Supernaturalville
Reviewer: TozaBoma (Signed) · Date: 14/07/08 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

The last two lines got me. 

This is excellent. 



Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you think so.  :)

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/07/08 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 1

Beautifully written!  It's like I'm in Dean's head.  I especially liked Dean's viewpoint of the sunrise and the peaceful acceptance he has that this is his last day of life.  Being with his family made dying acceptable. 

Author's Response: Thank you!  :)  I'm glad you like it.  All Dean wants is his family, it's both admiral and his downfall.

Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 14/07/08 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh wow, if this can second what on earth came first?

This is beautiful, I really like how if makes me feel reading it, almost as if I was sitting there watching the sunrise too. I like that Dean isn't phased by the thought of his death, just that of his family.

Thanks for posting.   Mary x

 



Author's Response: Thank you!   I'm glad you enjoyed it!  :)

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