Reviewer: breezybrie (Signed) · Date: 06/10/08 07:05 PM · On: Pickled Pig's Feet
one word awesome
Reviewer: Katric (Signed) · Date: 05/10/08 11:00 PM · On: Black-Eyed Skank
In this single moment, time stands still... "Don't you dare." He hisses. "I love this shirt." "It's old." "It's my favorite." "I'll buy you another." "Torture doesn't work with me." "Torture works on everyone, baby." And in this moment that time stands still---this moment lives, it breathes---your readers feel this as it unfolds... Heady stuff, you create a memory, that pushes its way into your reader's consciousness when they least expect it... A master storyteller creates moments in time that stay with the reader long after the reading, long after the power that's been infused within her, by the words, as they unfold... This is a gift given freely by the author, and cherished, so completely by the reader... Well done... A twist, a turn and a completely new angle...perfection in words and images...but then, we would expect no less from you... Thank you for letting us into your mind... Too much? Too bad...it is just the way it is...C'est la Vie...
Reviewer: Katric (Signed) · Date: 05/10/08 09:42 PM · On: Winter Wonderland
Haunting...your descriptions are haunting in their precise delineation of all that embodies such a man... "...He is of the wild..." of, "contained excitement and danger..." "...He moves from foot to foot...the movement is sensual and mesmerising." These moments speak so clearly to the reader---it's wonderful to breathe them in and live them through the images as they're described, through this moment in time. Remarkable detail---remarkable exposition... Heavenly...
Reviewer: Katric (Signed) · Date: 05/10/08 08:47 PM · On: Storms Coming, Pt 2/2 - A Promise Fulfilled
This story is sweet, sweet magic...so exquisite, it's sings---"thin material stretched tight and practically see-through, it's so wet..." how perfect can one moment be? "...nudged out of your stupor by a sudden bolt of energy." Yeah, that would be it...and "utterly refreshed" would be the way such a meeting would finally end... My heart feels ten years younger with your words and images...magic, pure magic...
Author's Response: Oh Kate, you're too good to me. It's not like this is hard. Just look at the subject we have to work with. And in answer to your query, I'm thinking any moment involving Dean and a wet t-shirt would be pretty damn perfect! Magic? Nah. Just sleight of hand. Kirsty x
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/10/08 07:13 PM · On: Storms Coming, Pt 2/2 - A Promise Fulfilled
I'm so glad I had the chance to meet up with him again! Thanks!!
Author's Response: Thank you. We're really pleased you enjoyed yourself. Hope you get to meet up with him again sometime (invite us along if you do?) The Objectifying Dean Team x
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/10/08 07:08 PM · On: Hot Fun
A completely different approach to the damsel in distress but Dean still rides to the rescue. Fabulous! I felt myself needing a cool bath and a cold lemonade.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/10/08 07:01 PM · On: Winter Wonderland
"brutally kind kisses"---oh yeah! You create a verbal picture just as a sculptor creates a masterpiece!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/10/08 06:58 PM · On: Black-Eyed Skank
A completely different angle! Amazing! The title caught my attention immediately. I was especially impressed with the description of how she felt vomiting the demon. Fantastic story!!
Reviewer: gypsywoman1 (Signed) · Date: 05/10/08 05:02 PM · On: Storms Coming, Pt 2/2 - A Promise Fulfilled
damn. *breathes in and out slowly* love. this. one. Great job.Whoever did this out of the 4 of you girls, I tip my hat to you. You all do so great with these I am sure the man himself gives you his gratitude. Now he has even more girls after him. Which he no doubt probably likes. Tori :D
Author's Response: Hi Tori, We're really glad you enjoyed yourself, objectifying along with us. Hope we've not ruined you for the real world... The Objectifying Dean Team x
Reviewer: gypsywoman1 (Signed) · Date: 05/10/08 04:55 PM · On: Hot Fun
*sighs* Lovely job. *smiles* Tori :D
Reviewer: gypsywoman1 (Signed) · Date: 05/10/08 04:48 PM · On: Winter Wonderland
perfect description. You've got him down to a science. A very beautiful, toned, dangerous, wanting, science...*sighs* If he were in my science class or was my teacher, I would love being in Science for life! Tori :D
Reviewer: gypsywoman1 (Signed) · Date: 05/10/08 04:43 PM · On: Black-Eyed Skank
Whoa. Ladies that was...yeah. Loved it! Tori :D
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 05/10/08 03:33 PM · On: Storms Coming, Pt 2/2 - A Promise Fulfilled
Four fab chapters. What are you trying to do to me, i can't stop drooling here lol.
