Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 26/01/09 03:28 PM · On: Prologue
Wow, that's uh...some beginning. ;D..Definitely different!..In a good way!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 09/10/08 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Change in the Tide
Fantastic! I'm so glad Eve and Dean are together and bringing Adam in as the main bad guy is genius!
Author's Response: Dean: I hate Adam. Sam: You hate anyone who would stand in the way of a girl in bed with you. Dean: I hope Eve finds you and hurts you. Sam: What did I say?! Yay for Adam! I thought that might have been fun to bring in. So much more to tell! I hope you check out the sequel to this and let me know what you think. Thank you so much for all of your kind reviews. They were truly appreciated.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/10/08 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 11 - History Lesson
So John hates being a hunter as much as Sam did. I'll bet that's news to Sam. he and his dad were more alike than he would have thought. Glad to see the boys came out of their stupor. And I'm delighted to see there's another story coming up!!
Author's Response: Sam: Some days I wonder if I'm adopted. Dean: Some times I wish you had been. Sam: That's not helping me at the moment, Dean. Dean: Just saying. You were a scrawny kid and you're an annoying adult. Sam: And you're a jerk. Dean: Ow! I'm wounded! *clutches at chest* Yay for another story! And as for the boys...Sam and John will forever be the same in my eyes. LOL! Thanks so much for the review.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/10/08 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Truth Be Told
Fabulouuuuuss! This entire chapter is gold! I had hoped all along that Eve was the Eve. Hearing her story of the relationship she had with Adam and her heartbreak over her children's errors was stupendous! And comparing Dean and Sam to Abel and Cain is a stroke of genius! No comments for the boys. I'm dashing off to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Dean: No comments?! I think I might cry. Sam: Who's the girl now? *Dean's eyes fill with tears* I'm glad that you liked the chapter. Eve always had to be THE Eve. LOL! As for Adam and the kids...I don't think she'll ever recover. Thanks so much for the review.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/10/08 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Something Unexpected
Amazing chapter! So Eve is an angel and Dean's hot for her. Cool! Okay Sam, just as promised, I'll show you my fave Metallicar moment. I think it's the pilot. The Impala crashes through the house and only busts a headlight. That's a fine piece of American ingenuity! And ya gotta love her spirit---she's better than a Timex. She could have given up when that semi hit her in the season 1 finale but she was rebuilt and purrs as good as she ever did! Sorry, I'm rambling but I'm sooo excited!
Author's Response: Sam: Wow, Dean. Shannondoah loves your car but loves me. I wonder how that happened. Dean: Because you're poison. Sam: That was the best you could come up with. Dean: I could have said something else but I didn't want to hurt you. Sam: You are so pathetic. Dean: Still my car...jerk. Sam: *rolling eyes* Bitch. I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter. And as for the Impala...god I love that car. LOL! Thanks so much for the review.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/10/08 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 8 - All Roads Lead Home
I'm so loving Eve! Anyone who kills that bitch Lilith deserves a little Winchester action. Favorite song must have been a tough choice! There are sooo many great songs playing in the background! And the recap songs are incredible! How about some Impala love? Does favorite Metallicar moment make it to the awards? I'll show you mine if you show me yours.
Author's Response: Dean: Impala love baby! Sam: You need a girlfriend. Dean: Got that too. Just imagine Eve in a two-piece on the hood of the Impala... Sam: She could scratch the Impala. Dean: Oh yeah...just ruin my fantasies, Sammy. Way to go. Sam: I'm going to take Shannondoah up on her offer to show me hers if I show her mine. Dean: Tell me how that works out for you. I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter and that you are loving Eve. She's one of my favorite OCs that I've written. As always, your reviews make me smile. Thanks for leaving another one!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/09/08 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Road Leading to Nowhere
Wonderful chapter! I loved Dean's comment that only a woman would know when a woman was faking with a man. Soooo, how did he know? I can't wait until they hook up with Missouri! She's a great character!
