Reviewer: julz314 (Signed) · Date: 29/07/08 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Blessing in Disguise
hahaha!!! loved the TV guide part!!!! :P:P:P
Awesome chapter too!!! I love reading what you think will happen in season four!! This is pretty awesome!! :D
Author's Response: Dean: Wait til you hear about Sam's article in 'Dog Monthly'. Sam: That was the best comeback you had for that? Really? DeaN: It's amazing what you can do with photoshop. *holds up a picture of Sam's head on a pit bull. Dean is laughing as Sam shakes his head* Sam: That's ok...I'll get you back. Thank you, julz, for reviewing. I'm glad that you're enjoying my version of season 4 although I know it will be nowhere close to what Kripke will have in store. Still...its fun. Dean: Not as much fun as its been seeing Sam as a girl... Sam: *grumbles*
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 28/07/08 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Prom Night
I don't think i have read a story like this before. It's great. I like the chapter endings as well.
Author's Response: Dean: The story isn't the only thing that can be well liked. Sam: Can you please get your hormones under control? Have you pent it up that much in Hell? Dean: There are some ugly... *We are experiences technical difficulties...we will return you to our regularly scheduled program* Thanks for reviewing the chapter. I'm glad that you're enjoying the story. Please check back for new updates.
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 26/07/08 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Prom Night
first of all....Prop Closet!....gotta love the perks of being a writer! second, I love Eve, so glad Sammy has someone to comfort him after losing Dean This is such an unusual story. Fantastic work all three of you
Author's Response: Dean: There are perks to being a non-writer too. Sam: You really disgust me. Dean: You're the one with the girl. Sam: And you're the one with the writer. Dean: Touche. Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Please check back for new updates.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 26/07/08 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Prom Night
Way to go Celtie! Don't you just love the power that comes with being a writer? A casting couch for the men in the 80's and a prop closet for the women of today. Hell yeah! Poor Sam. I hope he doesn't believe all that hooey about destiny. Every decision we make changes our fate. I'm glad he has Eve. Interesting that Eve was the first woman and this Eve is the first woman in Sam's life after Dean's death. Eve is my kind of woman! Most women worry about whether to wear diamonds or pearls. The perfect evening accessory is obviously iron or silver. Those garters have to do double duty to hold her stockings and her machetes. *wink*
Author's Response: Yes...power...hahaha...*feels like Donald Trump* Dean: Don't let all that power go to your head. It appears Eve is garnering just as much reputation as you. *Celtie grumbles* Sam: Eve is damn fine, Dean. Dean: Oh...yes she is. *note to self...make machetes into something less menacing and Eve less sexy* Dean: And jealousy rears its ugly head... Maybe Mary will get a girl after all...
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 26/07/08 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 1 - White Light
Personally, I love the first chapter! There are many women who find John sexy as hell and his undying love for Mary only enhances his magnetism. Funny that Sam said "panties in a twist" and not boxers. Especially when Mary wanted a girl instead of a boy. I'm sure she was more than happy with Dean once he arrived. The whole towel conversation makes me think of the banner for Towels at Dawn (an Angela's challenge story). I know quite a few women out there would love to own that famous cowboy towel Sam wore in Hell House. Hmmm...I'll bet Dean could give up hustling pool if he just auctioned off all the towels he and Sam used after their showers. ;) Should we start the bidding at $100?
Author's Response: *Celtie raises her hand as a complete and utter fan of John* Dean: Do we need to talk, Celtie? *Celtie goes silent* Sam: Hey if this whole towel theory is true, maybe we won't have to just make up names. We can get enough money by selling our towels. Dean *ponders*; The theory has merit. Sam: I'm wondering how much we can make on those panties that are always twisting. *Sam laughs as Dean slaps him upside his head*
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 26/07/08 05:12 PM · On: Prologue
Genius celtie!! This is sooo clever! Your story-telling technique is brilliant! You had me hooked from the first line (reel me in, I'm all yours!). You've captured the brotherly love and respect that endear the Winchester brothers to us. Dean's quick, rapier-sharp wit and cocky melt-in-your-mouth grin is perfect as is Sam's snappy comebacks and longsuffering patience when dealing with his brother. I just hope you don't start World War III between the Samgirlz and the Deangirlz. I'll have to recommend this to the Amazons (if they haven't read it already). I may have to take my laptop into the bathroom. This is just the kind of story I could read while relaxing in a tub of bubbles. Ahhh!
Author's Response: Dean: Oh my God there's Amazon women! Sam: You so need help. Dean: Plus Shannondoah is gonna take us with her to the tub. Don't tell me that doesn't make you... Sam *clears his throat*: Just shut up, Dean. Dean: I congratulate you, Shannondoah, you might have actually cracked the thick shell that surrounds Sam and makes him such an ass. *Sam is just silent and blushing*
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 26/07/08 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Prom Night
excellent! Phoenix, this is a very promising story... if you don't get too sidetracked by closets visits... Eve's character is very intriguing. Sam, keep an eye on your brother so the girl can work properly please. Dean, thanks for the cup of coffee, but no thanks. For one i trust the author to bring us the next chapter in the best delay, and second, i own a coffee shop, and i really don't need a cup of your american coffee soup. If you want a real coffee, feel free to stop by anytime...
