Reviewer: Fenrees (Signed) · Date: 17/09/08 02:43 PM · On: SEVEN
I loved it, especially how you were able to describe the gesturing with their hands as they communicated, especially as you were able to keep them true to their caracthers. It had me rolling on the floor laughing. Good job Fenrees
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. When I first started writing it, it was only supposed to be a funny shorty pretty much based on that scene.... then it just kinda grew :)
Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 17/09/08 02:20 PM · On: SEVEN
Love when they do their brother thing -- the scuffling for position and pillows! Ah and the memories -- good story.
Author's Response: Thank you. I love it when they do the brother thing, too :)
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 02:42 PM · On: TWO
good first couple chapters, thought i would miss Dean's snarky comments, but he compensates pretty well...
Author's Response: Glad you like it... I started missing his talking too actually, while writing this, but it was fun. And something of a challenge. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 05:34 AM · On: ONE
I had a lot of fun with this story! Good job!
Author's Response: So did I :) Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 12:29 AM · On: SEVEN
what a cute ending to this story...The brother moments in this chapter were awesome. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Thank you and thanks for reading :) That male bonding thing just doesn't stop being fascinating to me....
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 15/08/08 06:42 AM · On: SIX
My you have/did have a busy week, and I think as far as your stories are concerned it was inspired week. Well done and looking forward to the final bit.
Author's Response: Thanks. Moving's stressful but I love it. It's kinda like a clensing ritual; you start sorting through your stuff and end up sorrting through your head... :)
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 15/08/08 06:14 AM · On: FOUR
A fourth! That's just not fair! I thought the hint brothers and sister was just a typo error. I should have known better. Good stuff this.
Author's Response: It never is :) Well, You would find a few typos in my stuff, especially if it involves an M...time/tie, him/hi- no difference, right?
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 15/08/08 05:05 AM · On: TWO
Hey I'm liking this, its got an unusual edge and strage how silent Dean is just as wonderfully communicative as ever. clara was funny! reading on bev xx
Author's Response: Hi Bev Glad you like it. Hope the next chapter doesn't put u off. I like it worse the more time that passes - definitely rewriting it....
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 15/08/08 04:33 AM · On: ONE
Hey Hunny. Iceland rocks, visited your lovely country and its awesome. And your story? Loving it! If English isn't your first language then you are amazing cause that sounded just like the boys. And you smashed him in the face with a fire extinguisher! well i love to mend him when broken so I'm reading on. Bev xx
Author's Response: Hey there, welcome back home then :) Glad you liked my little corner of the world, I know I do. I always leave and then I always end up coming back.... Gosh, I'm blushing....I always worry a little I might sound too much like my high chool "Oxford Press English for Advanced Students' or whatever the damn thing was called. But then I remember I learned way more from TV than ever from school... Hm, that really doesn't sound like a good thing, does it? :-/
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 15/08/08 03:54 AM · On: TWO
Way to go Dean. Still able to get a girl even when black and blue and unable to speak.
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 15/08/08 03:39 AM · On: ONE
Interesting pictures that: a mute Dean for up to 2 months. I am so looking forward to seeing how you handle that.
Author's Response: My favorite part of the whole story :)
Author's Response: Huh, I actually meant that first response to your comment on chap two. Don't know how that happened... But anyway, Thanks for reading. Hope you like the rest.. :)
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 14/08/08 09:49 PM · On: SIX
oh wow your a brave lady..moving out of the country. Wish I had the nerve to do that sometimes..lol..Good Luck..Great chapter. I liked the escape..Man they have had some bad luck in this story, but the escape was fitting. I like the stories where they are running from the cops/Hendrickson. Can't wait to see how you finish this. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading :) At first I had a whole intricate escape scheme, but then I thought nah, chaotic and improvised is much more in style with the rest of the story... Brave lady, irresponsible escapist.... no yeah, I definitely like the first title better :)
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 08/08/08 10:44 PM · On: FIVE
Another great update. Can't wait to read how you have them communicating now and how they escape the hospital. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. It's good to know somebody wants to know what happens next :) I should have the next chapter up within the week... hope it doesn't dissapoint :)
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 08/08/08 03:12 PM · On: FIVE
A brilliant chapter, can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you like it :)
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 08/08/08 02:55 PM · On: FIVE
I knew it would come down to Dean needing to use the phone eventually:) Cool karma with Sam being unable to talk now as well. The dual sign language should be humorous....unless Sam decides to be totaly geeky and buy that slate. I never understood why he didn't just buy a pocket size notebook???They used them in "Bedtime Stories" when Sam made his awesome artistic debut. I mean who would really carry around a writing board?
