending screaming- a living hell-PERFECT.OK ... I'm good now... you did an excellent job with this sensitive subject. You gave our boys room to deal with the hurting that enveloped both brothers. Survivors and their close friends / relatives are always affected by this crime-AWESOME job!!! I agree, Dean would have killed the sob- it wouldn't have helped Sam. you are a very talented writer- I look forward to reading more of you work!!! BRAVO!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, very much. :).
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 30/07/08 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 5
I'm glad you wrote it with Dean never confronting the creep. I like how Dean put his need for revenge aside and let others take care of it allowing him to focus on his brother. The truth of the matter is it would be easier not to have a face to go along with the images in his head. Well done.
Author's Response: GotTheShining, I'm glad that you liked it and I agree that Dean did NOT need that running around in his skull. lol. Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 30/07/08 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 5
Now I'm kinda sad it's over. This was a great story. I loved the way you ended it. Sometimes it is better not to have Dean get to the guy. And better for Sam. Hugs, Vonnie
Author's Response: Definitely better for Sammy. ;). I really enjoyed writing this one and I'm glad you liked reading it. :). Thank you for the review. :).
Reviewer: danny (Signed) · Date: 30/07/08 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 4
This is a good story, it's inspartion to people that have been in that postion. My friend was rape a few years ago, and she has got over it but she never really forgets. I now know that all i have to do is to be there for her and to help her. So thank you. Danny xxxx
Author's Response: Danny, I am so sorry about what happened to your friend. She will be in my prayers. It is a very, very hard thing to go through, but just being there and being supportive is the best thing that you can do...It's a form of stability and safety. Thank you, for the review. I'm glad that my story made an impact. :).
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 30/07/08 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 4
WOW... very powerful and very well done-excellent writing. Hearing Sammy tell Dean about the attack-his tears falling as he spoke- remembering how the beast held him-how he couldn't escape-totally gut wrentching!!!!AWESOME job. Dean's desire to help Sam back to normal-Sam's desire to make it go away-yet Sam realizes he has months of remembering and dealing with it-OUTSTANDING work. timing -tenor-visually vivid verbage-excellent writing!!!! You have taken a dark subject and handled it with ease-BRAVO!!!!!!! more please.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad that I pulled it off. :). It was a balancing act, to be sure. Getting enough in there without going into detail - something I did not want to do - and I'm just super-excited that it worked well. :). I'm glad that you enjoyed reading. More on the way!
Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 30/07/08 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 4
Wow, this was pretty powerful. Poor Sam and poor Dean.Having to go through something like this is awful. I understand that Dean feels very much out of control and Sam has guilt feelings. Can't wait for the epilogue. Hugs, Vonnie
Author's Response: Aw! Thank you! :). Yeah, I tried to stay true to character AND true to the situation at hand. I am not confident that I entirely succeeded, but I am happy with the result. ;). epilogue coming soon. :).
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 30/07/08 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 4
Glad to see they talked about it..So the story is over and Dean didn't beat the holy crap out of the guy who hurt Sam..Interesting story..Thanks so much for writing.
Author's Response: It isn't over yet, there is still the epilogue...umm....it might consist of some abuser whumping. ;). Thank you for your review. I'm glad that you enjoyed reading it. :D.
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 29/07/08 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is twizted, but it will be interesting to see how you put this story together..Poor Sam..
Author's Response: Mustang, Thank you for the review! I'm loving how this story is going....although I'm hoping to surprise more than a few with how Sam actually DOES deal with what happened to him. :).
Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 28/07/08 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great Story, this is really different but it is so emotional and painful and it makes me want to cry. Really, this is very well written. Hugs, Vonnie
Author's Response: Thank you so very much! *Glomps* You just made a fangirl very happy. ;). Next chapter coming soon. :D.
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 28/07/08 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
that was very intense. I especially liked the way you wrote the part where Sam called Dean's name twice. Looking forward to where you take it.
Author's Response: Thank you,'Shining, I'm liking where this story has taken me. More to come soon! :)
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 28/07/08 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 1
OMG...not Sam..... You have my attention on this one. the hurt and angst and hopleness pours right off the page.OUTSTANDING writing!!! Dean's horror at his brother's attack, Deacon's sad commentary for what he has caused his friend's children.AWESOME job! emotions are right off the scales.excellent work!! MORE PLEASE BRAVO!!
Author's Response: I am just psyched that someone liked it! I knew that it was a little different than the fanfic "norm" as far as style went, but it was about pure emotion. Kinda like a slow-mo intro to a movie drama or something. That's what I was going for. ;). The next chapter is going to get right into the story so I went back to my normal writing for it, but I hope that's okay. More is coming! Thank you, again, for such a wonderful review!!! You just made my day brighter. :).
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