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Reviewer: Concho (Signed) · Date: 29/08/09 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 1

OMG

That was soooooo     funny !!!! lol

My mother & I had tears rolling down our faces with the reactions of all of them.

I feel for John having to do that "talk" with the boys. I love the way he wants to get out of the chat with Dean. :)

Sam is so innocent about girls & so cute about it.  

 

  

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/01/09 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 1

"Sammy looked like he’d just been asked to swim with sharks— and really, in the world of women, it was probably a good comparison."  OMG!  I laughed so hard!  *heavy sigh*

This was such a refreshing story!  I love the things both boys think about girls and sex.  John's worry and exasperation was a good laugh.  funny that he could empathize with Christie's dad.



Author's Response: thank you so much. it was something that popped into my head-- and i do love writing a day in the life of the winchester kids. i'm so glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: Skysalla (Signed) · Date: 16/11/08 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 1

Yes, Sam, I’ve hung out with them before.”“On purpose?”“Yes, on purpose.”“You and Dean are so weird.” Sam mumbled

LOL! This is ADORABLE Sammy is sooooo cute! 

"It’s not funny. I had to wash my face when I came home— twice"

He WOULD wash twice!

"No, kissing doesn’t make kids.”“Oh, good.” Dean sighed, relief evident in his voice. 

 OMD. 

 

This is absolutely amazing, I LOVE it. Soooooo cute, soooo perfect. WRITE MORE LIKE IT! 



Author's Response: thank you so much, i'm glad you enjoyed it. i love writing weechester fics, so if another idea comes to me, i'll do my best to get it up. 

Reviewer: Jenn (Signed) · Date: 15/11/08 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 1

OH MY GOODNESS, YOU'VE SLAIN ME!

Honestly, I've been clicking random fics around here because I'm still sorta new and don't know what to read, but I'm quickly learning most of the stuff I read here is awesome!

This was just...GAH, I love John Winchester.  I love John Winchester fics.  I really really love John fics, especially when John isn't a major buttface, and he's so perfectly JOHN here!  THANK YOU SO MUCH!

This was just so amazingly fabulous, perfectly told, and just plain hysterical! 

 

“Sam, stop calling your brother a jerk.”

“It’s the truth. And you told me I shouldn’t lie.”

John wanted to smack himself, Sam was way smarter than the average eight year old, and he always knew when to throw John’s rules right back at him.

“I also told you not to call your brother names.”

“You need to pick one rule and stick with it, Dad.”

I almost lost it here.  I seriously snorted so loud, I think I woke the dog. I could just envision Sam saying this *dies*

 

“Oh, I know about all that.”

“You do?”

“Yeah, girls lay eggs and they turn into kids.” Dean answered matter of factly.

And then you go and hit me with THAT one.  Are you TRYING to kill me?!  Because I seriously almost rolled off the bed.  Right off.  Into a hysterically laughing heap on the floor.  Broken arm?  Whatever, I'm too busy laughing my rear off!

 

So thank you.  For the late night laugh-fest.  Seriously, not only did I wake the dog, but I'm pretty sure my roommates had to have heard me too.  WHOOPS.

<3 Jenn 



Author's Response: hehe, thank you so much, i'm glad you enjoyed it, it was a blast to write. i love little scenes out of their lives growing up and i really love john, too. sigh, i still miss him. 

Reviewer: rahne (Signed) · Date: 10/10/08 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 1

Loved it! I like all your short stuff. You have a flair for these personalities, even as children. And anything with John is gravy. Thanks.

Reviewer: violettestars (Signed) · Date: 18/07/08 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 1

haha that was cute and funny.

Reviewer: cowboy (Signed) · Date: 17/07/08 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 1

I am having a very unusual moment of pity for my oldest brother Jake, who got the honor of explaining this particular topic to me.  Lol.  He had about as much luck as John.  Angela will find this sweetly hilarious, I did.  And as you know, I'm about to go hang out with girls "on purpose" - less than 72 hours to go now until I am no longer a single man.  "Sam's a goner" as you say - and no you may not tell Kate I said that as I'm happy about it.

Thank you so much for writing this for Angela,  Sam (and Jake and Nate)

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

“Yeah, she’s got one of those easy bake ovens. Sam’s a goner.".....LOL, great story Mags, funny, sweet and oh, so scary, at least to those of us with kids.... ;) Kel

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

This was such a cute story.  I found myself smiling and laughing through the whole thing.  

Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 1

Ahhh, WeeChesters. I love 'em. Great job Mags, the images of John explaining the great, huge concept of "Girls" to Sam and Dean had me chuckling all day long.

And as we all know, talking to children often leaves you with really hilarious, unexpected responses, and you captured that beautifully through your dialogue. That was really a great part of your story, how easily the conversation flowed between John and his boys.

And the final image ... of Christie explaining to her dad about her upcoming wedding -- that had me in stitches! 

she’s got one of those easy bake ovens. Sam’s a goner.” Dean nodded ...

I'm still laughing out loud at this :)

--cricket 

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 1

OK .... this was tooooo funny.

A birds and bees talk with Sammy and Dean and John. Just tooooo perfect- finally John gets his due...perfect.

This is a totally perfect package of Winchester- banter -child version, and John, trying to get out a sticky discussion.

AWESOME writing !!!!

Your  skillful writing makes the visuals crystal clear!!!

Thanks so much for this wonderful story!!

BRAVO!!!

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 1

oh Maggie, excellent! Girls lay eggs, OMG...

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 1

I loved it.

It was a very funny story.

I'm still laughing.

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 1

Loved it!  Loved it!  I actually would like to see more--I giggled my way through it.  John's reactions were so funny.  And I really laughed when Dean said girls lay eggs and they turn into kids.  PRICELESS!

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 1

Aww, this was great Maggie! I had to laugh out loud several times. Wouldn't want to be in John's shoes now - lol.

Thank you for sharing this with us and a big HELLO across the Ocean to Angela and her family!

Reviewer: TozaBoma (Signed) · Date: 14/07/08 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 1

I laughed out loud so many times during this - kids are so like kids, aren't they, LOL

Love the comments about the brothers always being together, how it's odd to have one not the other, John struggling with everything, Hunts being easier than girl-talks, and of course Angela getting star treatment.

Excellent fun! Thanks for posting!

 

Reviewer: nurple_girl (Signed) · Date: 14/07/08 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

Too cute!!!!!!!!!!!! But I would have figured at 12 that Dean would have been able to tell his dad a few things! LOL

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