Author's Response: Dean: I just knew. Sam: Dean doesn't want to admit he was really a woman in a past life. Dean: Takes one to know one. Shannondoah, thank you so much for your review. Please excuse the boys. They really do just...yeah...I have no words. LOL! Thanks again for the review.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/09/08 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Balance
Wonderful chapter! I love the discussion between Dean and Eve about the balance of good and evil. Does Eve have special knowlege about the angel who screwed up while protecting the Winchesters? Finally we get to meet Anna. She does seem to have Sam wrapped. *cracks whip* I hope Eve's faith in Dean helping Sam to come to his senses isn't misplaced. An award ceremony hosted by Sam and Dean? Now that should be good!
Author's Response: Dean *laughs*: Sam's whipped! Sam: I am not! If I'm whipped, than so are you. Dean: God, one can only hope! While I try to get these images out of my head, I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed the chapter. I hope you continue to let me know what you think. Thanks so much for the review.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/09/08 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Bait and Switch
Wow! What an entrance! The twist of Daniel being a demon was great! I just thought he was a slime-ball hunter. So what's the deal with Eve? Is she an angel or some other heavenly being? Don't worry, Sam. I know lots of girls who would love to spend some quality time looking up into those beautiful eyes of yours---Amazon girls. ;)
Author's Response: Dean: Yeah...Daniel was a slime ball. And as for Eve...she's definitely an angel sent from above. Sam: Can I gag now or later? Dean: Or she can just be some hot random chick that I would love to just... Sam: Okay, I'm totally cutting you off to start flirting with Shannondoah. It's good to hear that there are some that want to spend quality time with me. Dean: What's this is hear about Amazon women?! I...um...yeah...I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter. As always...thank you so much for the review.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/09/08 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Tune Up
I like Eve more with every chapter! A femme fatale in blue jeans who can give Dean a good tussle is a keeper! I also love the hints you keep dropping about what happened in Des Moines (yay! My back yard!) I'm eager to meet Anna. I want to see what all this controversy is about. If Bobby doesn't like her then I know I won't either. If Eve's opinion isn't enough for Sam, he should know better than to doubt Bobby's character judgements. Why do men never listen to other women when they are smitten? They always have to play the fool and learn the hard way.
Author's Response: Dean: Just because she can wrestle doesn't mean anything. Sam: Oh you damn well know it does. Dean *smirks*: Yeah it does. Sam: And there is nothing wrong with Anna. Dean: Sam is in denial. Sam: I am not! I'm glad that you are still enjoying the story. Thanks so much for the review.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/09/08 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Blessing in Disguise
This story gets better with every chapter! I can't wait to discover who's behind Dean's return. You have the escitement mounting! Just so you know, Dean, recently TV Guide did an article on The top ten sexiest of Sci Fi. Sam is rated number 2. You are rated number 1.
Author's Response: Dean: I've got mounting excitment. *Sam rolls his eyes* Dean: What?! I do! Sam: I have no comments as to where that is concerned. Dean: And I told you that you were number two. Sam: Go ahead and gloat. I know where I'm number one. Dean: Where? In your own mind?! I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter. It makes me smile to hear your comments. Thanks so much for the review.
Reviewer: SupernaturalKat (Signed) · Date: 13/09/08 02:50 PM · On: Prologue
freaking awesome didnt like that dean kissed eve though i thought sam and eve were better together
Author's Response: Dean: No way... Sam: Holy crap! Someone wanted me with Eve. Well, that was unexpected. Dean: No way... Sam: Close your mouth, Dean. You're catching flies. I'm glad that you liked the story. As for Sam, Dean, and Eve...there's still a lot more story to tell. You never know what might happen. Thanks so much for the review.
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Change in the Tide
LOL. i enjoyed this story very much. and you write really really fast! i'm off to read the others now!
