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Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 08/07/09 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 15

I thought it was a very cute ending and it was nice that it was happy after the boys got their butts kicked so bad.

Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 08/07/09 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 14

Great chapter. Hope you're feeling better and that things get better for you. ^^

Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 08/07/09 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 11

Short but sweet.

Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 08/07/09 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 10

Good chapter lots of action just the way I like it.

Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 08/07/09 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 8

Tsk tsk. Dean you and your smart mouth. Love you for it. ;P

Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 07/07/09 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 7

Ooo! What great fun!

Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 07/07/09 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 6

Yep I've read this before, wonder how it got away from me before, good thing I'm back now though, it's a great story. ^^

Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 07/07/09 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 5

Another gooder. Sorry for leaving the string of reviews. ^^

Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 07/07/09 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 4

Heya! Love the humour in this chappy, good to break it up a bit with Sam's angst and Betty's "friendliness".

Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 07/07/09 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 3

I know the feeling of hating a chapter not being completely thrilled by it, but I thought you did really well with this, the pacing and description was good.

Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 07/07/09 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 2

"haha beet". rofl. A nice end to this chapter.

Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 07/07/09 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

Not sure if I ever reviewed this before but I'm reviewing again. I'm so scatter brained sometimes. lol. Good intro. ^^

Reviewer: Psychokitty (Signed) · Date: 15/10/08 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 9

Nope, definitely not a waste of time. Lovin' this!

Author's Response: Hi Psychokitty-thanks so much f the review, it's good to know that I'm not just doing this for my own amusement...even if thats fun!! -Aliyssa x

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 13/10/08 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 9

WOW.... and WOW again!!!!

AWESOME writing!!!!!!

you have totally nailed the characters and banter of the Winchesters. OUTSTANDING job!!!!!!

I hated Kate in the series , and you have made her even more despicable -EXCELLENT storytelling!!!

suspense- angst-hurt Dean ,hurt Sam- what more can we want????

MORE PLEASE!!!!

BRAVO!!!!



Author's Response: Hi there, sorry for not replying to your review sooner! I know it's late but thank you so much for your encouragement! I'm delighted you like the story as I'm certainly having a blast writing this one. -Aliyssa x

Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 13/10/08 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 9

Wow very exiting andv tense chapter. Hope you find time to update soon. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response: Hey Vonnie-thanks for the review and I'm very sorry that it's taken so long for me to reply to it!!! Hope you enjoy the rest of the story-thanks again! -Aliyssa x

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 13/10/08 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 9

Great update..Poor Sam needs a nap..lol..Can't wait to read more. Thanks for writing.


Author's Response: hey again-thankyou so much for keeping me motivated with all your lovely kind reviews! X

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 12/10/08 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 9

Aliyssa,

i love stories involving Kate; hurt Dean and protective Sam.......Keep the chapters coming.

Renee



Author's Response: hey Renee-thanks for taking a minute to drop me a line. I'm glad you're enjoying it...more protective sammy on the way!-Aliyssa X

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 29/09/08 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 8

another awesome update..Yeah Sam is using his brain..hopefully he will find Dean soon..Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 28/09/08 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 8

Pretty awesome chapter, lots of tension. Can't wait for more.Hugs, Vonnie


Author's Response: hi vonnie-thankyou for your review! it really means everything :) glad you liked it -Aliyssa  x

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 17/09/08 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 7

I liked the dialogue.  Good job on the mannerisms for each character!

Author's Response: thankyou! good to know I'm  getting it right. I really appreciate you letting me know what you think-Aliyssa x 

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 17/09/08 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 7

awesome update..Kate is such a bitch..but she's a fun character..Can't wait to read more. Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: supernaturaldh (Signed) · Date: 09/09/08 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 6

Excellent.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: hi-thankyou so much for your review :) glad you're liking it so far...more soon -Aliyssa x

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 07/09/08 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 6

Great update..Can't wait to read more. Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 05/09/08 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 5

awesome update..evil cliffe..lol..Can I have the Mustang when your finished..lol..I'll fix it back up..Can't wait to read more. Please update soon. Thanks for writing.

Author's Response:

hey-thanks so much for all your reviews, they are really keeping me going :) the mustang is yours then lol...sorry bout the cliffies...it's a bit of a habit!

-Aliyssa x

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 04/09/08 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 5

Very exciting chapter.  Excellent job on the fight scene.  I can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

hey-i'm glad you think what i'm doing with the character emotions is working so far and the fight scene too-i find writing action can be tricky so at least i know someone thinks it works!

 

-thanks again for taking te time to drop me  line, Aliyssa x

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