Reviewer: azucre (Signed) · Date: 14/08/08 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 1

Outstanding. I loved how you got into John's head and realistically chronicled how the family came to this point. Enjoyed every word. 

Author's Response: Thank you!! I was a little worried about taking things from John's POV, wasn't sure if I was getting it right, so I'm really glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: tomash (Signed) · Date: 27/07/08 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 1

Nicely done, liked it a lot.  K.

Author's Response:

Thank you! Glad you liked it :)