Author's Response: Dean: We've got a dedicated reader. Sam: We have a lot of those, Dean, if you haven't noticed. Dean: Well, its kinda hard to see through the crowd Sam: You still think you're a rock star. Dean: I don't think...I know. I'm glad that you enjoyed the story. And I'm trying to write fast because the ideas keep flowing. LOL! I'm glad you're going to read the other story. Thank you so much for all the reviews you've left.
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 11 - History Lesson
No! Dean can't kill Sam! it's written in the rules somewhere.....*searches for the rule book*
Author's Response: Dean: Dude, there's a rule book? Sam: I think it's posted on myspace somewhere. Dean: Our rule book is posted on a porn site? *Sam just shakes his head* Dean *smirking*: Kinky. *Celtie sighs* As for Dean killing Sam...only time will tell. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Truth Be Told
Well, i'm not offended. i always think that religious themes are all right as long as it is done tastefully, and yours is. Can't wait to hear their family history! i think maybe they were all be living in interesting times...
Author's Response: Sam: We are really glad that you weren't offended. We tried to do it in a tasteful manner. Dean: As for our family history...oh it will be interesting. Sam: Without a doubt. I'm glad that you liked the chapter and didn't find it too overbearing. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Something Unexpected
Eve's an angel!!!?? my god, i never saw that one coming!i thought she was just like a human with something special, like Sam/Dean... an angel????? wow.
Are you still answering questions, Dean? i just want to ask if you still like frisky women, even after Eve? some of us *coughs* won't mind donig some TLC on you.. :p
Author's Response: Sam: I think I'm going to be sick. Dean: I do, indeed, love frisky women. But when I have Celtie and Eve both pining away for me...I think my schedule might be a little full. Sam: I have no doubts about you fitting her in somewhere. Dean: In the middle might be nice. *Celtie rolls her eyes* I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter and the twist in it. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Crash and Burn (Signed) · Date: 07/09/08 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Change in the Tide
Ok... This has got to be my favorite story so far!!! i mean not just the actual plot line, but having the characters there, reading along with you... you were so right!!! Supernatural is anything but normal, so why should thier story be normal... i love it!!! You Are The Master!!!
Author's Response: Dean: Is the writer blushing? Sam: What did you do to her? Dean: I didn't do anything to her! Why is it always my fault? Sam: Because usually when a woman is blushing, its because of something you did. Dean: Well, it wasn't this time. Sam: Yeah...right. I'm glad that you enjoyed the story so much, Crash. Your comments were really nice. I appreciate it. Thank you so much for your review.
Reviewer: julz314 (Signed) · Date: 03/09/08 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Change in the Tide
lol... funny how I review the 1st chapter of your "season 5" before writing here on your last chapter. I just wanted to say again how awesome this story is and what it has become. I would so see season four looking like your series here! I seriously cannot wait for what's coming! And as for you boys, keep on doing what you do best! (Dean don't get any ideas you sicko :P)... and Eve I gotta admit you are one lucky gal! :) Cheers everyone!!! :D
Author's Response: Dean: Why am I the sick one? I'm always the sick one. Sam: Took the words right out of my mouth. Dean: Shut up, Sammy. I'm glad that you are enjoying the story. I'm hoping season 4 is going to be dark and mysterious and I can't wait. Dean: I'll be spending every Thursday night with our dear writer. *grins* Um...yeah...I should go now. *giggles* Thanks again for the review.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 28/08/08 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Change in the Tide
Aww Dean and Eve are so Sweet, i'm glad they got together. Looking forward to the sequel. I know i said i like a little bit of evil Sam but i still want Dean to save him at the end,getting worried now lol.
Author's Response: Sam *laughing*: You and Eve are sweet. Like two peas in a pod. Dean: And who's the jealous one now? Sam: Wait until Adam fights for her. Dean: Really? You really think I won't kick his... I'm going to jump in here and say, I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter. As for Dean, Sam, and Eve...they still have a long journey in front of them. Thanks for the review! Sam: Evil Sam rocks! Dean: You really have nothing else better to do? *Sam just whistles as Dean stares at us*
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 27/08/08 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Change in the Tide
wait and see...
