Supernaturalville
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 19/08/08 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 16

As always with your stories, I was sad to see this come to an end. I loved how you handled the liason between Dean and Abby - it felt very right, and it was really nice that you had Dean a bit concerned about leaving at the end. I hardly think he is the typical love 'em and leave 'em jerk - it's really more of a necessity for him...

Loved seeing Badham get his, finally, and Abby being the town hero! Nice to see you bring Mike back in at the end too - such a well-plotted and written story is always much appreciated! I'm hoping you've got a few more hidden up your sleeve in addition to the new! I'm greedy that way!

Reviewer: Renate (Signed) · Date: 19/08/08 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 16

Excellent! I always enjoy reading your stories, Marquessa.

Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 19/08/08 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 8

Hi this is a great story can't believe it hasn't gotten more reviews. Stopped on this chapter 'cos it looked lonely without any review on it.

Badham is a great baddie, really want Dean to kick his backside. Was cheering Sam on in this one!

Reviewer: tomash (Signed) · Date: 19/08/08 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 16

Nice ending, love your stories and your writing.  K.

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 18/08/08 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 15

ARRGGGHHH!! What an amazingly evil cliffie! I loved the car chase! Great, great action in this one!

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 18/08/08 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 15

Holy crap! You really know how to write these cliffhangers - lol! Very intense chapter. Looking forward to more!


Author's Response:

Yeah,  torturing you readers is all part of the fun!  (lol)

Reviewer: tomash (Signed) · Date: 17/08/08 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 15

Wow, what a great chapter, loved it, on the edge of my seat, please update soon.  K.

Author's Response: Thanks,  Tomash!. 

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 12/08/08 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 13

Awesome action packed chapter! I can't wait to find out the significance of Dean's dream. I'm still hoping for Hedda to make an appearance and save the day in some way! I'm so, so glad you didn't kill of Beo - how sad is that - not so bad to kill Hedda... but never the dog! Poor Dean! His poor throat! And kicked in the ribs and torn stitches - that can't be good! Dying for the next chapter.....

Author's Response: Thanks for the review Lisa. ...I'm starting to feel a bit like a leper here....

Reviewer: tomash (Signed) · Date: 11/08/08 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 12

Great chapter, can't wait for an update on what Dean is going to do now.  K.

Author's Response: Always great to hear you're enjoying it---ml

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 11/08/08 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 12

Sorry, I have been a bit slow with my reviews lately. This story is awesome and I just wanted to let you know I'm enjoying every chapter of it! Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Your comments are always appreciated--thanks!--ml

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 11/08/08 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 12

You killed Hedda!!! OMG!! I was so looking forward to her stuffing Dean with awesome food - and she was making him a pie! Nothing will stop Dean from getting Badham now, though - yeah!!! AND you shot Beowolf! But you won't kill him, right? I get the awesome feeling that Hedda may be back as an angry spirit - and Dean has her ring, so she can pretty much be anywhere he is.... I LOVE this story!

Author's Response:

Tsk!   No no no--I didn't kill Hedda or shoot the dog---Badham did!  Hey--don't shoot the messenger lol

--thanks for reviewing--ml

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 08/08/08 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 11

This? "Dean grinned at his victory. It was irrelevant that he was still in serious pain,--irrelevant that he was weak, and irrelevant that he could barely walk from A to B let alone run--- What mattered was that he was once again leading the parade." PURE GENIUS!!

Another great chapter. I knew that Badham wasn't going to be gotten rid of so "easily".... I'm hoping that we are going to see Bobby and he's gonna be taking some names and kicking some...... Dean at the very least needs a smack upside his head. Course, can't stop the dear boy from being himself...

Reviewer: tomash (Signed) · Date: 08/08/08 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 11

Another great chapter, this is a great story.  Love it. K.

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 06/08/08 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 10

Awww Dean! He'll never learn. I can't help thinking sneaking out of the hospital is gonna be bad... I love that it looks like that they might actually come out ahead here.... of course, I don't trust Badham....

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 04/08/08 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 9

Aw, and they've earned it. glad, and a bit sad to see you've given them a break at last - you beat them up so nicely!

great stuff

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 04/08/08 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 9

Finally, I'm back! Another great chapter. I love how your stories seem like they might be wrapping up (Boo!) and then manage to have a twist! I wondered in the last chapter when Sam buried the box what was going to happen when the development got going.... I'm thinking they can make a case for making that old tree a case for preservation.... Poor Dean - can't talk?! Wow! You really do like to torture him.... ;)

I'll be keeping a better lookout for updates....

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 30/07/08 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 7

awesome update..I like Abby and I think Dean likes her to..lol..can't wait to read more..

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 30/07/08 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 7

Wow, what an intese chapter. I love the tension you are creating with this story. Possessed Hedda in the last update was just priceless. Now you have me on the edge of my seat with Dean hanging in the balance and Sam out there alone... Really enjoying this one :) 

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 28/07/08 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 6

Great chapter. As always your new characters are so fully realized that I totally enjoy their interactions with the boys... Loved possesssed Hedda - LOL!

Looking forward to the confrontation with Herne - I just know it's not gonna go off without a hitch... and somehow, I don't think we've seen the last of Badham....

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 28/07/08 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 6

Poor Gran..hopefully she will be okay when Herne is gone..The fireworks should be starting soon...can't wait to read more..thakns so much for writing. 

Reviewer: bernie (Signed) · Date: 28/07/08 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 6

Great story!  Looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 26/07/08 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 5

Glad Sam has escaped. Hopefully him and Dean will be back together soon so they can kick Badham's ass..Great update..thanks for writing.

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 26/07/08 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 4

Oh crap..The boys are in trouble..awesome update can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 25/07/08 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 4

OK... this is really great!!!

I waited until this chapter to review because I just wanted to read more of the story.OUTSTANDING job!!!

Your easy style and vivid words draw crystal clear pictures!!! AWESOME work!!

this Badham is really a stupid man- he's taken Sammy from Dean, he's threatened Sammy's life- wrong move , even if  Dean is hurt.

Herne the Hunter is not a god to be taken lightly-his power at protecting the woods of England is legendary.

Excellent timing and tenor- you are very  skilled in creating the atmosphere for susopense-OUTSTANDING!!

MORE PLEASE.

BRAVO!!!!



Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words.  I get bummed out thinking that since there are few reviews,I'm boring people--nice to get such a glowing review.--Mal

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 24/07/08 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 4

So not good! Dean's already hurt and now he has to defeat Herne and save Sammy! Good thing he has a triage nurse to help him... I'm  really, really hoping that Deam gets the chance to hand Badham his ass....

Author's Response: Thanks,  as always,  Lisa.  Keeps me wanting to write...ml

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