Reviewer: Kiansie (Signed) · Date: 26/05/09 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 17

Your writing has emotion in it, that is a difficult feat to accomplish. However, there are numerous typos and grammatical errors as well as mispellings that detract from the story. I try to ignore these errors as I am reading, but they still pop out at me. Some examples are: you use loose, the correct spelling that you want to use is lose.

Other than a couple of grammatical issues I think that you did a good job with your story.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad to hear you liked it. My spelling is only as good as spell check and sometimes that lets me down. Same with grammar. Hugs, Vonnie

Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 19/12/08 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 25

One word to say, - awesome!!! I felt this chapter as a treat.....long and full of fun....hehehehe..... Well sad that this story had to end though.

Anyways looking forward for your next story.......Wish you a happy christmas too.....

Pranami :)

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so grateful you've been sticking with me throughout this story. Your reviews are always awesome. Hugs, Vonnie

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 13/12/08 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 24

"Had to know Dean was alright." - it's just amazing how their affection goes both ways and one always knows what the other one needs, you once more made this visible with every line! An extra thanks this time for the wonderful talk pastor Jim had with Sam; Jim was an outstanding man and a real blessing for Sam, truly - as you pointed out - a mentor and when he gave Sam his blessing I know it meant a lot to our Sam, wonderful chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks, it's so good to hear you approve of my portrayal of the boys and Pastor Jim. This story is winding down and there is one more chapter to go. Hugs, Vonnie

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 12/12/08 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 22

Okiay now that is freaking me out. You are a trullsy scarry person when you've completed your stries.

Author's Response: Sorry for freaking you out, I just write what comes into my mind. Hugs, Vonnie

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 12/12/08 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 20

This was trully a scary chapter for the brothers. Like I stated before your writing is incredable.

Author's Response: Yeah, they are going through a tough time. Thanks for another compliment. Hugs, Vonnie

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 12/12/08 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 18

Ii am so going to ignor your funny humor and wanting to know . . . .  I am enojing it trully. Wait till the end to receive you gift.

Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying it. I can't wait for the gift. Hugs, Vonnie

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 12/12/08 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 15

OOOOHHHH!!!!!QUITE DOWN ITS NOT THE END OF THE MOVIE:)-!!!!!!! No, i'm siply . . . . simply see what you made me do! I am in the form of an appreciated reader, that is very content with the literature at hand. It may not be poetry, but this is close enough and thank you.

Author's Response: Thanks, you are really sweet and sorry for what I make you do. Hugs, Vonnie

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/12/08 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 13

OOOOOHHHH you are not funny with that last statement. This is giving me chills and exahustion. I feel that I am with this family and I can't do anything for them. YOu are bad . . . but a damn good writer. NO,!!! a hell of a composer. Thanks with all the ideas and images it even scares me.

Author's Response: Thanks for another compliment, I have to give it back, you are one great reviewer. And obviously on the same wavelength as I am. Hugs, Vonnie

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/12/08 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 11

Now it make's me want to find a school that teachs that language. Thanks, but don't let the character of SAM go. Pleas!!!!

Author's Response: Sam is my favorite too, so he won't die. I don't promise anything else though. Thanks for another great review. Hugs, Vonnie

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/12/08 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 9

There is no other word but stupendsly worded. I do love it, but picking on SAM he is my favorite character, but its okay. Scary images that have been placed gives me shivers and deep coldness around me.

Author's Response: I don't know, but right now I'm feeling kind of bad for giving you the shivers and a deep coldness. I guess I really owe you a warming, heartfelt hug. Again, thanks for the wonderful review. Hugs, Vonnie

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/12/08 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 7

This is more than a story! I seriously do like your language of telling the story, and very lucerative way of displaying images of the characters. That's good.

Author's Response: Thanks again, this really makes my day. You are awesome. Hugs, Vonnie

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/12/08 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 5

This ghost needs to lay off. I do like to ferbish the excitment I have in reading this story for it is taking me longer to read. You have keept me in some kind of a trance  . . .  trhat at times I can't efven spell correctly. SEE U PUNCK!! (HA,HA,HA,HA).

Author's Response: Wow, I didn't know I have those kind of powers. I'm glad you are having fun. Hugs, Vonnie

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/12/08 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 3

This is very vivid to me and I can feel the tenshion in the last paragrah. I think you have portrayed this entity to have one of the siblings have a crush on her and have him hurt his own sibling, but that is of course my thought.

Author's Response: Thanks, great to hear you still like it. Hugs, Vonnie