Reviewer: TozaBoma (Signed)
07/10/08 12:31 AM · On:
I loved it - had me grinning all the way through. Talk about a warm glow, eh? Lovely!
That was the effect i was going for...Hehehe.. thanks for the review honey!
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed)
08/09/08 04:19 PM · On:
You're killing me! This is the sweetest thing, with some laugh out loud moments.
'Sam was a regular Boy Scout, and he didn’t even know Boy Scouts existed yet. Dean would bet his latest Batman comic that Sam would love to join up if he could.'
A group of five year olds, ambushing Dean, how funny! This fic made my heart melt for Timmy and the bros' ;) Well done, honey!
You got that line! yeay!! that line is one of my faves, but i thought i'm the only one that can see the hilarity of it. good to know i'm not alone! LOL
Thanks for the review and the stars! *hugz*
Reviewer: black_werewolf_101 (Signed)
26/08/08 12:29 PM · On:
That story was adorable... Just adorable...
"Dean can you be my big brother too?"
Aw... Great job. :)
Thanks for the review!! Aren't the boys just adorable at any age???? Even now....especially now..LOL :p
Reviewer: cowboy (Signed)
02/08/08 09:21 PM · On:
hey - I like this one - Angela's still fighting to get better and I know she's going to appreciate all the effort that has gone into this challenge when she can read and review for herself. In the meantime, our family wants to extend a thank you. Love that it's a cat - Jake, Sam, and Nate
Heya Jake, Sam and Nate...
I'm glad you guys like it...yeah, we are a ll waiting for Angela to get better here! hopefully all the stories that she'll read will cheer her up... :)
Reviewer: PropGal (Signed)
30/07/08 07:38 AM · On:
very sweet. i enjoyed it. and the lassie line is just amusing
Thanks for the review!! and i'm glad you enjoyed it! i'm aiming to please... :p
Oh, and the lassie line, i had to put it in... too irresistible not to! :)
Reviewer: alena (Signed)
27/07/08 03:37 AM · On:
A nice little younger brothers story. It's nice to see Sam at the hero-worship stage with his older brother. And the cat's reaction to being rescued?-So painful but so true!
Thanks for the review! yup, i think Sam worships Dean even from a young age. with an elder brother who would do anything for him, why wouldn't he??? it's actually a miracle that Sam didn't end up a spoilt brat!! :p
And the cat, oh yeah....painful alright...i speak from experience too!
Reviewer: jensengal3 (Signed)
21/07/08 01:33 PM · On:
That was really really cute! Oh and when i read the line "Ow, you freaking cat" my finger satrted stinging all of a sudden! Anyway back to the point. well done!
Thanks for the review!! LOL sympathetic pain, i can relate to that!! once, i read about either Sam or Dean having a paper cut, i clutched my own finger and i could have sworn it was throbbing! LOL
Bev did a very good job, so yeah,credit goes to her too.. :)
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed)
20/07/08 07:05 PM · On:
This is a marvelous little Wee!chester fic here. Big brother Dean to the rescue. Nice bit of misdirection about who Timmy is, and I cackled over 'At least Timmy's not stuck in a well'. And little Sammy, worried about sharing his awesome big brother with anyone else...awww. Great job! Please write some more, now that you've taken the plunge and posted your first story. Sue
Thanks for the review!! i love that line too, ever since i was reminded of the nursery rhyme recently!! and yeah, i don't see Sam willing to share Dean with anyone else, can you?? :p
Reviewer: kwater (Signed)
20/07/08 11:08 AM · On:
Muse, I loved this. What a wonderful weechester ;) And I loved that Timmy turned out to be a kitty. Very well done and a great brotherly moment. - Kel
Thanks for the review! yeah, i thought that a cat as a 'villain' for my first fic posting is a good way to start, and i had much help from Bev as well... :p
Reviewer: RoweenaC (Signed)
20/07/08 09:44 AM · On:
Hi Lin. Well, I am glad Bev let me know about your first attempt as an author. By this, I was presented with a lovely story that put a smile on my face. Thanks.
Quickly quoting those bits, that meant a lot to me.
...hint determination, a deep desire to go to the rescue of his friends, and whoever else needed it... Well, saving people must be in his genes then. Cute, a five-year-old hunter.
