Reviewer: kiara_ratterjmouse (Signed)
29/08/08 05:08 AM · On:
that was really good, I liked it!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the positive review. Though we may have to come to blows. ;) Read your profile and have to admit I am forever and always a Dean girl.
Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed)
06/08/08 09:23 AM · On:
Now after seeing Dean die in Season 3 finale, I too think of the same question....What would have happened if Dean had'nt made the deal. Well thanks amillion!!! . I'm sure this is what would have happened. and for all i know there wouold'nt have been a season 3 without the winchesters......hehehe.
Well, as a newbie, you have done a wonderful job. Great work!!!! keep it up....
Author's Response: Thanks. :) I'm glad you liked it. The idea came out of the blue while I was working on another story. Hope the sequel I'm working on lives up to all the kind words I've received for this one.
Reviewer: Miss Sparrow (Signed)
25/07/08 02:06 PM · On:
Hey your story is really good keep it up. I have a story as well called Soulless if you would care to read it.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'll make sure to check it out. :)
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed)
24/07/08 01:59 PM · On:
I'm sorry to say that I have no criticism to offer, I really enjoyed reading this story, it was so moving that I had tears in my eyes when Dean ended his life. I'm a huge Dean fan and love reading stories about him although not Death Fic's so if you have anymore in your head please do share.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. I don't care much for death fics either. I could never end a story with one of the Boys dead. I am working on two other stories now and have ideas for at least two more. One of them is a sequel to this story, from Dean's POV.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed)
24/07/08 10:10 AM · On:
That was very good.
You got Sam and Dean perfect.
Author's Response: Thanks! :) I always worry about writing the Boys realistically.
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed)
24/07/08 09:22 AM · On:
I like this, your dialogue between the brothers is spot on and I do believe that if Dean hadn't been able to save Sam then he'd have wanted to join him. Dean hates to be alone and he sees his only role as that of Sam's protector, no matter the cost. I also like the idea that Dean's sacrifice saves more than his brother, I kinda think that if Sam is here to lead the demons then Dean is here to stop them.
Looking for to reading more from you. Great start!
Author's Response: Thanks. I think I've lost track of how many times I've watched my DVDs to get some of the nuances right. The Boys are both such complex characters. It makes it a challenge and loads of fun to try to write them believably. I especially love writing Dean. :)