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Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 10/11/09 10:23 AM · On: Dean's Letter

good job!

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 10/11/09 10:22 AM · On: Sammy's Letter

I know i've reveiwed it aly but I wanna reveiw it again haha good job!
jess

Author's Response: hahaha thanks!!

Reviewer: naturalbornwinchester (Signed) · Date: 29/09/08 03:29 PM · On: Dean's Letter

same again amazing

Author's Response: Kinda pointless but thanx again. I just dont like to leave comments there without writing back so thanx!! It means a lot!

Reviewer: naturalbornwinchester (Signed) · Date: 29/09/08 03:29 PM · On: Sammy's Letter

love it can't put it simpler

Author's Response: Thanx!

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 29/09/08 02:52 PM · On: Dean's Letter

awww I liked dean's letter it was both sad and beautiful at the same time!! awesome job again Aly!
Jess!

Author's Response: Thanx!! That means a lot!

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 29/09/08 02:51 PM · On: Sammy's Letter

oo awesome job aly!!!
the letter was my fav part!
jess!

Author's Response: Thanx! (Hugs)

Reviewer: TozaBoma (Signed) · Date: 06/09/08 11:57 AM · On: Dean's Letter

A very good ending!
I've done the same for my mam - I suppose in some cultures it's a way of letting go. "When you write a letter to the dead, the dead can hear your thoughts."
I was never lucky enough to get a reply; I suppose things work differently in FanFic World, ;)
I liked the ending. Yeah, he was the smartass, and yeah, he was damned clever. And he knew how to love on so many levels - as I'm sure about a thousand women will attest to, LOL
Joking aside, this is a good, well-written short.
If I could make one piece of contructive criticism (and please don't take this the wrong way, I mean to help!): when I was writing years ago, I was warned about using the same description or word more than one in a few paragraphs. I never realised until it was pointed out, but it can sound more repetitive when you read it fast (sorry, mea culpa, I know). Just thought you should know - and this is by no means what anyone else has thought, just me.
Sorry to ramble on - enjoyed it lots. Thanks for posting!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and don't worry, I'm not gonna take ur constructive criticism the wrong way. thank u for helping and I'll try not to repeat so much!!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 22/07/08 05:30 PM · On: Dean's Letter

Oh wow, that was a beautifuly written story.

Author's Response: thank u very much! ur review means a lot!!

Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 17/07/08 11:53 PM · On: Dean's Letter

Whoa. Very emotional. The image of Sam holding the burning letter stuck with me. Fire has always been a big part of Winchester losses.
Sue

Author's Response: I'm glad u liked it!! thanx for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: cowboy (Signed) · Date: 17/07/08 10:57 PM · On: Dean's Letter

I want to say thank you for writing a story for the challenge. It means a lot to us that our sister is getting so much support from the other writers here, especially when we're often scattered so many miles apart. She'll enjoy reading these as soon as she's up to it, thanks again, Sam, Jake, and Nate

Author's Response: no problem I hope she feels better soon!!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 16/07/08 08:13 PM · On: Dean's Letter

13, I gotta say you really rose to the challenge. This is very well done and you can be proud of it. Good work, and great emotion. ;) Kel

Author's Response: thank you so much!!

Reviewer: dangermouse00 (Signed) · Date: 16/07/08 05:15 PM · On: Dean's Letter

Loved it!

Author's Response: thanx!

Reviewer: ladyinwhite (Signed) · Date: 16/07/08 04:24 PM · On: Dean's Letter

This story was very moving and touching. It makes me realize how much I miss Dean already. Your fic deserves an award!

Author's Response: OMG thank u so much!! I'm so glad u liked it!! (I miss Dean too)

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 16/07/08 02:27 PM · On: Dean's Letter

well.... Sammy's not the only one crying.......
This was really beautiful and truly Winchester to the end.....they never can tell each other how much the other meant.OUTSTANDING writing!!
It figures the amulet would be a last gift fromDean-always the protector-just gut wrentching-AWESOME job!!!!!
thank you for sharing this story.
BRAVO!!!!

Author's Response: thank you soo much it really means a lot to me!!

Reviewer: TozaBoma (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 10:38 PM · On: Sammy's Letter

Read the first chapter - nice work!
Can I ask, is the second chapter supposed to be empty? Is it for demon eyes only?
Just kidding - hope to read chapter 2 soon - must be an upload problem (happens to me all the time).
:)

Author's Response: haha yeah i dont know what it is, it shows up on mine, i'll try to fix it. thanx for reading whats there tho!!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 08:53 PM · On: Sammy's Letter

Hey 13, very very nice job. I loved the idea of Sam writing a letter to Dean. Great job, kiddo - Kel ;)

Reviewer: dangermouse00 (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 05:56 PM · On: Sammy's Letter

Ooooh this is interesting!!!!!!

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