Author's Response: *clears throat* That...um...closest visit will be the last. Dean *mutters under breath*: Sure it will. I'm really glad that you're enjoying Eve. It's good to know there can be a female character that can be liked by the Supernatural universe. I know I have a hard time myself accepting one. LOL! As for Sam... Sam: I am not responsible for my brother's actions. Celtie can do whatever she wants. Dean: She can do whoever she wants too. Sam: Dean! Dean: And as for the coffee...I'll find that coffee shop of yours and you can give me a 'real' cup of coffee. Sam: Did you ever think that just once not everything is about you? *Dean is silent*
Reviewer: julz314 (Signed) · Date: 26/07/08 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Prom Night
You know what? If we would have a character like Eve in the upcoming season I would so like her!!! She doesn't have the Ruby/Bela/Jo vibe (and plus she's hanging with Sam ;) ) ... She's really cool and sweet!!!
Awesome chapter! I love how you write (as awkward as it sounds it is a compliment :) ) and I am always thrill to read the after-chapter! I can't wait for the next one!!! :D
Author's Response: I'm SO glad you like Eve. I was hoping that she would be liked, and hopefully will continue to be liked. As like everyone on the show, she has a past. So keep an eye out. Keep checking back for updates! I'm glad you like how I write. It definitely is a compliment. Thank you. Sam: And we thank Celtie for not bringing back Bella...Ruby... Dean: ...Jo...*groans* Here's to hoping about Eve. Sam: What, no snappy line for this review? Dean: You know there are times I can be serious. *Sam just stares*
Reviewer: jool (Signed) · Date: 26/07/08 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 1 - White Light
love the storytelling... this is sooo new! Dean is right, seeing him half naked won't hurt anything at all...perhaps our poor little hearts....
Author's Response: Dean: Get the paddles! Sam: Your ego, seriously, needs to take a hike. Dean: And you need to lay off the mood killing trip. *groans* I'm glad that you're enjoying the story. I hope you check back for updates. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 25/07/08 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 1 - White Light
Hahahahaha....of course we want to see Dean half naked with an itsy-bitsy teeny-weeny yellow polka dot, er, towel!!!! and Sam too!!!!! And wow, 35 years earlier. that's long! and Mary wanted Dean to be a girl!!! aw, that's sweet!!!! :)
Author's Response: Dean: I wouldn't mind seeing you in an itsy-bitsy teeny-weeny yellow polka dot bikini. Sam: Yeah, I bet you wouldn't. *pause* Although, she did say me too. Dean: Yeah, I can really see you in a bikini. Sam: Shut up, Dean. Can I get a word in? *waits for silence* I'm glad that you're enjoying the story. I thought it would be good to see John before Dean was born. I promise that there's a reason for it. Keep checking back for updates! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 25/07/08 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 1 - White Light
HA! any chapter with a half naked Dean can only be a good one! can't wait for more(story i meant not half naked Dean... although....)
Author's Response: I will definitely be adding more chapters really soon. I hope you keep checking back. You know...a half naked Dean wouldn't be half bad... Dean: Told ya. She's falling for the Dean charm. Sam: Apparently they all are. *groans*
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 25/07/08 12:29 AM · On: Prologue
love this! and the chance to talk to Sam and Dean....Perfect
Author's Response: Dean: You can talk to me any time you want. Sam: I exist too, Dean. Dean *ignores Sam*: Make sure you keep checking back and we'll make sure we keep talking to you. *wink* Sam: Sometimes I wonder about you, Dean.
Reviewer: julz314 (Signed) · Date: 24/07/08 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 1 - White Light
This is pretty sweet! Ha! The thought of Dean being a girl... LOL!!!
Good job guys! Oh! And two thumbs up for the writer as well!!! ;)
Author's Response: Dean *stammers*: I was...I mean I would never be a...girl! Sam *laughing hysterically*: Mom totally thought you were a girl! Dean: Shut up! Sam: Oh my God...I'm totally not letting you live this down. Dean: Julz, you were on my good list until you brought up the whole 'girl' issue. Thanks...really. *pouts* And on that note, I'll jump in and say I'm really glad that you're enjoying the story. Two thumbs up...Awesome! Please check back for updates!
Reviewer: julz314 (Signed) · Date: 24/07/08 12:38 PM · On: Prologue
Hahahaha!! This is so awesome!! The best idea EVER!!! I cannot wait to read what's next!!!
Author's Response: Dean: She thinks I'm awesome. Sam: You truly need help. Dean: It's people like you that ruin a really good high. Glad you're enjoying the story!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 24/07/08 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 1 - White Light
Kwater recommended this story. It's brillient i love it.