Author's Response: Like I said: repetition makes me happy. If only real life were this organized :) To be honest, they didn't buy a pocket size notebook because I didn't think of it :) Pity the Winchesters, being the mercy of someone that's just sometimes not that bright....
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 07/08/08 08:11 PM · On: FOUR
Great story so far, so strange not hearing Dean talking, can't wait to see what happens next, update soon.
Author's Response: Will do, thanks for reading. Yup, writing hi without word turned out to be uch harder than I thought... I'm just so used to having his voice to go on :)
Author's Response: Okay, I have a keyboard with a malfunctioning M... eant him and much, obviously...
Author's Response: Meant! ARG!
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 07/08/08 07:44 PM · On: FOUR
the poor guy just can't catch a break! O, and I really liked Clara:(
Author's Response: ... He never doe, does he? :) I originally wrote Clara as a femme fatale shape shifter that was setting him up, but then having her innocent and getting her killed was just much meaner :)
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 07/08/08 06:20 PM · On: FOUR
Yep, another cliffy as promised. And just as evil as the one in the chapter before this. Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: We aim to please :) Next bit coming up soon...
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 07/08/08 06:06 PM · On: FOUR
oh crap another one..wow that was mean..lol..please update soon. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading... and being mean is just such fun..... :)
Reviewer: Aigredoux (Signed) · Date: 07/08/08 02:17 PM · On: FOUR
This is fantastic! I love how Dean's broken jaw is just a major contributing factor to circumstances and your characterisation of Dean rather than the focus of the story- you actually have a PLOT! And a really good one :) I love a bit of hurt!Dean, but I have to agree that hospital dramas are a bit boring. You walk the line perfectly. Also I love love LOVE when Dean got frustrated at Sam when he tried to tell his joke- I could totally empathise with both brothers at that point, you have a great balance between representing both sides of the argument. Sign of a great writer. Loves it! Write more soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm very flattered It's one of the things I love about the brother's relationship that when they argue you can usually see both of their points of view... and how the argument is unavoidable.It's not about one person being wrong but about two people spending so much time together that they're bound to collide every now and again. Who could help but identify with that?:)
Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 07/08/08 12:59 PM · On: FOUR
What - there's more! Great!! Good story. Poor Dean. I'm still chuckling over Timmy fell down the f'ing well!
Author's Response: Yup, there's more... for the Winchesters, isn't there always ;) Thanks for reading, very glad I could make you chuckle :)
Reviewer: Renate (Signed) · Date: 06/08/08 11:37 AM · On: THREE
Glad to help! I've tried the talking-without-moving-your-lips. It does sound weird. Think of episode of "Friends" with Chandler trapped in ATM vestibule with Jill Goodacre and how he tries to explain it to Monica who can't understand him, yet Joey gets it immediately. I'm enjoying this story very much!
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it! Actually it's more talking without moving your teeth... odd huh. But then I love tongue twisters:) Anybody know any English ones? All my favorites are in Icelandic...
Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 04/08/08 02:05 PM · On: THREE
Dean honey, you have those lips!! Not a problem!! No lady will mind not having the full use of your mouth!
Good story.
Author's Response: Hehe, yeah thatt's what I thought : ) Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 03/08/08 10:20 PM · On: THREE
Uh Oh..this can't be good for Dean..Great update..can't wait to read more..
Author's Response: yeah... it's really not... Thanks for reading, more soon :)
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 03/08/08 07:31 PM · On: THREE
ARGH!!! Evil cliffy! I surely hope you update soon because I'm dying to know what happens next.
Author's Response: Mwhaha, cliffies are the funnest! (hm, that a word?) More coming soon. It's another cliffie, though :)
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