...that you could do anything... Sure. Dean could do anything. Even come back from hell. *hopes and crosses fingers desperately*
...“Well, at least Timmy’s not stuck in the well.”... hahaha, *rolling on the floor, for at least 10 minutes, fits of laughter shaking my whole body*
...Sam threw his arms around Dean’s waist and squeezed... Aw. Can I hug him too, please? Pretty please?He is such an awesome big bro. Though, Dean would hate to be hugged too long. Maybe only as a foreplay. *blushes* Did I really say that. Crap. Pervy-me showed its ugly face unexpectedly. Might also be wishful thinking, LOL.
...“Dean, can you be my big brother too?”... Cute. But I wouldn't want him as big bro. Maybe step-brother. That would leave a lot of possibilities...
..."That’s what families are for. We stick together.”... Damn right. So like the Winchesters. And so fitting for Angela and her family too. Well done!
So, how's it been posting for the first time? It's been terrifying for me. But Bev kept encouraging me. She is a gem, isn't she? YOU'RE AN AUTHOR!
Thanks for the review and the stars!!! yup, it's terrifying, horrifying, and all things in between. but also satisfying, :p
and thanks for letting me know which parts you adore. at least i know i did some parts right!
Hey, who wouldn't wanna hug Dean?? and i totally agree with you about not wanting Dean as a brother, and someone more than that! LOL
Reviewer: calUK (Signed)
20/07/08 09:14 AM · On:
Hey, great to see you're posting - and if it isn't your first fic, does that means there's more coming soon? 'Cause that was great! Poor Timmy - and Big Brother Dean to the rescue!
Loved Will you be my big brother? - we all want Dean for a big brother - shame Sammy still hasn't learned to share!
We want to see more from you, please, and soon!
I want Dean as more than a big brother!! Haha. And i always thought that Sam was selfish in that aspect. maybe Sam might be generous in all other things, but sharing Dean? i don't think so!....well, to me anyway.. :)
And thanks for the review! erm more, we'll see!!
Reviewer: birdie (Signed)
20/07/08 08:46 AM · On:
It's just sweet and I love the 'freaking cat!' Dean and cute fluffy kitties is a wonderful combination...only trouble is I'm not sure which one i'd prefer to stroke?
Loved it and I know Angela will. Now you say not your first fic...so how do we get them posted hun? huh?
Haha! i give it some thought and concluded that 'freaking' is not too strong for kid-speak.. haha!
And hmm.....you are right, it's a tough choice between Dean and Timmy, but i would have preferred the boy!! :p
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed)
20/07/08 07:29 AM · On:
Ahhhhh---this was great! I laughed out loud at the "at least he's not stuck in a well". I adored Sam worrying about having to share Dean as a big brother. That was so cute.
Loved it. Great job.
Thanks for the review and the stars! Yeah, i thought that Sam wouldn't really wanna share Dean with anyone! i mean, i wouldn't!! LOL
Yeah, i was thinking on how to incorporate that line in the story. Glad it made you laugh!! :p
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed)
20/07/08 07:16 AM · On:
A lovely story, very sweet.
Thanks for the review. Hopefully Angela will like it!! :)
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed)
20/07/08 12:59 AM · On:
This was so sweet - it has this beautiful innocence about it, you have really tapped into the five year old mind!!!!! Loved the way Dean was mobed by the group hugging 5 year olds!!!!LOL - I actually had to wipe away a tear at the mental picture I got of him squirming ... like Timmy!!!!!!
Loved the way you set out this piece - the tone and timing just really worked and the overall effect was just heartwarming, I am sure Angela will get a real chuckle out of this one - I know I did!!!!
Thanks for the read!!! Congrats on a fantastic first piece!!!!!!
Yeay!! *dances happily* That was what I was trying to do, trying to think like a kid! LOL yeah, i thought Dean should be mobbed by kids, it think it would be a hilarious image.
Bev helped a lot, and i'm really thankful for that. i'm hoping Angela would laugh over this, and i'm glad you did!!
Thanks for the review!!! :)
Reviewer: Winchester_Warriors (Signed)
19/07/08 09:50 PM · On:
heehee! So cute! I loved it! Well done!
Thanks! It was a wreck trying to do this in time for the challenge, and Bev was a big help. And yeah, i thought the wee!chesters were cute!!! Who can resist them...I'm glad you love it! :)