Reviewer: Ryla (Signed) · Date: 23/01/11 08:25 PM · On: One of the Family
I was enjoying your story so much that for a moment I forgot that english isn't your native language! Great job! Thanks for your hard work on the story :D
Author's Response: Thank you! I wrote it such a long time ago, I think (or hope) I could do better now. Thanks for letting me know that one can still enjoy this story :)
Reviewer: TuckerCat (Signed) · Date: 31/08/08 09:04 PM · On: One of the Family
Made me smile, I really like your way of bringing the characters to life.
Author's Response: I'm happy to hear that! Thanks so much, that's a great compliment. Thanks for the stars as well.
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 17/07/08 11:39 PM · On: One of the Family
You put together a neat little hunt with Sam rescuing Dean and looking after Bobby, too. Score two for Dean's awesome little brother. And you managed to squeeze in some meaningful dialogue, too. "Your home is where your family is." Liked it! Sue
Author's Response: Thank you. Dean really has an awesome little brother. I'm thrilled you liked this!!
Reviewer: alwaysateen (Signed) · Date: 17/07/08 10:21 PM · On: One of the Family
Cool story! I love Bobby so much and he's part of the Winchester's family!
Author's Response: Well who doesn't love Bobby? ;) Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing!!
Reviewer: cowboy (Signed) · Date: 17/07/08 10:21 PM · On: One of the Family
Thank you for writing this for my sister, I really enjoyed reading it and I'm sure she will as well. There are four of us, but family is also where you find it, and everyone on this site has done so much to help her through this. Can't say how much we appreciate the concern and the effort that has gone into these challenge stories. Thanks again, Sam, Jake and Nate
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm so glad to hear you liked it. Your review and all the updates you've given about her condition are appreciated. I wish all the best for you all.
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 09:06 PM · On: One of the Family
Aww....wonderful Scan, just perfect and please, please please post this in the challenge...many of us went over the word limit *ahem* and it matters not a bit. ;) Kel
Author's Response: You asked so nicely that I did it ;) Now I'm waiting for some angry e-mails *chews fingernails* Seriously, thank you! Your review and encouragement mean a lot to me, Kel.
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 06:57 PM · On: One of the Family
A wonderful story, Scanilla. I loved every word, even if it does exceed the length for the challenge. I say the more the merrier. Many passages in your story really jumped out at me as excellent. Among my favorites were: He couldn't shake the nagging feeling even as he tried. Call it a Big Brother in Trouble alarm system or whatever, but Sam knew everything wasn't right. I loved the concept of an internal alarm system on Sam. The repartee with Bobby was fantastic. You really captured the essence of the characters wonderfully. Really well done, Scanilla. And here's a phrase I just learned today: Kiitos paljon! --cricket
Author's Response: It's always a pleasure to hear what parts of my story were someone's favourites. I appreciate your kind words very much. Thank you! And then you speak my mother tongue... You know how to make people smile :) Ole hyvä! (It means: You're welcome.)
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 04:59 PM · On: One of the Family
Aaahh... what a lovely sweet ending, I just love Bobby to bits. Some lovely Sam and Dean snark going on there, very funny. Beautiful banner. Jane
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I love Bobby too. Yeah, it is beautiful. Louy is great at making banners!
Reviewer: CatzEye (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 03:11 PM · On: One of the Family
Hi -- Good story, Well done! Isn't Bobby just awesome?!
Author's Response: Hey, I'm happy that you liked it. He totally is! Also, thanks for the shiny stars.
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 02:31 PM · On: One of the Family
Awww. Very nice. I like how they let Bobby know he's family.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Vanessa. It's much appreciated!
Reviewer: HauntMe42 (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 01:15 PM · On: One of the Family
Cool. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot!
Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 11:44 AM · On: One of the Family
That was a cute story. I just love those three!!
Author's Response: Yeah, me too. Thank you!
Reviewer: Winchester_Warriors (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 11:29 AM · On: One of the Family
:D Loved it! I'm going to be smiling about this one all day! Great job! ~A
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and stars!! It's great I managed to make you smile.
Reviewer: Pooka Bunny (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 10:50 AM · On: One of the Family
Scan, This was so wonderful! The discriptions and interactions between the boys and Bobby was phenomenal. I love the way they talk to eachother to the point where they pick on one another. Great plot line. Also, very good banner, Lou. Keep up the great work! ~Ashy/Pooka Bunny
Author's Response: Louy is so talented! Thanks a lot Ash, it's awesome to hear you liked this. And thanks for the stars too!!
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 10:02 AM · On: One of the Family
this was just great!!!!!!! I love the banter and facial moves you described- your vivid verbage created a perfect picture for me of the action. AWESOME job!!! Bobby + the Wincherter boy = 10+ you have captured their ways and their love for one another. Bobby is truly a part of their familyExcellenet piece of writing!! Thanks for sharing such a beautiful story!!!! BRAVO!!!!
Author's Response: I'm thrilled you enjoyed!! Thanks for these wonderful compliments and pretty stars :)
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 09:42 AM · On: One of the Family
That was a lovely story. Loved the banter between all of them,very funny.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very glad you liked it.
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