Author's Response: Yup, drool was pretty much what we were aiming for. Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for reading and reviewing! The Objectifying Dean Team x
Reviewer: catchme21 (Signed) · Date: 05/10/08 12:37 AM · On: Storm's Coming, Pt 1/2 - Promise of a Storm
Oh you ladies are cruel. Excuse me while I go get a mop to soak up the drool. Lol I wonder what Jensen would think? Lmao he'd probably never face another fan girl down again, for fear that it would be one of us. Awesome job! It's like he's right in front of me...
Author's Response: Hang on, he's right there in front of you? Well, what the hell are we doing all the way over here? Keep him talking, we're on our way. "Girls, grab the objectification kit. We've got work to do!" Thanks for reading and reviewing. Glad you enjoyed! The Objectifying Dean Team x
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/10/08 07:06 PM · On: Emergency Room Chaos
Stupendous! What a gamut of emotions you put Dean through. I was spellbound---and you didn't have to strip him down to do it!
Author's Response: Well, my goodness, that was a whole lot of reviewing. And on top of all that objectification? You poor thing, you must be exhausted. You should take better care of yourself. We'll send Dean around with the massage oils straight away. Thanks for reading and reviewing, glad you enjoyed! The Objectifying Dean Team x
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/10/08 06:42 PM · On: The Glory Years
And the Gold goes to USA!
Reviewer: Mika (Signed) · Date: 02/10/08 05:07 PM · On: Emergency Room Chaos
HAHAHAHA VERY GOOD!!!!!! I LOVE IT (LLLLLLL
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for reading and reviewing! The Objectifying Dean Team x
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/10/08 04:15 PM · On: Storm's Coming, Pt 1/2 - Promise of a Storm
Your description of the humidity is soooo realistic! Wow, it had me warming up on this cold Autumn day. Then the real heat came with your description of the handsome mysterious stranger. Now I really do need a cold, brisk wind!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/10/08 04:11 PM · On: Kitty Cat
I was so tickled by this I had to laugh! All those women jealous of one poor, wretched cat. *sigh* I know how they feel.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/10/08 04:06 PM · On: Unconscious
Fantastic! And adding the music was inspired!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/10/08 03:59 PM · On: Corn Silk
I wonder, does he need any help scrubbing that corn silk off in the shower? We Iowa girls are pretty good at that.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/10/08 03:53 PM · On: Morning Sunshine
Where are my night vision goggles?
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/10/08 03:49 PM · On: Ectoplasm
Too funny! He's not the only one who needs to be hosed off with cold water!
Reviewer: Katric (Signed) · Date: 28/09/08 10:12 PM · On: Kitchen God
Oh, heart be still...at each reading the images portrayed still cause a reaction as if reading it for the first time--- "...eyes caught and feet stilled by the vision before you." I'm standing there... "You know he is aware of your presence, has been since you stepped through the door..." I can see him turn... "...the shaft of sunlight is behind him, and now he is backlit..." How much more perfect can a moment be? Exquisite imagery...remarkable execution...sweet fulfillment... Kate
Author's Response: Oh Kate, you're my favourite co-author, you know that, right? Just don't tell the others... Well of course you like this, it appeals to your whisk kink. Thanks for the review (and for the nudge/shove/push to post.) Kirsty x
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 15/09/08 09:06 AM · On: Storm's Coming, Pt 1/2 - Promise of a Storm
Just brilliant, aii four of them. Think i need to go cool down now lol.
Author's Response: So, you need to cool off? Well, we are thinking of bringing out a range of Dean paper fans. They'd feature our fave Winchester in a variety of poses and always looking inexplicably sexy (of course.) I'll put you on the top of our waiting list, shall I? Thanks for reading and reviewing! The Objectifying Dean Team x
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