Supernaturalville
Reviewer: julz314 (Signed) · Date: 10/08/08 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Bait and Switch

Best chapter so far!!! Can't wait to read what's next! You got me hanging here!!!

Author's Response:

Sam:  We can't wait for you to read what's next, Julz.

Dean:  Can you be any more of a suck up?

Sam:  Can you be thankful any less?  She liked the chapter.

Dean:  Well, then we shouldn't keep her hanging should we?

*Sam just rolls his eyes*

I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter.  Please continue to let me know what you think.

Reviewer: jool (Signed) · Date: 10/08/08 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Balance

i m still curious about the enigma Eve seems to be..

 i really liked the way the Eve-dean relationship started subtle and new

can t wait to see the notorious Anna and have my own opinion about her...but do we know for sure that Eve is on the "good guys team"??

still i m really looking forward the next episode of this exiting story!

sending my love to Sam and Dean by the way..and i m starting to think about my favorite Dean moment!



Author's Response:

Can I just say that it is so cool that you think Eve is an enigma?  I love it.  I'm really glad that the Eve-Dean relationship is subtle.  I didn't want it to start off overbearing if it continues at all.  *wink*

Dean:  Come on, I finally get a girl and you're going to take that away from me?

*Sam just laughs*

Dean:  Sam, you're just evil, you know that.

Sam:  I might have to be to get some action of my own.

*Sam and Dean both look at one another*

I'm glad that you are liking this story.  I'm hoping that you continue to let me know what you think.  Thank you for your review.  Plus, Sam and Dean send their love your way.  Keep thinking of your favorite moment...I, for one, can't wait to hear what Dean's are.

*Dean laughs evilly*

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 10/08/08 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Tune Up

Anna and Eve sounds, erm, suspicious...or maybe it's just me...i'm wary of girls popping into the boys' lives, after Jo and Bela and Ruby.... :p

But OMG why do hunters want to capture Bobby just to get to Dean!!!!??? dammit... 



Author's Response:

Dean:  I guess they have every right to be wary, Sam, considering Jo, Bela and Ruby.

Sam:  I think Anna and Eve will be a little different, don't you think?

Dean:  Oh...I already know one is.

Sam *slaps Dean*:  God, do you know how to keep a secret?

*Dean just laughs*

Hunters and Bobby seem not to be mixing well.  Lets hope for Bobby's sake the boys come up with a good plan.  As for Eve and Anna...we'll just have to wait and see.  I'm glad that you're enjoying the story.  Thanks so much for the review.

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 10/08/08 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Blessing in Disguise

“You do know how our contests end, don’t you?”

 

Dean gets up out of his seat and smiles as he walks toward the exit.  “With me on top.”

 

LOL...that sounds vaguely kinky.... :p  



Author's Response:

Sam:  Knowing Dean, that was meant to be kinky.

Dean:  In every way imaginable.  It's bad that women are starting to pick up on my innuendos.

Sam:  It's bad that they have to pick up on it at all.

Dean:  You're just jealous.

*Sam says nothing else*

I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter.  Thanks so much for the review.

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 10/08/08 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Prom Night

Dean, you sly dog! you have to use underhanded means to get yourself more screen time for the story!!! LOL

We know how you ladies hate seeing a woman move into our lives…”

Damn right!!! but i'm withholding judgment til i read more about Eve...and you are right, she does sound like Dean! 



Author's Response:

Dean:  If it takes underhanded means, then I'll do it.  Although I don't think the writer complained.

 *Celtie blushes and remains silent*

Dean:  And Eve doesn't sound like me!  Come on...can't a girl who's hot and saunters into our lives be normal for once?

Sam:  Like that will ever happen.

Dean:  This is true.

Thanks for the review!  I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter.

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 09/08/08 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Balance

yes, let's go to Des Moines meet Anna! I'm super curious... There's a Superntural magazine?? Sam, would you pick one up for me when you'll come please?



Author's Response:

Sam:  Des Moines here we come!

Dean:  You are so lame.

Sam:  Honestly, I can't wait for everyone to meet Anna and get this whole mess straightened out.  As for the Supernatural Magazine...I will definitely bring one with me, Fredo.

Dean:  You might want to sanatize it...you never know where its been.

*Sam glares at Dean*

Thanks for the review!  Please check back for updates.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 09/08/08 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Balance

Great update.