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you are enjoying this story. And again another recommendation! I'm glad you stopped by to check it out. Sam *peers around and doesn't see Dean*: I'm signing autographs from one to three tomorrow... Dean *in bathroom*: That is the lamest pick up line ever!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 24/07/08 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 1 - White Light
okay, this is seriously great material! I'm in, waiting impatiently for the next installment...
Author's Response: I'm really glad that you are enjoying the story, fredo. I hope you continue to check back for updates. Dean *hands over cup of coffee*: The way this writer writes, you're going to need this waiting for her. Sam: Sometimes I really think all you care about is yourself. Dean: Yeah...its true. *devilish grin*
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 24/07/08 10:26 AM · On: Prologue
okay, now Kel sent me hear, and i've got to say, you've got me more than interested. Had to read it twice (english second language, and weird story lol), but going now straight to next chappy, because me very very curious...
Author's Response: I love that this story is being recommended. I'm grinning like a school girl... Dean: Are you wearing one of those short mini school girl skirts? Sam: The writer isn't Britney Spears. Dean: But the writer is hot and... *rolls her eyes* Thanks for your comments. Continue to enjoy the story! Dean: Seriously a school girl outfit won't hurt...
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 24/07/08 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 1 - White Light
Hm....though I LIKED the first chapter and the backstory on John I have to admit a little naked Dean wouldn't hurt. ;) Again, big congrats on a truly origional idea. - Kel ;)
Author's Response: It's good to know that you enjoyed the first chapter and the story about John. Maybe he'll even make an appearance. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Please continue to check back for updates. Dean: He's not good looking enough to make an appearance. Sam: I hope you get struck by lightning.
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 24/07/08 09:58 AM · On: Prologue
Okay seriously, this is one of the coolest ideas I've ever read and I'm having a blast with it. Great job and I'm adding it to my fav's as we speak - Kel ;)
Author's Response: I'm glad that you're enjoying the story, kwater. Sam: Thanks for adding us to your favorites. Dean: She's adding me to her favorites. Sam: Seriously you and your ego cannot occupy the same room.
Reviewer: Tangled up in blue (Signed) · Date: 24/07/08 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 1 - White Light
Okay - this is truly original - and that is saying a lot. I have no idea about the story yet but I LOVE the commentary by Sam and Dean. Of course, who doesn't want to see Dean half naked? What else do we want to see? Sam going evil / alpha male - which somehow increases his sex appeal. Uhh - John return from the dead to fight with Sam . . . What else, What else . . . touchy - feely moments between the brothers ended by one of them saying something snarky and totally hilarious . . . Dean half crazy (or more so) from his hell experience - or maybe possessed - or both. Oh the suggestions are endless. Push those glasses up and get typing! I can hardly wait!!
Author's Response: Dean: I keep telling the writer that she doesn't need to write the story, that it just should be me sitting here half naked and... Sam (cutting him off): Honestly, Dean, she's going to make you disappear. Dean: She can't do that! I am the heart of this story. Without me I'm nothing. Even, Tangled up in blue, said so. *Sam laughs as Dean suddenly disappears in a cloud of smoke* Sam: Told ya. (pause) Thanks for the comment, Tangled up in blue. Check back soon for updates. Hopefully our writer will have brought Dean back by then.
Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 23/07/08 03:01 PM · On: Prologue
Very clever beginning. If I review, can I have Dean personally deliver his commentary?? I will provide the address.....
Author's Response: Dean: No need to provide the address, mtee. I'm a Hunter. I think I can find you. *winks* Sam: Please...someone gag me. Dean: If you're lucky...you might find someone to do that. Sam: I'm seriously going to be sick. Dean: This is why mtee asked for me and not you. (pause) By the way...do you like purple nurples?
Reviewer: Renate (Signed) · Date: 22/07/08 01:38 AM · On: Prologue
Interesting set up!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. I hopefully will continue to keep your interest piqued. Please continue to check back for updates. Dean: You know you want to...
Reviewer: lauvinja (Signed) · Date: 21/07/08 01:01 PM · On: Prologue
Realy great story - interesting and funny :D great job! keep going like that! ;)
Author's Response: I will definitely try to keep it interesting and funny. I'm glad that you're enjoying it so far. Please continue to check back for updates. Sam: On the road again...just can't wait to get on the road again... Dean: Seriously? Willie Nelson?
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 21/07/08 10:50 AM · On: Prologue
LOL. this prologue has me hooked, line and sinker....and Sam and Dean made an appearance!! sweeeeeeett!! Can't see how the rest of the story goes!! love your banner!
Author's Response: Dean: Mymuseandi likes that we made an appearance, Sam. Sam: Yes... Dean: Wonder which one they liked more? The handsome devil or...you. Sam: *grumbles* Continue to check back for updates, mymuseandi. Dean: *laughs*
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 21/07/08 10:43 AM · On: Prologue
Very nice. I like the way this has started.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you're enjoying the story. I hope you continue to check back for updates. Dean: Let Sammy know how you really feel. He's all about emotions. Sam: Dean...shut-up.
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