Author's Response: Dean: See and wait? Sam: Dean... Dean: What? She said 'wait and see'. It was only appropriate for me to say 'see and wait'. Sam: Fredo, we hope you continue reading. We enjoy hearing what you say. Dean: And Sam likes your coffee. *Sam just smiles* I do hope you stick around, Fredo. I always enjoy reading your reviews. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: jool (Signed) · Date: 27/08/08 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Change in the Tide
the end was as good as expected...breath-taking, tense and subtle making us want MORE!! the introduction of Adam was pure genius and the love story between Eve and Dean was really bound to happen and feel totally natural (or supernatural?!!!!) now i m totally hooked up to your writing and let me congratulate you for your titles...i really love the title of the sequel! Dean, thanx for saving me from drowning...i ll have to think about a way to pay you back........."grins"
Author's Response: Dean: It's true what they say: when the bed is a rockin' don't come a knockin'. Sam: That's usually a sign of an exorcism. Dean: That's also a sign of something else, Sammy. Apparently something you know nothing about. Sam *grumbling*: Shut-up, Dean. I'm glad that you like my titles. I try to pick ones that best suit what's coming. The sequel will definitely be a lot darker than this one. As for Dean... Dean: It is always to save the damsel in distress. Even Sammy... Sam: DEAN! I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter and the ending. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 26/08/08 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Bait and Switch
Interesting resolution to how to save Bobby. Eve certainly has guts, and Bobby is all Bobby. "So... someone want to fill me in on what the hell is going on around here?" Sue
Author's Response: Dean: Bobby will forever be Bobby. Sam: As for Eve...she definitely has a will of her own. Dean: She's got a lot of that and more. Sam: I really don't want to know. *Celtie is silent* Um...thanks for reviewing, Sue. Glad that you liked the chapter!
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 26/08/08 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Tune Up
Well, I'm way behind, but slowly getting caught up. Interesting that you've introduced Anna second-hand, giving us Eve's and Sam's impressions of her before we actually meet the gal. And Dean hasn't changed much, has he? Still ready to sacrifice himself to save his family. The snippet at the end was fun, too. Sue
Author's Response: Sam: No worries about being behind. We don't mind you catching up. Dean: Trust me about Anna...it was better to introduce her that way. Sam: Most definitely. Dean: As for me...I never change. I am better the way I am. *Sam groans* Dean: You are just jealous. Sam: Right... I'm glad that you are still reading, Sue. Thanks for the review. I appreciate it as always.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 25/08/08 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 11 - History Lesson
Just brilliant, i'm looking forward to the next part. I don't want Sam to turn evil but i gotta say that a badass Sam is very sexy lol.
Author's Response: I'm looking forward to the next part too, since I have two ways it can go. Dean: Do I need to convince you which way to go? *Celtie grins* Sam: Or do I need to convince you? Fans want an evil Sam. Dean: You won't get more girls that way. Trust me. Sam: And you think you will? Dean: I already do. Sam: You are SO pathetic. I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 25/08/08 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 11 - History Lesson
well, i gotta say, i don't like stories with evil Sam. So tell me, is it what it's gonna be about, or... And a sequel, okay... Guys, looks like the author isn't done with you...
Author's Response: Well...I hope you stick around to see what happens. I can't say for certain if there will be an evil Sam... *Sam grins evilly* ...or not, but I promise, you will be surprised. Dean: She always says that. Trust me, she's no surprise any more. *Celtie glares at Dean* Sam: Wow! Way to use and abuse the writer, Dean. Dean: Oh, shut it. You know nothing about the relationship I had with her. Sam: Notice the word 'had'. And no...the author is definitely not done with them yet. Not by a long shot. *Dean stands up and cheers* Thanks for the review!
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