Can't wait to find out more about this Anna,and why Eve thinks she's evil.

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you enjoyed the update!  Anna and Eve, I think will be a clash of the titans.

Dean:  We'll get some girl-on-girl action.

Sam:  I really need to find you a woman or something to calm your hormones.

Dean:  You're going to stand there and tell me that Anna and Eve more than likely fighting in the next chapter doesn't have you intrigued?

*Sam is silent*

Dean:  That's what I thought.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 07/08/08 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Bait and Switch

Looking forward to getting more info on Eve and why she's so het up to help out the Winchesters...and Drunk Sam and Dean....I"m so there. - Kel



Author's Response:

Dean:  Aren't we supposed to research things before we let them into our lives?

Sam:  You didn't research the Impala.

Dean:  That was handed down, moron.

Sam:  So therefore I get a free pass on Eve.

Dean:  I hate you.

I'm glad that you're enjoying the story.  You definitely will be finding out more about Eve soon.  Please check back for updates!

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 06/08/08 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Bait and Switch

huh, that was an interesting plan... Now move on drunk people! Coffee for the hangover Sam ;) Dean, you can always buy a ticket to cross the ocean on the Queen Mary...

Author's Response:

Dean:  How come he gets the coffee?

Sam:  Because you don't fly, remember?

Dean:  Well I'm sure as hell not going on the Queen Mary either.  Heard that thing is haunted.

Sam:  So is your underwear.

Dean:  And how would you know?

I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter.  Please continue to check back for updates!

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 05/08/08 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Bait and Switch

I am loving this story. Eve sounds really cool and mysterious.

can't wait for more 



Author's Response:

Dean:  Eve is definitely...something.

Sam:  I hate it when you get that look in your eye.

Dean:  What look?

Sam:  Don't worry about it.

I'm glad that you're enjoying the story.  Please continue to check back for updates!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 05/08/08 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Bait and Switch

Fantastic update.

I'm really looking forward to the next part.

A drunk Sam and Dean sounds like fun.



Author's Response:

Drunk Sam and Dean might be a little bit different than you're picturing...

Dean:  Will there be purple nurples?

Sam:  Can you think of any other drink?

Dean:  This one just has a great ring to it.

I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter.  Please check back for updates.

Reviewer: jool (Signed) · Date: 03/08/08 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Tune Up

it s getting better and better....

Eve is really intriguing and i d love to see more of her.

keep up the good work and thank you!

don t worry Dean YOU ARE the sexiest man alive...don t need TV Guide to tell you that



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you think its getting better and better.  Hopefully I keep your interest piqued.  As for Eve...I promise you'll be seeing more of her.  Thanks for your very kind words!

Dean:  Damn right I'm the sexiest man alive.  Ha!  Told you, Sam.

Sam:  Way to boost his ego.  I hope you got room at your house for it because its getting to big for the SOUNDSTAGE we're on!

Dean:  Jeeze...could you be a little bit more bitter, Sammy?  Just remember:  2nd place is just as good.

Sam:  I hate you.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 03/08/08 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Tune Up

Great update.

I can't wait to find out what went on in Des Moines.

Not to sure about this Anna.



Author's Response:

Sam:  Why can't everyone just give Anna a chance?

Dean:  Maybe because she's butt ugly?

Sam:  You haven't even seen her.

Dean:  But I've heard her voice and that's enough for me to paint a mental picture.

Sam:  You seriously are mental.

Dean:  What did you really do in Des Moines, huh?

*Sam is silent*

I guess that's our cue that we have to wait.  I promise, it's all coming up.  I'm glad that you enjoyed the update.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 03/08/08 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Tune Up

Celtie, you like playing with fire don't you, introducing not only one but two female characters... I'm very intrigued by Dean and Eve being so similar. As for Anna, I'm curious about what happened in DesMoines... And Bobby, well you should know that one of the site rules here is, don't mess with Bobby! Lol...

Now Sam, coffee's waiting, and Dean, we'll send you a postcard!..



Author's Response:

Well fire is apart of my name.  LOL!  Trust me, introducing two new female characters will probably be my downfall, but I promise there is a reason to them...besides them being eye candy for Dean.

Dean:  I take offense to that statement.

Sam:  What you should take offense to is the fact everyone is seeing Eve is just like you.

Dean:  She better not be my sister, so help me God.

Sam:  Maybe she's the daughter mom always wanted.

Dean:  Oh...that's just wrong.

And I promise not to hurt Bobby, but he is the last weakness of the boys that's left.  Trust me, I don't want to mess with Bobby any more than anyone else.  As for Des Moines...we will definitely find out what's going on.

Dean:  I don't want a damn postcard.  I want to go.

Sam:  I'm on my way, Fredo.  Coffee here I come.

*Dean mumbles under his breath*

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 02/08/08 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Blessing in Disguise

“Everything is bad with bad." - Guh, that's the truth for these Winchesters.  Great update once more, can't wait to find out what's up with Dean's sudden appearance and come on, let's all just admit it now, Jensen should have been rockin' that TV's most sexiest ;) - Kel

Author's Response:

I think they should have that saying on a bumper sticker on the Impala.

Dean:  There is nothing and I mean nothing extra that gets slapped on the Impala.

Sam:  I have absolutely no comment on that.

Dean's sudden appearance will come with a price and a reason.  I hope you keep checking back to see what it is.  And, yes, (is a huge Jensen fan) he should have been in the issue of TV Guide too...along with Jared.

Sam:  I finally get something of my own and now it should be shared?!

*Dean just laughs*

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 02/08/08 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Prom Night

LMAFAO....Guh.  Okay so great chapter, Eve seems cool and I'm more than happy to take Sam up on his advice to pretend I'm her ;) Hey, I'll take anything I can get.  Great update and nice job on the Featured, it's well deserved for origionality. - Kel

Author's Response:

Sam:  See?  It's always good to imagine yourself as Eve.  It'll definitely bring you closer to us.

Dean:  In more ways than one.

Sam:  Oh my God that is SO not what I meant.

Dean:  Oh, I think we all know what you meant, Sam.

Thanks, Kel, for your very kind words.  I was shocked to see myself as featured.  I didn't think it was that good, but I do have a lot of fun writing this one.  Have felt this good about a story in a long time.  I'm glad that you think its different.  I hope you keep letting me know what you think.  Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: julz314 (Signed) · Date: 02/08/08 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Tune Up

Awesome chapter!!! Full of mysteries! I cant wait for what's coming up!!!

P.S.: Dean, I'm with you and Eve on Anna and the spidey-sense feeling!   



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you enjoyed the chapter!  There is so much coming up that I can't wait to write.  I really hope that you enjoy it.  Please keep letting me know what you think.

Dean:  My spidey sense is telling me a lot of things...and not just about Anna.

Sam:  Maybe you should check your hormones.  I think they're sending your spidey sense out of whack.

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 02/08/08 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Tune Up

So...This Anna girl can't be good news.

 as for Eve you gotta love a girl that can kick Dean's ass and then stitch him back up.....a skill that would probably come in handy with these guys.

excellent work 



Author's Response:

Dean:  If Anna's hot, she's definitely good news.

Sam:  So much for his tingly spidey sense.

Eve definitely has skills hat will help out the Winchesters.  Stitching is just one of many.

Dean:  I can atest to that.

*Celtie glares at Dean*  Thanks for your review.  I'm glad you're enjoying the story.  Keep checking back to see what's going on with these guys.  I'll have a new chapter up real soon.

Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 02/08/08 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Prom Night

Okay, Eve was a bit of a surprise. Then I remembered what they say about men looking for their mother in their wives and girl friends. Since Dean is the closest thing to a mother that Sam had, Eve's green eyes, eating habits, hunting knowledge and attitude make sense.     Sue

Author's Response:

Dean *laughs*:  Dude your new girlfriend is like...oh...

*Sam laughs*

Dean:  Hey!  I am SO not Sam's mom.  That's just...wrong.

Technically you are, Dean.  *Dean stares at Celtie*  And Mary did want a girl.  *pause*  I hope you enjoyed the chapter and its good to know that Eve was a surprise.  She definitely is fun to write.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 31/07/08 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 1 - White Light

Wow, cool chapter with John and Bobby hunting in Louisiana. But the 35 years before the present timeline is confusing me. Dean's only 29 in 2008, does that mean that present time in your story is 2014?

John tells Mary about the angel watching over them, is that the origin of Mary telling Dean that angels are watching over them? Sweet.     Sue



Author's Response:

Dean:  Sorry about that, Sue.  Our dear writer can't count.  She failed math in school.

*Celtie glares at Dean*

Sam:  It should have been 30 years before not 35.  I'll make sure she goes back and edits.

Dean:  You hold no power with the writer.  I was the one in the prop closet with her.

Sam:  Then I guess I won't tell you what I was doing last night...

*Dean's jaw drops and he glares at Sam*

*Celtie clears throat*  Glad you enjoyed the chapter, Sue.  Once again, sorry about that mix up about the timeline.  Gah!  There are some days I think I'm possessed by a demon.

Dean:  A sexy demon...

And yes...that is the origin of the angels watching over Dean.  Well, my origin.  LOL!  Please keep letting me know what you think.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 31/07/08 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Blessing in Disguise

Fantastic update.

So glad Dean's back from hell.

Dean in playgirl, now that would be sexy.

Well done Sam for being voted one of tv's sexiest men.



Author's Response:

Dean:  I'm glad I'm back from Hell too.

Sam:  I bet you are.

Dean:  You know you are too.  *moves toward Sam*  Come here and give me a hug.

Sam:  Ok...seriously our chick flick moments really need to stop.

Dean:  TV Guide's sexiest man can't handle a hug?

Sam:  Not when you're wearing nothing but a fig leaf...

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/07/08 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Blessing in Disguise

Incredible!  I didn't expect Dean to make his appearance in quite that way.  Father Gabriel thought he was the savior and the statues wept tears of blood. 

Eve is more amazing than I first thought!  Sounds like her experiences with the supernatural tend to lean more toward heavenly lore than demonic.  And just how does she know what symptoms appear in the process of healing from Hell?

What issue of TV Guide was Sam in?  I'll have to check that out. 

Playgirl, huh?  I can see it now... Dean leaning against the hood of the Impala holding his favorite gun...

uhhh... what was I saying?  Oh yeah... review...story good.



Author's Response:

I love it!  You have so many questions and ones that I can't answer because it would spoil the story.  So I'm hoping that you continue to check back for updates.  And its really good that you love Eve.  It's so hard to write a woman in the Supernatural universe that's liked.

Sam:  By the way, Shannondoah, I was in the issue May 5-11, 2008.  You can find me on two pages...

Dean:  Could you really be any more desperate?

Sam:  She asked!

Dean:  She also wants to see me with the Impala holding my favorite gun...

Sam:  I hope she likes those gun shapped lighters because we all know that's the gun you have on you.

Dean:  You really are gunning for a beating aren't you?

*Sam is on the floor once again laughing*

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 30/07/08 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Blessing in Disguise

yes, he's back! But i can understad Sam's suspicion... What a bloody chapter, between Dean and the angels. Waiting impatiently for next one... And btw, Dean, coffee shop's in France, so i guess i'm not about to see you anytime soon. But Sam, as you're okay with that flying thing, why not stop by?!



Author's Response:

Sorry 'bout the blood.  Was trying not to get queasy when I was writing it.  *tries to stay standing*

Sam:  Hey, Dean...I'm heading to France.

Dean:  No way I can go by car?

Sam:  Not unless your dead and you want to get the upholstry wet in the Impala.

Dean:  I can handle the first part...as for the Impala...

Sam:  I am SO on my way, Fredo.  Dean is staying put on this one.  You and I can have coffee while gazing at the Effiel Tower...

Dean:  God...I think I'm going to be sick.

Sam:  ...while snuggling and...

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 30/07/08 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Blessing in Disguise

I've got to get a copy of that playgirl!

this story is getting better with each chapter. Well done. can't wait for more



Author's Response:

*Dean signs the centerfold and hands the magazine over*

Dean:  There you go...an autographed edition.

Sam:  Instead of them letting Dean use a fig leaf...they decided a matchbox version of the Impala would do just fine.

*Dean glares at Sam as Sam falls on the floor laughing*

I still don't know how I work with these two.  Glad that you enjoyed the chapter.  Please check back for updates.

Sam:  Oh...my...God...a matchbox car.  That totally just came out.

Dean:  Oh this is war...

Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 29/07/08 10:17 PM · On: Prologue

Interesting and light-hearted start, I have a feeling I'll need to be remembering this as I go further into the story. Great banter!  Sue

Author's Response:

You will definitely have to remember this as the story goes on.  Hopefully the baner will lighten the mood.  I'm glad that you're enjoying the story.

Sam:  THank you, Sue!

Dean:  Thanks to another devoted fan.  *bows*

Sam:  Was the bowing really necessary?

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